MG SS 'remember,we broke up?' NOTE on 48

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I don't know what came over me that I am starting a SS. Just want to write I guess. This will be a short one. Not more than 5-6 parts. I hope you guy's will appreciate this. Please like & comment.



"REMEMBER, WE BROKE UP?"




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"Pinky for the last time I am telling you, I don't want to go." Pinky sighed telling "but why geet??...tell me one good reason that is stopping you from going." Geet sighed shaking her head " you know na pinky, then why are you..." Pinky cut her in between saying "know what Geet...for heavens sake..Geetu . It's been three months since your break-up. He must be with her 4th gf after you." Geet sat on her bed on the verge of bursting out "please pinky..don't ." Pinky sighed sadly taking a seat against geet. She took geet into her arms seeing her best friend breaking down "please geetu..look m sorry. I didn't mean in that way. But you need to move forward. It's been months since you smiled your whole heart. You just go to office & come back. No party, no friends, nothing at all. That's not my geetu. She used to enjoy even every small part of her life . I want my lively geetu back. " Geet nodded wiping her tears " I know pinky.. I m trying. It's just it hurts so much. " Pinky wiped the remaining tears " I know baby.. that's y I want to go out on a vacation, just us. Nothing to make u remember him. Pls geetu for me say yes." Geet smiled at her ever enthusiastic friend " fine, but I am picking up the place. " Pinky jumped in happiness & hugged Geet saying "oh geetu, no problem as you wish. We'l go wherever you want. " Geet smiled thinking " may be I'l find my solace in this time, may be I'l get out of this mess, out of his memories..may be..just may be.."







Adi cleared his throat before approaching his over angry friend who was now dangerously kicking the punching bag in a pure rage. Only one person was there who could calm his anger. He sighed sadly thinking now that person was not in their life. Rahul pushed Adi ahead breaking him from his thoughts saying "ja na...y r u standing still.." Adi gritted his teeth saying "if u r so eager u go..." Rahul smirked saying "remember u lost the bet, so u r the one to suffer his warth..now go.." Saying this Rahul pushed Adi into the room who directly landed on the Angry Young Man. Both of them fell with a thud. "what the hell... Adi what the hell r u doing ?? ..get up ...will u??" Adi smiled awkwardly pulling himself up from him saying "sorry maan...here let me help you.." Adi pulled Maan & steadied him. Maan skeptically looked at Adi saying " what r u doing here at this time??" Adi scratched his head in nervousness saying " who.. I needed to talk to you" Maan nodded & resumed his kick-boxing practice. Adi shot a quick prayer to babaji & stated in a single sentence " me & rahul r planning to go goon a vacation & we want u to come with us & we want u to come along." Maan stopped at Adi's unbelievable speed of speaking. It made him remember someone. He shook his head blocking the memories which will only make his heart bleed & stated in a stern voice"will u like to say in a human speed??" Adi sighed & said in a normal " me&rahul r planning to gogoona vacation&we want uto comewith us& wewant uto come along." Maan sighed thinking "may be be I need this break...may be I will be able to come out of the past...of her" Adi looked at Maan in deep thought nd cleared his throat stating "ahem..so Maan what say?? It'l be a good change.." Maan snapped out of his thoughts saying "ok..count me in. inform me the time & place... I'l be there.." Adi smiled & patted Maan's back saying " okk.. I promise..u won't regret it.." Maan gave a small nod & left from there to go back to his mansion.





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Posted: 11 years ago
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INDEX

PART 1. WE MEET AGAIN.(PG-03)

PART 2. REMEMBER YOU.(PG-06)

TEASER (PG-09)

PART 3. PLANNING.(PG-11)

TEASER (PG-14)

PART 4.TAKING A STEP.(PG-15)

TEASER (PG-19)

PART 5.SOME TRUTH.(PG-21)

NOTE (PG-26)

PART 6.GUILTY.(PG-29)

PART 7.A CHANCE??. (PG-33)

PART 8.WOUNDS.(PG-38)

Edited by Tarina.R.Totini - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting part
loved it

maan and geet broke up
pinky convinced geet to come with her to vacation on other side maan friends convinced him to come with them to vacation
eagerly waiting for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting part
maaneet friends planed vocation separately their are forced accepted maaneet
waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for new start ..
nice update
waiting for next ...
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Interesting...



But did they broke up with with other or with some one else...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats on ur first SS! Awesum start! well written, update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice.
Waiting to know who broke their heart.
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wow lovely start..my maaneet was sad abt they break up and they friends planning for a trip to cheer them was lovely ...is my maaneet break up or they broke up with some one and will meet in te trip?..me eagerly waiting...i love te track..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrates for writing
interesting
maan n geet broke up
continue soon

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