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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aditi_2010

Just beautiful...I won't lie di...particularly this one shot had brought out some buried memories in me , memories I try hard to suppress. so it was a bitter sweet experience for e and am glad this was happy one. loved the story. ego is fatal to love. I am glad maan realized this before he could lose everything. dreams do come true but only for the lucky ones and rest are just left with few unsaid words...khamoshiyan😊

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Aditi, yeh baat sun ke ek purana song yaad aa gaya
Taarruf rog ho jaaye to usko bhoolnaa behtar
Taalluk bojh ban jaaye to usko todnaa achchha
Voh afsaana jise anjaam tak laana na ho mumkin

Usse ek khoobsoorat mod dekar chhodna achchha
Chalo ek baar phir se..
ajnabi ban jaaye hum dono
Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Haaye Avi😳... Maaradaala!!!

Its was just amazing
Loved it so so so very much
Just could relate to every part of it with the hope that
Dreams do come true!!!

It was so well penned down
Describing their inner turmoil , their longing for each other, the pain and then the happiness of togetherness😊


Haaye kuch aur Maaneet - Aman moments milte toh

Nevertheless it was superb yaara
Thanks for this wonderful story
😃

Probably the time is perfect now
Poorani yaadein taaza ho gayi😳 🥺
Feeling mixed emotions but ...


Loved it lots

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Edited by heytal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Avi nayi story ka pm nahi mila😭

Send me the link
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

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Aditi, yeh baat sun ke ek purana song yaad aa gaya
Taarruf rog ho jaaye to usko bhoolnaa behtar
Taalluk bojh ban jaaye to usko todnaa achchha
Voh afsaana jise anjaam tak laana na ho mumkin

Usse ek khoobsoorat mod dekar chhodna achchha
Chalo ek baar phir se..
ajnabi ban jaaye hum dono


And this just happens to be my all time favorite🤗


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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful os..
loved how u turned them actors..
oh he was so obsessed with the fame and success that he took her for granted..

loved geet's love for him...
so he left him and her success for his well being...beautiful..
they met again..collided and then he got to know what all sacrifices she done for him and his success...
lovely story

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

beautiful os..

loved how u turned them actors..
oh he was so obsessed with the fame and success that he took her for granted..

loved geet's love for him...
so he left him and her success for his well being...beautiful..
they met again..collided and then he got to know what all sacrifices she done for him and his success...
lovely story

Thanks!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



haila sheen , lakshu ne tujhe pm nahi bheji😲😛



Dost hi dost ke kaam ata hai 😆
ajao tum bhi tapao 😡😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome dear...
Very differnt but nice...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oooh girl ur OS gave me goosebumps.. Bechari geet and idiot maan.. But finally hapoy ending toh hona hi tha boss.. Fab hun
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurmaaneet

Oooh girl ur OS gave me goosebumps.. Bechari geet and idiot maan.. But finally hapoy ending toh hona hi tha boss.. Fab hun


Thanks😃

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