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will maan express his desires tht he wants to marry only geet...
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nice part maan was happy 2 spend time wit manu nd geet bt had 2 maintain distance
rashi cald geet 2 join 4 annie's baby showering function bt geet made excuse nd maan was hurt
maan was misnng geet nd manu badly nd gals were drooling on him
when his family startd 2 talk abt marriage he got angry nd said dat he doesnt want 2 marry nw
annie taunted him though it hurtd him bt it was reality
waitng 4 d nxt part update soon😃
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wow lovely emotional update..te way my maan have to leave for uk and wen geet heard abt name showering ceremony she winched thinking abt her baby ki showering was lovely emotional..te way my maan missing his angels and he present physically but his soul was roaming around his angels was lovely..te way my maan heart cried seeing te way anni ki baby getting all te love, thinking his baby his manu didt get anything from him was lovely emotional..i love te update
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Maan wants Geet to become a part of the family but Geet is unwilling.
Annie is so insensitive.
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nice ud
day by day maan so much involving around geet manu life
its becoming impossible fr him to go alone at baby shower
at UK
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HAI BABBIE

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busy days ... family functions and alll
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part..
Maan feeling Geet's pain witnessing Annie's happiness..
Howz ur baby now ??
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maaan back to his house
keeping distance yet close by heart with manu n geet
maan to anies baby shower
he is thinking about geet
n falling again in guilt..
all talking about maans marriage n he is shocked
will he say his sin n confess his deeds..
awesome part...

how is ur son now..tc..
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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 75



Part - 76


" There comes a time when you realise you r on your own . And you just have to Suck it up; no whining , no complaining and no expecting . Because in the end Disappointment is envitable."

Maan didn't come out from his room ,, Yash was a doting father ,, he loves his children nd family ,, though he was deeply hurt with Maan's previous misdeeds, but he witnessed Maan repenting for that ,, he saw his hard work nd care for him after that incident ,, now Maan was that which he wanted to be ,, a discipline nd organise person ,, Maan's afforts to bring back Geet nd care for her nd Manu showed that he was realising his mistakes ,, but somewhere his past still hurting him nd today Annie's remark refreshed his wounds .

After leaving Maan from there d atmosphere became heavy nd Yash diverted d topic ,, he excused after few min nd came in Maan's room nd his doubt was right ,, Maan was standing in d balcony nd his face was showing his inner turmoil ,, he came close to Maan nd placed his hand on his shoulder ,, Maan startled withthat sudden touch nd turned his face to look behind ,, finding his dad there he composed himself .

Maan: Dad aap yahan,, mujhe bula lete.

Yash : ku mai tumhare paas nahi aa sakta kya.?

Maan: essa nahi hei Dad ,, u have every right on me nd cn come to me any time .

Yash: why r u so upset ? u know Annie's nature , she never thought before speaking .

Maan: it's OK Dad , but she was right at her place , I hurt u nd all .

Yash: Maan this is life nd we have to face many things , if we sit sulking nd regretting on one thing then how u move forward to face more ,, prob comes nd we have to solve them nd learn from them ,, u did a mistake but learn from that , try to mend torn relations ,, u changed ur outlook nd learn responsibilities ,, I m impressed with ur efforts Maan ,, u r successful in businessman now nd learning more ,, with d passing time u'll learn more nd became more responsible .

Maan if u don't want , I won't talk about ur marriage , but we have to one day ,, try to forget about that past , that was over long back , u cn't ruin ur present nd future for that mistake which u had done in ur nescience ,, I m happy that u realized nd changed ur way of life ,, we'll talk when u feel comfortable beta ,, don't feel bad nd change ur mood .

Maan : thanks dad ,, u r such a great Dad ,, i'm really very sorry to hurt u . (Maan's heart sank thinking that he was going to hurt his dad again )

Yash: Maan i'm a father nd want my children happy nd away from all worries nd prob ,, parents' happiness lies in their children's happiness .

Maan: r u not angry with me dad?

Yash : I was Maan , but not now .

Maan: thanku dad nd love u ( Maan was overwhelmed nd hugged his dad ,, his eyes wr wet nd heart was crying thinking what had happened when his nd Geet's reality hit his dad,, how he wd face his dad when he came to know about Manu ,, Yash patted his back lovingly )

Yash went but his conversation with his dad put him in more guilt ,, he cursed himself for giving all pain nd breaking their dreams ,, he was curse for all , hurting those ppl who loves him nd cares for him ,,, kya karu mei ,, kahan jau..?

Seeing his Dad's love nd care he remembered Manu nd his love nd care for him ,, how he cd leave him to suffer without any mistake when his dad was showering love on him after his misdeeds .

Maan (ST): dad when u come to know my d reality of my heinous act nd how badly I treated ur loving Geet u'll kill me with ur bare hands ... mai kaise aap sabka viswaas aur dil tod du ? kya karu mein ? na Geet aur manu se dur raha sakta hu aur na aap sab ko dukh de sakta hun ,, kab tak apne gunah ka bojh dhona padega ? kab tak ye sach chupa sakunga ? Geet bhi to mera sath nahi de rahi .

There was no end of his grief ,, next day at BF table Maan called manu nd started talking to him ,, d cute talk with his cutie soothe his aching heart ,, he beamed with happiness when Manu said that he was missing him nd complained that mommy didn't allow him to play cricket ,, it was raining there ,, manu was going on nd on nd Maan was smiling nd replying ,, DM nd Rashi noticed d change in Maan .. last night he was very disturbed nd didn't come out nd talk to anyone but now he was talking nd smiling ,, though they too enjoy their talk with Manu but Maan's happiness nd d brightness was diff ,, their talk was showing that Manu nd Maan wr deeply attached .

DM knew that Maan was not like that but after meeting with Geet nd Manu he change completely ,, Maan's care for manu alert her experienced mind not even DM , Rashi too felt that Maan's care nd affection for Manu was increasing day by day ,, she knew that he lived in his own place but with his talks she realised that he spent most of his spare time with Manu nd Geet ,, being an experienced lady nd a mother her mind alerted her .

Maan nd Geet wr young nd living away from family in diff culture ,, spent time together ,, both wr heart broken nd alone ,, Maan's long talk with Manu nd asking about Geet making her restless ,, both d ladies started eying on him ,, though Maan talked to Manu at mrng nd eve nd didn't talk to Geet which relived them but this closeness alert them .

Next day after BF all got busy in their respective work ,, Arjun went to his office , Yash nd Maan got busy in their lappy nd calls ,, DM was sitting in lawn with Annie nd her MIL ,, Rashi went to near Maan nd Yash .

Rashi: Maan beta ,when r u coming india ? u r in US from last 2 months , what more u want to learn ?

Maan: mom , we r going to start construction very soon , there r many things to see nd learn ,, d work style is very diff here nd i'm enjoying to work with this Co.

Rashi: I m asking when u r planning to come back ,, ur dad is handling d business alone there , now u have to come soon .

Maan face saddened nd tummy felt a churn at d talk of returning back ,, he looked at Yash nd then to Rashi . ( Rashi noticed his restlessness )

Maan : I know mom dad is alone nd have work load , but after starting d work i'll be back .

Yash talk on proj nd Maan gave him all d report ,, he gave him on phone too time to time .

Yash: OK , means u have to stay there for more than a month .

Maan: hope so dad .

Rashi: u seems very comfortable here Maan ? changed a lot .

Yash : yeah ,, ur mom is right here Maan ,, good to see u happy beta , but come soon , wr r missing u .

Maan: sure dad .( Maan replied with a faint smile but his eyes filled with pain thinking about separation from Manu nd Geet ,, he was unaware that his mom was reading all his emotions )


Precap ---- ripples in lives ...


Part - 77



sorry for mistakes ...


Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago

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