MG~ FF~The Jinx - UPDATED Pt 10 / Pg 137 / 19th Sep .................

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The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.







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CS.

Maan singh Khurana ...

Gurmeet Chaudhary in first scene of Geet

Geet singh ...

Armaan singh/ Manu

Yash singh Khurana..

Ruchi Khurana...

Savitri devi Khurana..

Anvesha Khurana...

Sameera/sam

Rano handa..

late Mahinder singh handa..

Dadrji..

Brijveer singh handa..

Tayaji/tayeeji

Aditya gill .

prem & heer ...

Spl member...

Jojo...



Few more ...





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This is my another attempt to bimble in d dale of Maaneet of love ,
hope u all'll enjoy it nd gave me ur love nd support ignoring my silly mistakes coz i'm a novice.

I'll update it every weekend so plzz book mark
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The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.








Part - 1


She was entering in a corporate building's lift hall in a hurry nd collide with a strong frame ,, who held her at once from her shoulders , both uttered sorry at a time , he made her stand properly nd then both looked at each other , her expressions changed every passing sec nd he was also staring her confused , trying to recognized her ,, she came in sense when a passer by asked to give him way ,, both wr at d entrance ,, she said sorry again nd moved to go composing herself but next moment stopped at her track listening her name in a shocking voice... G e e t ,, excuse me .

The young man came lil close from back but she didn't turn nd stood there biting her lower lip with close eyes .

YM: if u don't mind , may I know ur name plz ?

Shocked she opened her eyes nd gulped .

Girl: sorry but why ?

YM: if i'm not wrong I saw u somewhere?

G: may be , so what is special in that , sorry i'm getting late .

Though her accent was changed but he recognised her shacking husky voice ,, he thought for a moment looked at her shocked .

YM: tum Geet ho na ? Yes i'm sure , tum Geet ho .

Geet closed her eyes in disappointment ,, he came in front of her in disbelief nd looked at her face.

YM: my God! Tumne mujhe pahachana nahi Geet? Esa kaise ho sakta hei ? mai Maan ,, pahachana ?

Geet garnered herself nd looked at him from top to toe ,, indeed he was Maan ... Maan singh Khurana ,, how cn she forgot him ,, never ,,, never in her whole life .

Geet: Oh!! Yeah , now I recognise u ,, yes , Maan ... Mr Maan singh Khurana ,, i'm surprised , I never hopped this , u here ?

Maan: i'm too very surprised ,, u changed , changed a lot but I recognised ur voice nd eyes ,, lekin tumne mujhe kaise nahi pahachana ?

Geet: wo theek se nahi dekha na , jaldi mei thi .

She glanced at her watch nd gave a faint smile to him ,,, he gave her a quick look ,, she was in formal , white shirt , baize trouser , open hair , minimal make up nd a brown lather office bag hanging on her shoulder ,, over all she was looking very smart .

Maan: do u work here ?

Geet: haan , wo i'm getting late .

Maan: OK , no prob , I also have my meeting in this building , I forgot d floor so came here to check on d board , wait a min Geet , let me check .

Geet: OK , she replied helplessly.

Maan checked d floor of d company's office nd came near her with a smile ,,,Geet was surprised seeing him smiling ,, he was smiling at her ,, Wonderful!

Maan: 18th floor , nd urs ?

Geet: 25th .

Maan: no prob then ,, ek sath chalty hein ,, come.

Geet forcefully smiled at him nd nodded ,, both came in lift corridor , nd entered in a lift ,, she pressed d buttons nd stood aside quietly ,, Maan was continuously staring at her which make her uneasy .

Maan: Geet if u don't mind I want to talk u , shell we meet ,, it's urgent ,, plzz.

Geet felt a pit in her tummy nd thought , why he wanted to talk me ? confused she looked at him .

Geet: why ?

Maan: plzz , now u r getting late for ur work nd I have my meeting ,, give me ur number , i'll call u .

Geet bumbled nd hesitate to give her number to him ,, he felt her uneasiness nd understood that she was not willing to talk him , but his heart was forcing him to stop her nd to talk her ,, she was in front of him after yrs ,, his floor came nd lift stopped but he didn't move ,, Geet looked at him .

Geet: ur floor .

Maan: I know but i'm waiting for ur number .

Geet: why do u want to talk ?

Maan: Geet i'm meeting with u after yrs , we r not strangers , why this indifference

Geet didn't find any reason to avoid him ,, after all she was here bcoz of his father's help .

Geet: OK , feed .

She told her number nd he typed that in his mobile nd gave a ring to check ,, Geet's phone buzzed ,, he smiled conformed ,, Geet's floor come nd she moved out with a fake smile .

Maan: i'll call u after finishing my meeting , bye .

Geet: OK , bye .

After closing d lift door Geet left a deep sigh ,, there wr lines of worries in her forehead ,, she moved towards her office ,, entered in her big office , wishing some of her fellow employees she smartly walked in her cubic nd settled down .

Precap - lunch break ... ..



Part - 2




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congrats babie for the new ff


iam so happy
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🤗 To all my friends... 🤗

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Congrats on new ss...interesting...loved it
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babie kaha ho?

ab tho baat karo?😭
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