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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

wonderful ud
family knows maan helped geet
and maan geet nokh jhok started
precap interesting
thanx fr pm
having less time and too mach stories to catchup


Thank u for reading and liking it.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Will update soon.
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KOI AAP SA
PART 13

Geet sit in his car and maan start the and car & both start their journey of beautiful night. Maan is concentrating on road and geet getting bore with the silent. She start the music player and the song which play is of some old age song which geet didn't like. She immediately turn off the player and thought to herself.

Geet - hey babaji aaj kaha phasa diya aapne iss silent robot ke sath. Music player chalaya toh baba aadma ke jamane ke gaane laga rakhe hai. Main ghar pahuchti pahuchti kahi so na jau.

Geet didn't know that she thought it loud and maan is listening her blabber.

Maan - geet kya bol rahi ho aur ye songs ache hai inne golden era bolte hai par tume kya pata ye sab.

Geet - oh hello muje bhi pata hai ki ye song kyonse hai aur muje bhi ye pasand hai par iss time par inne sunkar neend aa jayegi joki main nai chahti.

Maan - toh chup baiti raho kisne kaha player on karne ke liye.

Geet - ha aap jaisi silent film ke sath toh main bol bhi nai sakti.

Maan - GEET tumne muje aaj ke diin mein kitne naam diye hai aur agar tumne ek aur naam diya toh dekhna.

Geet - toh kya ha dikho kya karoge aap?

Maan - geet just shut up and let me drive.

Geet fell silent and maan again concentrate on the road. After few min maan stop his car becoz there is huge tariff ahead and many car start reversing. Maan got down from car and went to constable who is instructing the driver

Maan - ye itna jam kis wajah se laga hua hai?

Constable - aage ek truck palat gaya hai jisse koi bhi car bike aage nai ja sakte.

Maan - kitna time lag jayega?

Constable - sir kuch kah nai sakte. 2 hours toh lagne hi hai.

Maan - ok thank you.

Maan came to his car and start reversing it and geet ask wat happen

Maan - aage accident hua hai aur ye road block hai hum dusare road se jana hoga.

Geet - who long cut wala.

Maan - hmmm

Geet again start her selfthought but in her mind

Geet - babaji maine socha bus ab ghar pahuch gaye par nai aapke plan toh kuch aur hi hai. Muje iss silent film ke sath aur time spend nai karna warna main pagal ho jaugi.

Suddenly the car start jerking and came to halt. Geet immediately said without thinking.

Geet(innocently) - arre ab aapne car kyun stop ki abki baar toh main apko sirf mann mein hi silent film kaha tha sachi.

Maan - maine khud car nai rokhi ye khud band ho gayi. Muje pata hi tha agar main tumare sath hu toh kuch na kuch prob toh honi hi hai.

Geet - maine kuch nai kiya aur mere hone se aapki car mein kyun prob hogi?

Maan (angrily) - tum ho toh prob piche piche aa jati hai.

Geet - muje taunt karne ke bajaye jake dekhiye kya prob hui hai.

Maan cameout and start checking the bonnet to find the prob. Geet also came out and ask maan wat is the problem.

Geet - what happen

Maan - no idea.

Geet - then get an idea sirji and start laughing.

Maan get confuse by geet sudden laugh and saw her weirdly

Maan - aise kyun has rahi ho? Tume koi pagalpan ka doure toh nai aate na.

Geet (laughing) - nai bus apne kaha na no idea aur maine get an idea siji bola toh muje junior bachan ki yaad aa gayi.

Maan - junior bachan?

Geet - aapko junior bachan nai pata. Arre abhishek bachan amitab bachan ke bete. Happy new year nai dekhi kya aapne?

Maan - junior bachan toh samaj aa gaya par ye happy new year kya hai? Tumara dimag pura karab hai new year mein abhi time hai.

Geet - aapko toh kuch nai pata happy new year abhishek ki nai movie ka naam hai. Aap kabhi movie nai dekhte kya?

Maan - mere pass itna time nai hai jo mein bewajah inn movie ko dekhne par barbaad karu aur tumari permission ho toh main kisi se help lekar tume ghar drop kardu kafi late ho raha hai.

Geet - toh rokha kisne hai aap hi itna bol rahe hai.

Maan start asking for lift but no one gave lift to them after sometime a taxi came there and both sat in it. Maan drop her home and ask taxi driver to drive taxi toward KM. Maan came mansion at 1'o clock and straight to his bed. His whole day was adventures and it drain his energy.

Few days pass like this. Vicky and geet exam are going to start and both are doing combine study sometime at geet place and sometime at KM. Geet made a point to never came infront of maan when she came to study at KM. One fine day both Vicky came KM from college becoz they hav to submit a project which is important for their internal marks of subject. Booth are working in hall and dadi is giving suggestion to them that's when geet phone start ringing, she attend the call and said without giving otherside anytime to say something

Geet - meera sorry dear meine tuje inform nai kiya but mein Vicky ke ghar hu muje ek project submit karna that oh yaha aa gayi sorry aane mein lata ho jayega.

Meera - tera ho gaya toh mein kuch bolu.

Geet - bol meine kaha rokha hai.

Meera - geet mom ka phone aaya tha aur unhone bataya ki meri maasi ki beti ki shadi hai 4 din baad aur who nai aa payege toh muje ye shaadi attend karni hogi.

Geet - toh karlena kya prob hai?

Meera - geet meri maasi rajasthan rakhti hai aur agar muje shadi attend karni hai toh muje aaj hi jana hoga kyunki maasi ka phone aaya tha aaj hi aa jane ke liye.

Geet - toh chali ja aise paresaan kyun ho rahi hai?

Meera - tuje yaha akele kaise chodkar jau? Mera mann nai hai.

Geet - mein sab sabhal lugi tu ja aur tu hi toh bol rahi thi kit u aur teri who cousin close ho toh jana chahiye.

Meera - par tere bina kaise?

Geet (sternly) - meera go and pack ur bag. Muje ye project nai karna hota toh mein teri help karti packing mei.

Meera (felling low)- ok mein airport pahuch kar call karti hu.

Geet - cheerup meer apni behen ki shadi main muh ladtakar jayegi. Bye and call me okay.

Geet cut the call and naintara who is listening their talks ask wat happen?

Geet - kuch nai bhabhi meer ki cousin ki shadi hai aur usse jana hoga par who paresaan ho rahi thi mein akele kaise manage karugi becoz ye city mere liye nayi hai.

Dadi got an idea listening geet talks nad said

Dadi - geet bete jab tak meera nai aati tab tak aap yaha humare sath kyun nai rahti.

Vicky - great idea dadima. Hum sab milkar bhut mazza karage.

Geet - nai dadima mein kaise?

Dadi - kyun aap hume apni dadi nai manti?

Geet - ye baat nai hai dadima.

Dadi - hum meera aur aapke parents se bhi baat kar lege. Chaliye apne parents ko call kijiye.

Geet phone her parents and ask their permission for geet stay. Geet parents agree listening dadi humble voice and assuring words. After dat dadi talk to meera also to tell this news to her. Vicky is jumping and shouting like a kid.

Vicky - geet humare ghar rahne aa rahi hai , hum bhut mazza karege. Party karege. Yippy hurrah

Maan who just enter the mansion got shock with this piece of news.

PRECAP - MAANEET IN MANSION AND BOTH REMEMBERING MAHI & MEET.

HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE IT AND DO COMMENTS

CHAHAT

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

najane aap ka kal kab ayaega


aa gaya update promise kiya tha jaise. Enjoy
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Posted: 10 years ago
geet calling maan silent film
now geet staying in KM
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome update! Geet is too much! Maan is so silent n she components! Geet in KM! update soon! Well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
abb ayega maaza...

superb update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part maaneet were fightng tbroughout d journey 😆
vicky nd geet r preparng 4 exam nd project nd meera had 2 go 4 his sis's marriage
daadi makes geet 2 stay at km nd maan got shock
waitng 4 d nxt part update soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear geet is staying in KM
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Beautiful update
loved it
geet will stay in km

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