MG~ FF~The Jinx ~THREAD-8~ UPDATED Pt 78 / Pg 118 / 31st Dec.......

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The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.










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Index

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Thread - 3
Thread - 4

Thread - 5

Thread - 6
Thread - 7

Thread - 8

Part - 66

Part - 67

Part - 68

Part - 69

Part - 70

Part - 71

Part - 72

Part - 73

Part - 74

Part - 75

Part - 76

Part - 77

Part - 78


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Maan singh Khurana ...

Gurmeet Chaudhary in first scene of Geet

Geet singh ...

Armaan singh/ Manu

Yash singh Khurana..

Ruchi Khurana...

Savitri devi Khurana..

Anvesha Khurana...

Sameera/sam

Rano handa..

late Mahinder singh handa..

Dadrji..

Brijveer singh handa..

Tayaji/tayeeji

Aditya gill .

prem & heer ...

Spl member...

Jojo...



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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 65

Part - 66

It was early in d morning ,, filled with btful sunshine ,, few rays wr entering in d room throw window nd brightening d room ,,, there was a smile of content on both face ,, she was sleeping placing her face on his partial bare chest ,, his protective arms wr providing her security nd warmth,, a different fragrance refreshing her mind nd she urged to inhale that more nd more ,, it was very relaxing nd soothing feel ,, she smiled nd snuggled more , but d tightening around her nd mumbling sound awake her ... aammm ,, don't go .
She slowly opened her drowsy eyes nd find herself in d castle of arms glued to a taut warm body , she steered , but cdn't move ,, she lifted her face up nd looked at him ,, her breaths struck in her throat nd heart felt a somersault ,, mesmerized she forgot everything ,, a sweet smile crept on her lips ,, lifted her eyes nd started adoring those heart stealing features ,, messy hair , fine eyebrows , thick nd long lashes , sharp nose , m shaped lips with a black mole on lower lip ,, (she gulped) trimmed stubble ,, she was drinking that masculine beauty .

Maan opened his eyes slowly feeling a touch on her face nd find Geet's face very close to him ,, her warm breaths wr touching his face ,, d soft smile of her tingled his heart ,, he was staring at her ,, their eyes met nd both looked deep in each other eyes ,, lost in that trance he smiled nd placed his palm on her cheek ,, caressed her soft cheek with his thumb nd mumbled .

Maan: u wake up ,, how r u feeling now ?

Reality struck Geet nd her eyes widened in shock ,, she gasped sensing her closeness with him nd moved back with a jerk ,, even Maan too was in shock realising his closeness with Geet ... God !! I slept here whole night ,, damn on me ,, I didn't realise when I slept at night ? He got up from bed mumbling ..Sorry ,, i'm sorry ,, I didn't know when ...

Geet: how dare u ? OMG !!! U ,,, u wr here in my bed ,, why ? ( she was looking at him shocked nd next moment her eyes filled with anger nd tears )

Maan : S S, Sorry Geet ,, I sat near u to presse ur head nd to rub ur hand ,, u u wr in fever nd shivering hard .

Geet sniffed : but why u did that ,, did I say u to nurse me ? How do u think to share ...

Maan: Geet , plzz don't take wrong ,, I was in my limits ,, plzz trust me ,,, wo ,, wo ,, tumhari halat bahot kharab thi nd i was just trying to give u some relief ,, u wr in pain nd crying ,, plzz trust me Geet ,, I didn't cross...

Geet: to hell with ur limits mr Khurana ,, i'm bearing u nd u r taking advantages ,, kisne kaha tha aapko essa kuch kerne ko ,, mai dard mei thi to aapko kya ..? aap esse mere bed ,,, disgusting ,,,, ye limit cross kerna nahi hei to kya hei mr Khurana ,,?

Maan: Geet ,, mujhe nahi pata ki mujhe kab neend aa gai ? I swear I didn't think wrong for u ,, how cd I ?

Tears rolled down from Geet's eyes ,, she came out from her bed nd looked at herself ,, finding herself in proper dressed she took a sigh of relief covering herself with her dupatta but he was in her bed having her in his arms disturbed her mental balance .

Geet: I dn't want to listen anything ,, leave this place at once ,, I don't want ur help ,, u did a lot for us nd that was enough to burden me ,, plzz go from here .

Maan: Geet , plzz don't think wrong ,, trust me ,, ur condition was very bad nd I only helped u .

Geet's mind was clouded with past fleshes nd she cried out ,, again he crossed his limits , came close to her ,, GOD!!! He was with her in same bed ,, they wr sleeping gluing to each other ,, H ,, He held her in his arms ,, OMG!! No ,, she covered her mouth in shock .

Maan came close to her ,, he was feeling very miserable ,, he didn't do that knowingly ,, she was sick nd he only cared for her ,, Maan turned her holding her shoulders .

Maan: I swear Geet ,, I didn't do wrong ,, ur condition was not good nd I just keep u close to me ,, why r u thinking wrong ? I know my limitations ,, how cn I think low for u ?

Geet snapped his hands nd looked at him angrily ,, her eyes turned red ,, she sniffed nd spoke in a breaking voice .

Geet: don't show me ur innocence ,, I know u better than u ,, apni sharaft apne paas rakho aur jao yahan se, aap mere bare mei kitana low soch sakty hei ye batane ki jaroorat nahi hei ,, bahot ho gaya ,, mai marr bhi jau to bhi mujhe aapki madad nahi chaiye ,, jao yahan se .

Her words pireced his heart ,, how cd he leave her like this when he was d solo reason of her miseries ,, how cd he leave her nd Manu in pain when they belonge to him ,, she was angry nd nd he wd bear her anger , no he didn't do anything wrong nd he won't leave them .

Maan: No , I won't go Geet,, I know I didn't do wrong nd I won't leave u alone in this condition .

Geet : mujhe kuch nahi sunna ,, aapne jo kiya , uska ehasaan raha mujh per ,, ab aap jao aur hume humare haal per chod do ,, aapse pahale bhi mai jee rahi thi ,, aur aage bhi manage ker lungi ,, bas aab aur maharbaani nahi chahiye aapki ,, mujhse ab aur bardast nahi hoga .

Maan got angry at her stubbornness , she was not trusting him nd not trying to understand her weak condition ,, U&A Sam wr not there nd he cn't leave her alone .

Maan: stop this stubbornness Geet ,, u r not well nd I cn't leave u alone ,, I took that step coz u wr not well ,, I know u don't like me then why should I do that thing which wd hurt u ,, U&A r not here nd I won't leave u nd Manu alone .

Geet tumhe bura laga ,, I M sorry , lekin mai kahin nahi ja raha hu ,, jitna gussa kerna hei kar lo ,, mai sab sahane ko ready hu .

Geet: ye mera ghar hei , aapka KM nahi ,, aur ab mai wo Geet nahi hu jise aap ghar chodne ko kahe aur mai ser jhuka ker chup-chap maan lungi , samjhe ,, nahi chahiye aap mujhe yahan ,, koi nahi hei hum aapke ,, aap ja sakty hein .

Maan held her from shoulders nd gave a jerk with anger ,, in her anger she was taking everything wrong in d pretext of past .

Maan: nahi jaunga mei kahin, suna tumne ,, mat mano tum koi rishta ,, lekin jo rishta ban gaya usse tum bhaag bhi nahi sakti ho Geet ,,, lekin mai manna chahata hu , janna chahata hu aur ess rishty ko jeena chahata hu ? tum dono Maan singh Khurana ka hissa ho aur ess sacchai ko ab Bhagwaan bhi nahi badl sakta ,, sach ko samjho Geet.

Geet jo galti maine ki usse tum ku repeat ker rahi ho ..? jab manti ho ki mai galat tha to wahi galti tum ku kar rahi ho ,,? Maine apne gusse mei sab galat socha aur kiya lekin tum ku essa ker rahi ho ? agar tum hume apna nahi samjhti to ku kiya sab kuch bardast salo pahale ? ku nahi sab kaha tab ? Ku socha dad aur mom ke bare mei ? ye gussa tab ku nahi nikala mujh per ? Bolo .

Geet: mujhe kuch nahi sunna aur kahana ,, aap jao yahan se .

Maan : nahi jaunga to ,, sab kuch accept kerunga aur dad-mom ko bhi kaha du to kya karogi ,, bolo ? Geet mere upper waise bhi gunaho ka kafi bojh hei ,, kuch aur sahi ,, dad-mom se to nahi chupa sakti tum kuch ,, soch lo ,, mai agar ess ghar se bahar gaya to mom- dad ko phone kerke hi bahar kadam rakhunga .

Geet looked at him angrily ,, he was blackmailing her ,, putting conditions for her bcoz he knew very well that she won't hurt his parents ,, but she was not ready to bear him ,, her mind was spinning ,, frustrated she slump down on floor nd cried out.. Babaji ! Why u give me this cursed life ? Why u make me so helpless ?

I don't want this life ,, better u take this burden life ,, I don't want this life .

Maan: G e e t . ( his heart cried listening her words )


Precap ---- Geet's aloofness ...


Part - 67

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