MG~ FF~The Jinx ~THREAD-4~ UPDATED Pt 36 / Pg 120/ 9th Nov .......

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The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.










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Index

Thread - 1

Thread - 2



Thread - 3
Thread - 4
Part - 28

Part - 29

Part 30
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4210147/mg-ff-the-jinx-thread-4-updated-pt-36-pg-120-9th-nov?pn=31

Part - 31

Part - 32

Part - 33

Part -34

Part - 35

Part - 36


















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CS.

Maan singh Khurana ...

Gurmeet Chaudhary in first scene of Geet

Geet singh ...

Armaan singh/ Manu

Yash singh Khurana..

Ruchi Khurana...

Savitri devi Khurana..

Anvesha Khurana...

Sameera/sam

Rano handa..

late Mahinder singh handa..

Dadrji..

Brijveer singh handa..

Tayaji/tayeeji

Aditya gill .

prem & heer ...

Spl member...

Jojo...



Few more ...











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CONGRATS FOR THE NEW THREAD👏
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The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.


Part - 27
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4199686/mg-ff-the-jinx-thread-3-updated-pt-27-pg-120-30th-oct


Part - 28

Maan's behaviour was confusing for Geet but here Dadima's too made her more confused ,, what happened to them in her absence ? What made them to change their behaviour towards her ? Kuch to hua hei otherwise Dadima never bear her this much close to her family ,,, Geet took Manu's bottled to clean that nd went to kitchen ,, Rashi complaint Maan that he didn't inform her before nd guest room was not ready to live but Maan gave a smile to her nd said that there was no need of guest room ,, d room for Geet nd Manu was ready ,, Maan took sleeping Manu to d room nd adjusted him on bed carefully ,, Rashi followed him nd she was shocked seeing d room ,,she looked all around ,, when he arranged this room ?

Rashi: Maan ye kab hua? Kisne kiya ?

Maan; bas ho gaya ,, accha hei ?

Rashi: superb ,, u did it ? I cn't believe this Maan.

Maan gave a sheepish smile to her nd gave a side hug to her ,, she caressed her cheek lovingly seeing a diff side of Maan .

Geet came in living room took her hand bag nd purse ,, she looked around for Maan nd Manu ,, she went towards her room but Ruchi stopped her from back.

Rashi : Geet beta kahan ja rahi ho ?

Geet: wo room mei , manu kahan hein?

Rashi : wo dusre room mei hei ,, hume to pata nahi tha tumhare aane ka to room ready nahi kiya ,, tumhare liye dusra room hei , chalo mei dikhati hu.

Geet: koi nahi aunty mei ker lungi theek .

Rashi : nahi beta tum ku ? aur abhi thoda rest karo chalo .

Geet reluctantly followed Rashi nd reached in d room which was near Maan's ,, that was a bful room nd Manu was sleeping on d bed ,, Maan was sitting there on a comfy sofa ,, Rashi left her there nd went to her room saying Geet to take rest nd she wd call her for BF .

Geet kept her bag on sofa nd looked around adoring d room but her heart didn't want to accept these special treatment ,, she opened d bag nd took out some Manu's things , she removed his shoes n socks ,, then his jacket nd jeans ,, Maan was watching her.

Maan: Geet baad mei ker lena , abhi use sone do aur khud bhi rest kero .

Geet: wo ,, he need change ,, sone mei comfy nahi hoga esse aur uska diaper bhi change kerna hei ,, she removed his D***** nd made him wore his soft comfy pajama then covered him .

Geet: I think aap ko bhi rest kerna chahiye Mr Khurana .

Maan: humm .

He got up nd moved to go but Geet's words stopped him .

Geet: Mr Khurana , plzz don't give us any spl treatment ,, I was here for many yrs , used to nd confortable in that life ,, i'm feeling odd , like i'm in a strange place ,, I know everything nd I cn manage .

Maan felt a blow on his heart with this indifference but she was saying that coz she faced that ,, she lived an isolated life bcoz of him ,, he looked painfully at her.

Maan: Geet koi spl treatment nahi hei ,, tum to aana hi nahi chahati thi , maine tumse jidd ki aane ki to tumhari aur manu ki care bhi meri responsibility hei ,, esse apna ghar nahi samjha esiliye to dusri jagah rahane ka socha , lekib ab tum meri meri request per yahan ho , meri guest ho aur manu yahan pahali baar aaya hei to usse enjoy kerne do .

Geet: guest aaj hun ,lekin kabhi burden bhi thi , uss ehasaas ko to nahi bhool sakti na ,, aur agar mai waise raha sakti hu to mera beta bhi raha sakta hei , hume esse alishaan life ki aadat nahi hei ,, mai janti hun ye sab aapne kiya hei ,, warna aapko acche se pata hei ki mera room kaun sa hei ? Aap usse bhi humare liye clean kerva sakty thy , ya ab wo bhi mera nahi raha ,, aur mere aur Manu key yahan aap logo ke beech rahane se Dadima ko bura lag sakta hei .

Maan: no Geet ,essa nahi hei Geet , tumhara room as it is hei , untouched aur Manu yahan kuch din ke liye hei , jab tumne usse hum sabko ek family ki tarah se intro karaya hei to usse family ke beech mei rahane bhi do na ,, plzz

Geet mai janta hun tum essa ku kaha rahi ho ,, lekin waqt ke sath bahot kuch badalta bhi hei na ,, tum bhi to kitna badal gai ho to ek chota sa change ye bhi accept ker lo hum sab ke liye , aur rahi baat Dadima ki to jab Maan singh Khurana badal sakta hei to Dadima kun ahi.

Geet: aur ess drastic change ki wajah ?

Maan: na pucho to jyada accha hei Geet ,, tumhe ess ghar se dur meri wajha se jana pada , ye baat Dad ne kahi nahi lekin mahasoos bahot ki aur mai wo galti sudharna chahata hun .

Geet: lekin ab to wo possible nahi ,, mai wapas yahan nahi aaungi .

Maan: janta hun bahot dur chali gai ho lekin etna favour bhi kaafi hei ki tum kuch din yahan rahogi hum sabke sath ,, tumhari parchai hi yahan pad gai yahi Dad ki khushi ke liye kaafi hei aur mere liye unki kushi ,, baton ke liye kafft time hei , abhi thoda rest ker lo nd thanks a lot for coming .

Maan left from there living a confused Geet ,, lost in her thoughts she slide near Manu nd tried to get some sleep ,, she was tired wanted a good nap ,, manu clung to her nd both slept .

Maan too change nd lie-down to take some rest ,, he was not going to KC nd decided to spend time with Manu nd work from home ,, he knew that he had to face Geet's rejection at many places but he was agree to face all her wroth but he was determined to give her nd Manu all d family bonding in this short span of time ,, he remembered his Dad's smile after seeing nd hugging Geet , today he smiled from his heart nd that cutie Manu filled this whole KM with happiness ,, he closed his eyes to get some peaceful sleep .


Precap --- A beautiful morning ...


Part - 29



Sorry for mistakes ...


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