MG ss 'i will make u my destiny' PART 2 ON 9 april - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
geet widow hai?

interesting prologue...


loved it...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Nice start
Geet is married
Waiting for the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
congrats for the new one.
interesting concept...
Update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 1. AND IT BEGINS...



Anvesha looked at Geet carefully. She was wearing a white saari, having no jewelry on her, no sindoor, no mangalsutre. How can that be possible.? Here in India specially in ROYAL PALACES it's a rule to wear sindoor & mangalsutra for a married woman. No matter how much modern you are you can't possibly avoid this rule. Anvesha looked at Geet in confusion. Then the truth dawned upon her. Her eyes got widened in shock. She looked at Maharani with questioning eyes. Maharani sadly smiled at Anvesha and shifted her gaze towards the big portraits which was hanging on wall having garlands on them.


One has the charismatic photo of a middle-aged man. He was clad in royal attire. He had a great personality. Even the photo couldn't hide the charm of the old man..."SHANKAR SINGH RATHORE(1940-2008)"... was written in bold golden letters & was the name which was adoring the portrait. Anvesha knew it was the portrait of the MAHARAJA OF JAIGARH meaning Maharani's husband. She then shifted her gaze towards the next picture. She knew who it was & her thinking didn't betray her. It was the portrait of AMAR SING RATHORE(1980-2008). He has the same charm & personality
of his grandfather, may be even more. But what shocked was the year beside the names of this Royal families men. Both had 2008. meaning they died in the same year what could have happened.? And Amar was only 28 when he died. Anvesha again looked at Geet.She is so young, maximum 25 years and she is a widow at this year of her life.


All this while Maan was looking at Geet like he has never seen a girl. He was basically observing her. He has never thought that he will see a confident girl in this part of the country. He always thought that village girl were weak, hiding behind the male family members of the family, agreeing to each decision they make, obeying each rule they establish. It was not like he didn't meet any female with strong personality. But seeing a girl clad in a saare glaring him was definitely a little bit shocking. Geet was feeling very uncomfortable under the gaze of this ill-cultured person who gapes at a girl like he is going to eat her.


Maharani coughed and broke the awkward silence which had taken the room in a new atmosphere. Anvesha looked at Maharani sadly & smiled politely at her. Maharani's movement broke Maan's trance & he looked down immediately. Maan chide himself for looking at any girl like that (self-thought) "what the hell is wrong with you Maan, aise koi dekhta hay kya? What will they think?" Maan calms himself & again looked up. His eyes instantly meet Geet's. She was shooting daggers at Maan.Maan instantly looked down.

Maan again repeated himself saying "ap logo ne Dev ko kaha chupaya hai...??????????'


Geet was amused by the audacity this person have. First he stares at her that & now out of nowhere he remembers his brother.Is he real or what? Geet looked at Maan sternly saying " dev koi chote bacche nahi hai...k hum usse chupayenge..."


Maan was shocked with Geet's reply. How dare she talk with him like that ? No one, absolutely no one speaks with him with that attitude. Maan stares at Geet with the meanest look on his face. Anvesha & Maharani looked at Maan & Geet with utmost interest. It was like it was clash of the titans.

Before making it too complicated Maharani held geet's hand saying.." geet beta shant ho jaiye...hum baath karte hai..."


Geet nodeed slightly at Mahrani & moved back to seat on the opposite sofa. Maharani gave a genuine smile to Maan & Anvesha.


Maharani " Dev yehi hai...woh chahte the hum apse pehle baat karle..."


Maan " ap pehle usse bulaiye...mujhe usse baat karni..."


Maharani " hum samajte te hai. par ghabraiye maat. woh thik hai. woh chahte hai k hum apse pehle sari baat bol de. woh baat hai ki Dev humari poti nandini se pyar karte hai . nandini bhi unse pyar karti hai. aur hum yeh sab jante hai.
hume iss rishte se koi problem nahi hai..."


Maan "agar ap logo ko problem nahi toh iska matlab yeh nahi k ..."


Maan was cut Off by Anvesha who held his hand tightly & was looking at him with murderous eyes. Maan looked at Anvehsa confusingly. He just wants to make sure that evrything is right here. These people are good enough for them in every way. Because he have a doubt if they genuine then why Dev would hide something like this from them.
& flee from house. They are a very modern family and they have no problem in love marriages,so what's reason...



Geet looked Maan in confusion saying " ap kuch keh rahe the..."


Anjali "han...woh humme vhi iss rishte se koi prblm naahi hai..."


Maan was shocked with this. How can his di take any decision so easily...


Maan " par di ap aise kaise...han kar sakti hai..we don't know anything about them..."


Geet " excuse me...apko kya hum...aire gaire lagte hai..."


With tht Maan & Geet started shooting daggers at each other through eyes...causing Anvesha & Maharani to sigh.




Link to my another ss on Maaneet


"remember,we broke up?"


Edited by Tarina.R.Totini - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Awesome update. Both maan n geet are ready to fight with each other.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26

wow lovely emotional omg update..te way anni ki silent eye talk with maharani and she came to know geet is widow of amar was lovely emotional..te way my maan lost in his geet and geet glare opps sherni was lovely cute..te way my maaneet ki interaction making maharani and anni gulp at them was lovely..i love te update so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Superb part
Geet a widow
Maaneet ka takkar😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
nice start. Fight in first meeting itself. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Nice update
Geet ka pati ab nahi raha!
Maan geet ko dekhta hi rehta hai...
Dev ko nandini se shaadi karni hai...
Maan geet ki ladai...awesome
Plz add me in your pm list
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
interesting start...
good one...
will look for more in next update...
hope anger will go away between Maan and Geet..

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