MG ss 'i will make u my destiny' PART 2 ON 9 april

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i am reopening this ss now this time i promise i will finish this.now again here it goes...



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Prolouge



Today he was ferocious...


He the MAAN SINGH KHURANA...owner of a International company named KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS...The youngest most
successful businessman of the world...the heart throb of millions and millions of girls...was insulted today...
tht too becouse of his younger brother....DEV KHURANA....


ANVESHA KHURANA (AK/di) the darling eldest sister of her two yonger khurana brothers looked at Maan...who was just sitting next 2 her in a Mercedes...
thy were on their way 2 bring bck Dev...Maan was literally fuming in anger...It
was like if his anger lasts any more second...he'll just burst in flames...


AK "maan..calm down ...tum itne gussa kyun ho rahe ho...?"


Maan glared at his ovr-sweet nd calm di saying... "you are asking me that..."


AK sighed sying "Maan hum jante hai jo bhi hua...woh accha nahi hua par..."


Maan shot her an angry glare saying "par kya di...agr dev sagai krni hi nahi thi toh fir rishte k liye haa kyun kia tha..."


Maan took a envelope 4m his pocket nd waved it in front of his di...saying " sagai ki raat yeh khat chor k chala gaya...
really pathetic...agr kisi aur se pyar tha toh he could have jst told us...aisi bachkani harkat krne ki kya zarurat thi...
u know dii...how terrible i was feeling jab mujhe yeh baat naintara k dad se kehn para...tht too on the engagement venue k
mera bhai bhag gaya...god...i was feeling so ashamed...tht too because of dev ek baar woh mere hath lag jaye...
i'l jst...huh ...pehli baar mera saaar juka...for the 1st time in my life..."



AK murmered under her breath " ap jab faisla sunate ho tab kisi ki majal hai k ap se nah bole..."


Maan " apne kuch kaha di...?"


AK " han woh...par dev ne acha kiya k hume apne escape note me bata dia k woh bhag kar jayenge yeh hume baata dia usse
dhundh neki jarurat hi nahi padi..."


Maan "han...aisa bewakufi toh Dev hi kar sakta hai..."


AK gigged nd suddenly stopped whn their car entered the ROYAL PALACE OF JAIGARH IN RAJASTHAN...


Thy got down of the car and entered the palace...Thy told the Durban that Thy wanted 2 meet the MAHARANI...The durban told them
that Maharani was expecting them...


Maan & Ak looked at each other in confussion...Thy jst followed the Durban escorted thm 2 the centre of the palace nd requested thm 2 seat nd
wait 4 their Maha rani...


Maan & AK were waiting...& enjoys the royal decorations of the palace...nd suddenly stood up seeing an elderly lady coming
downstairs...Thy instantly knew tht She was THE MAHARANI of this palace...
She was clad in a golden saree having a strong aura alongside her...She came close to then and gestured them 2 seat...
Maan & AK were seated again whn Maharani said "welcome 2 our palace ...i hope your journey was a pleasant 1...would u like 2 ..."

Before Maharani could say anything further Maan spit in anger " kaha chupa k rakha hai ap logo ne Dev ko..."


Maan was going 2 continue but was stopped by a sweet voice yet challenging voice...


"TAMIZ SE BAAT KIJIYE AP JANTE HAI K AP JAIGARH KI MAHARANI SE BAAT KR RAHE HAI..."


Maan looked up 2 see the source of the voice...He saw a girl clad in a white saree climbing down the stairs in a gr8 elegant way...She
had a moon like face but without any spots...she had a perfect figure and was breathtakingly beautiful...


Seeing Maan lost in her Anvesha smiled nd said " app...??"


The girl shifted her gaze 4m maan 2 Anvesha nd said... "hum iss ghar ki badi bahu

GEET AMAR SINGH RATHORE..."



Precap...


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Link to my another ss on Maaneet


"remember,we broke up?"



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Posted: 10 years ago
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INDEX

PART 1. AND IT BEGINS.(PG-06)

PART 2. STARTING A NEW RELATION.(PG-17)

Edited by Tarina.R.Totini - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow...I am first 2 comment! 😊 congrats on another SS! Thanks 4 re posting - I did nt read this b4! interesting prologue! superbly written. Maan angry at Dev! who ran away frm his enagment! Maan with his elder sis gng 2 look 4 Dev! he arrives at the palace! Geet upset at the way he addresses the maharani! she shouts him! Maan lost in her beauty. So Geet is married?? update soon n do pm!
Edited by khwaishfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wowww I want to read dear plzz continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice prologue waiting for update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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quite an intresting story line...

is geet widow????? donno but i kinda thought it like tht...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start.. hehehe dev bhag gaya apni sagai chod kar and maan angry.. geet is married but I think she is widow as u mentioned abput her being waering white saree..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved the prologue👏
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intrstng prolouge geet is married😕
waitng 4 d update dear😃
congratz 4 d story🥳
Edited by mishtypie - 10 years ago
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wow interesting prologue. am guessing geet is a widow . looking forward to it

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