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Lonely.Cat

@Raina123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

lovely

I really enjoyed it

I love how you implemented reel and real into this story

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Sweta

@crazy_sweta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

hi avi di..

this was simply fantastic ..I loved ur concept abd the song u chose Here is perfect ...!!!

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lena

@lenageorge

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

superb os .it is 😳 a beautiful work of ursss 😃

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Ashdevil

@Ashdevil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Superb concept...
Kash atleast maaneet work together for their fans in real...

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

I read this through phone last night and it's so beautifully written. I ached for them. This Maan Geet reminded me of GC DD chemistry. 😳

As usual Maan's ego got in the way, darn it he's so selfish. And believing the rumours spread by useless people. *rolling eyes here* 😉 😛

And here Geet is selfless, she'd gone onto bring their son into this world fulfilling a dream of his whilst he continued to chase his own. ❤️

Hate that she'd done it all alone without the support of the man who'd gotten her pregnant and she still loved him after all this!

Meera is so funny, 😆 Oh my she's only 15...

I loved how she was giving the details of their reunion to Dev & Tara.

I cannot imagine MSK being on his knees begging for forgiveness... 🤣 At least he is apologizing, hope he made up for it. 😉

Brilliant One Shot. Absolutely loved it. ❤️

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Vinsh23

@Vinsh23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

loved it.. beautifully written..
maan's ego n geet's innocence..well written
awesome OS

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rashi_jain

@rashi_jain

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

lovely os

loved the concept
maaneet as actors...fall in love...mu...geet coming back for last shot...maaneet alone...maan being rude with geet...geet leaving suddenly...left mob...maan knowing abt baby...n then the truth!!!

awesome...i actually voted for ur os in the competition...it was the best according to me 👍🏼

👏👏👏

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@Endgame

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

so beautiful os read again n loved it

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

beautiful OS
loved it
maan and geet were costars
geet loves maan ..maan knew this
geet got replaced in the show with producers daughter she left the country without informing anyone
sam told maan that she left country with some rich man and maan was angry on geet
geet had to comeback to shot one episode otherwise she has to face liegual issues
they met again ...he came to know about aman their baby he now knew why she left him she didn't want to come between his amibition so she left him
maan and geet married and have another child and both are successul in thier profession
thanks for the lovely OS

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Jannat-Fictions
I read this through phone last night and it's so beautifully written. I ached for them. This Maan Geet reminded me of GC DD chemistry. 😳

As usual Maan's ego got in the way, darn it he's so selfish. And believing the rumours spread by useless people. *rolling eyes here* 😉 😛

And here Geet is selfless, she'd gone onto bring their son into this world fulfilling a dream of his whilst he continued to chase his own. ❤️

Hate that she'd done it all alone without the support of the man who'd gotten her pregnant and she still loved him after all this!

Meera is so funny, 😆 Oh my she's only 15...
I loved how she was giving the details of their reunion to Dev & Tara.

I cannot imagine MSK being on his knees begging for forgiveness... 🤣 At least he is apologizing, hope he made up for it. 😉

Brilliant One Shot. Absolutely loved it. ❤️