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part 6..

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PART 10

Maan - ha Vicky kisi se itna nai mat rutho ki who tumse ulta naraz ho jaye.

With saying that maan also went to his childhood memories where mahi also played same prank on him.

FLASHBACK

Mahi and meet were playing in the park as us usual. When suddenly geet saw icecream vendor and ask meet to bring an icecream for her but meet denied her bocoz of her cold.

Meet - mahi tumhe sardi hui hai aur tum icecream khane ki baat kar rahi ho.

Mahi - meet saldi(sardi) hui toh kya hua icecleam(icecream) toh kah hi sakte hai na. plz sirf(sirf) ek icecream(icecream) lado na.

Meet - nai mahi bilkul nai, agar icecream khane se tabiyat jyada kharab ho gayi toh.

Mahi - nai hogi pakka.

Meet - nai main tumari ye wish puri nai karuga.

Mahi(pleading with innocent face) - tum humali(humari) itni choti baat nai maan sakte kya?

Meet(signed) - tum aise face mat banao main lekar aata hu par sirf ek icecream ok

Mahi(happily) - ye meet u ale(are) the best. Ha hum ek hi lege ab jau lekal(lekar) aao warna icecream katam ho jayegi.

Meet - ha jar aha hu par tum yaha se kahi mat jana.

Meet went to bring icecream and mahi little naughty mind start working. She went and hid behind a tree which is near her. After sometime meet came & get worried not seeing mahi there. He start searching for mahi in the park becoz he know she start her mischief and after sometime he saw geet pink frock behind a tree. He came there and boo here

Mahi - meet tumne hume dala(dara) diya.

Meet - aur tumne muje dara uska kya?

Mahi - woh toh hum majak kal(kar) lahe (rahe) the.

Meet - ha who muje pata hi tha ki tum bina shararat ke toh rah hi nai sakti. Ab ye lo apni icecream sari phigal gayi.

Mahi - hawww, tum hume phele nai dhud sakte the. Sala(sara) icecream katam ho gaya.

FLASHBACK END

Maan came back in present with his phone tone. He check and remember his business trip to London.

Maan - dadi main aapko ek baat toh batana bhul gaya.

Dadi - kya hua bete?

Maan - kuch hua nai hai dadi par muje ek week ke liye London jana padega meeting ke liye who bhi kal subah.

vicky - kya bro ek week ke liye fir dev bhai aur bhabhi ki anniversary ki party ka kya hoga. Aapke bina maza kaisa?

Naintara - ha veerji aap nai hoge toh party bhi nai hogi. Dev party cancel kardo.

Maan- aree meri puri baat toh sunlo main inke big day ko kaise miss kar sakta hu jis din bechari naintara ke gale dev saari umar ke liye pad gaya tha. main uss din subah wapas aa raha hu.

Dev - bro main naintara ke gale nai padha tha.

Vicky - nai yaha maan bro tekh kah rahe hai. Aap sara apna kaam bhabhi se karwate hai. Ek coffee tak aap nai bana sakte. Bhabhi ne aapko spoil kar diya hai.

Dev - spoil ke bache ruk tuje main spoil karta hu.

Vicky ran to save his life. Dadi saw her family happy and pray to god to keep this happiness like this always. Next day maan fly to London and here geet is tensed for Vicky.

Geet flat

Geet - meera ye Vicky toh mera phone hi nai le raha hai. Pata nai isko itna gussa kaha se aa gaya.

Meera - toh tuje kisne kaha tha aisa prank karne ko?

Geet - who hum frds ne socha ki kyn na Vicky ko hi humare nai prank ka target banaye. Par muje kya pata tha ki ye ho jayega.

Meera - geet tu ek kaam kar uske ghar chali ja aaj sunday hai who tere frd ghar hi hoga.

Geet - ha ye tekh rahega par main akele kaise jau tu chal na mere sath.

Meera - main kyun aur tuje uske ghar ka address pata hai?

Geet - ha muje address pata hai aur muje akele jana acha nai lagega plz chal na plz plz plz meera.

Meera - tekh hai. Pata nai main teri har baat kyun maan leti hu?

Geet(happily) - kyunki tu meri best frd jo hai. Chal aab ready ho jate hai aur chalet hai.

After an hour outside khurana mansion

Meera - geet tuje pakka pata hai ki tera frd yahi rahta hai iss palace main.

Geet - muje usne yahi address diya tha aur kaha tha ki kabhi use contact na ho toh yahi aakar puach lena.

Meera - chal toh dekhte hai. Security se baat karte hai.

Meera(to security) - hello bhaiyaji kya yaha Vicky khurana rahte hai.

Security - ji ha par aap kyon?

Meera - hum unke clge ke frd hai, unka phone nai mil raha that oh aapko puacha. Agar aap ghar par phone karege toh woh who aa jayege.

Security - ji hum kar dete hai par aaka naam?

Meera - unne boliye prankstier unse milne aayi hai.

Geet - meera ye naam kyun bol rahi ho?

Meera - shut up geet aur unne apna kaam krne do.

Security use intercom to inform inside the mansion. Dadi receive call and ask security to let them enter. Both enter inside the mansion and dadi receive them.

Dadi - aaiye bete andar aaiye.

Meera/geet - Namaste mam

Dadi - Namaste par hum mam nai dadi hai.

Geet - kya hum Vicky se mil sakte hai hume kuch baat karni hai use.

Dadi(smiling) - hume pata hai beta aapko kya jaruri baat karni hai. Waise aap dono mein se prankster kyun hai?

Geet - hwww toh uss Vicky ne aapko bhi sa kuch bata diya.

Daadi - ji who kya hai na aap bolna suru karti hai toh rukti nai toh aapki saari baate hum subne sun li.

Geet - ha humare dono bade pote aur humari bahu ne.

Vicky jo apne room se aa raha tha who geet ko dekh kar chillaya aur ussi taraf super fast speed mein aaya.

Vicky - geet tum hi ho ya main koi sapna dekh raha hu.

Dadi - Vicky ye koi sapna nai hai aura b aap apni dost ko satana bhand kijiye.

Vicky - dadi ye yaha aayi hai toh maine isse maaf kar diya warna nai karta.

Geet - thank u dear main toh darr hi gayi thi ki tum mujse baat karoge ya nai.

Dadi - waise bete aapne apna naam nai bataya.

Geet - ji mera naam geet hai aur ye meri bst frd meera hai.

Dadi - aapse milkar khushi hui, aur Vicky inne pyari ladkiyo ko aise jane mat dena.

Vicky - ji dadi waise bhabhi kaha hai?

Dadi - who apni frds ko invite karne gayi hai aur bete aap dono ko hum personally invite kar rahe hai, next week party ke liye.

Meera - ji party?

Vicky - mere dev bro aur bhabhi ki anniversary party.

Geet - par hum kaise?

Dadi - kyun nai bete aapko invite kar rahe hai toh aapko aana padega.

Meera - geet woh dekh kiska photo hai?

Geet - ye yaha bhi pahuch gaye?

Vicky/dadi - kyun

PRECAP - ANNIVERSARY PARTY AND MAAN GEET MEETING.

NEXT PART MAY BE LAST PART

HOPE U ALL LIKE IT AND PLZ GIVE UR PRECIOUS COMMENT

CHAHAT

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Acha tha but ye last part ka kya chakar h!😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part
maan lost in past mahi is so naughty
maan went 2 london nd geet came 2 km
nw bth r gong 2 face each other in party
y last part?
Waitng 4 nxt part update soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...Next part is last part...😒
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heyyy...
the update was awesome..but y the next part is the last part??
dreamy confession toh rahega..dont end this soon...plz...chahat!!!

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