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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nakh5683

chahat dear nice update but itni jaldi kyon khatam kar rahi ho give us more update na

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Originally posted by: _Maaneet_

awesome update

maan went to london
geet went to meet vicky at his place, dadi invites her and merra for party!!!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

chalo shayad maan geet mein kuch kuch hojaye...

superb update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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maan geet mein bhut kuch hoga dear.
will update today
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curiosity filled story... loved all the parts.. read in one go.. grt parts... update soon.. eagerly waiting for the next part..
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HELLO GUYS AFTER READING UR COMMENTS I RECONSIDER MY DECISION AND THOUGHT NOT TO AND THIS STORY SO SOON. SO PLZ KEEP GIVE UR LIKE AND COMMENT TO SUPPORT ME

PART 11

Meera - geet woh dekh kiska photo hai?

Geet - ye yaha bhi pahuch gaye?

Vicky/dadi - kyon?

Geet - arre dadi ye mahashye (pointing toward a photo hanging on a wall)

Meera(whisper) - geet agar ye photo yaha hai toh obviously ye yaha rahte hoge.

Geet - ha meera par main jaha bhi jati hu ye muje kyn mil jate hai?

Vicky - geet ye tum kya bata kar rahi ho? Aur kyon kaha pahuch jata hai?

Geet - Vicky ye tumare relative hai kya?

Vicky - geet ye mere relative nai mere bhade bhai hai.

Geet/meera(shocked) - kya bhai?

Dadi - ha bhai kyun koi gadbad hai kya?

Meera (came out of shock) - nai dadi aisi koi baat nai hai. Hai na geet?

Geet - ha kuch bhi toh nai bus inhone meri kafi baar help ki hai toh bus issliye puacha?

Now its time for dadi and Vicky to get shock.

Dadi - maan ne aapki help ki?

Geet(nervously) - ji ha kuch 3-4 baar.

Vicky - geet sach mein bro ne tumari hep ki?

Meera(meekly) - ha par aap aise kyun puach rahe hai? Nai kar sakte kya

Dadi - nai bete par maan ne bhut time baad kisi ki aise help ki who bhi ek ladki ki.

Naintara(surprisingly) - veerji ne ek ladki ki help ki, really dadi?

Dadi - arre naintara aap kab aaye? Aur aapne sahi suna maan ne ek ladki ki help ki aur ye wahi ladki wahi hai.

Naintara - dadi ye toh 8th wonder ho gaya. Chalo chodo waise aap yaha veerji se milne aayi hai.

Vicky - nai bhabhi ye bro se milne nai mujse milne aayi hai. Ye meri frd hai geet andye geet ki frd meera.

Naintara - oh ye aapki frd hai jinke bare mein kal aap bata rahe the.

Vicky - ji ye wahi hai.

Naintara - hello geet, hello meera.

Geet/ meera - hello mam.

Naintara -nai nai hum koi mam nai hai. Vicky ke frds humare liye bhi Vicky ki tarah hai toh aap hume naintara ya bhabhi bula sakte hai.

Geet(happily) - toh hum aaj se aapko bhabhi bulayege. Ek hi din mein hume dadi aur bhabhi mil gaye. Thanks to u Vicky.

Vicky - anything for u sweetheart.

Meera - ab hume chalna chahiye.

Naintara - aise kaise kunch karke chale jana.

Geet - nai bhabhi kal meera ko ek assignment submit karna hai jo maine kal raat isse purra karne diya. Aur subah isse yaha le aayi.

Dadi - acha hua kal Vicky ne phone aatend nai kiya, warna hume itni 2 pyari ladkiyo se milne ka mooka nai milta.

Vicky - main toh great hu hi.

Naintara - bus bus ab apne aapko itna boost up mat karo.

With dat all start laughing and Vicky made a face.

Dadi - bus ab itna sad face mat banao aur dono ko ghar drop karke aayiye.

Meera - dadi iski koi jarurat nai hai hum dono chale jayege.

Naintara - meera iss lazy bum ko kuch karne ka moka mil jayega warna ye toh saara din video games hi khelege. Waise lazy bum tumne apne inn frd ko party ke liye invite liya ya nai

Vicky - ha kar diya. Geet jaldi chalo warna ye dono lovely ladies meri reputation ki band baja degi tum dono ke samne.

Geet - chal meri basanti jaldi chal.

Trio went. Dadi and naintara start discussion party invitation and other prepration. After one hour vicky arrive after droping geet and meera. He start ranting how geet make fun of him in car.

Naintara - chalo koi toh hai jo tumara bhi mazak bana sakta hai. Par vicky i must say both girls are cute and beautiful

Dadi - i agree naintara. Dono ki innocence unki sabse badi beauty hai. Jaise koi pari ho.

Vicky - ha dadi geet ne apna jaadu bro par bhi chala diya. The great maan singh khurana ko apni madad ke liye mana liye.

Dadi - ye toh hai.

Naintara - par hum veerji ko nai batayege ki hume unka ye secret pata chal gaya hai. Let it be a surprise for him.

Dadi/vicky - deal.

After one week on dev and naintara anniversary day, at early morning maan plane land on delhi airport. Maan went to his mansion in his BMW. The car enter and maan is welcomed by his family.

Dadi - aap aa gaye hume laga aap late ho jayege.

Naintara - dadi MSK apna promise kabhi nai bhulte. Kyun veerji.

Maan - ofcourse naintara. By the way happy anniversary dear and to you too dev.

Dev - thank u bro. Ab aap rest kijiye hum aapko breakfast par milte hai.

At breakfast table

vicky - gud morning bro. Aap kab aaye?

Dev - jab aap apne sapno ki duniya mein khoye hue the.

Vicky - kya bro ab main soo bhi nai sakta kya?

Dadi - agar aap dono ka ho gaya ho toh hum party ki baat kare.

Dev/vicky - ji dadi, sorry dadi.

Dadi(toward maan)- maan aaj toh aap free hoge.

Maan - nai dadi muje breakfast ke baad vicky ke clge jana hai.

Vicky - mere clge par kyun bro maine toh koi sararat bhi nai ki.

Maan(smiled at him) - i know tumne kuch nai kiya. Waha kuch construction ka kaam hai toh principal se meeting hai.

Vicky(signed) - main toh dar hi gaya tha.

Maan - ok dadi main chalta hu. Party mein milte hai.

After maan left, dev also went to office and he make vicky incharge of party arrangement. Vicky as always a confuse soul dont know how to organise it. He call geet

Vicky - geet yaar plz tu jaldi ghar aaja main bhut badi muskil mein hu.

Geet(panick) - kya hua vicky?

Vicky - bus tum jaldi aa jao main sab bata duga.

Geet - main aa rahi hu.

After an hour geet reach there and saw vicky is sitting on couch and sipping his coffee. Geet got angry seeing this.

Geet(angryily) - vicky tumne muje yaha tumari coffee dekhne ke liye bhulaya hai kya?

Vicky - geet calm down main yaha party preparation mein fas gaya that oh socha tume bhula lu.

Geet (shouted at him) - isse tum bulana kahte ho muje mini heart aane wala tha ye soch kar ki kya hau hai.

Vicky(making a baby face) - sorry aur plz meri help kardona.

Geet(sign) - ok tekh hai batao kya karna hai.

Vicky - oh thank u geet muje pata tha tum meri help jarur karogi. Acha ye ye kaam rahta hai.

With dat he gave a complete list of party decoration and sat on couch.

IN COLLEGE

After meeting with principal, maan came out to construction site. He is standing near collage gate instructing manager about work. He is contantly watching gate to see a glimpse of problematic girl but not get her glimpse. Maan went home and shocked to see the scene in front of him. Geet is decorating a pillar standing on the stool and maan start talking to himself

Maan(selfthought) - maan tu pagal ho gaya hai. Who ladki tuje clge mein nai dikhi toh tu usse apne ghar mein imagine karne laga. Par main isske bare mein soch hi kyun raha hu?

He saw the stool on which geet is standing is shaking and geet is about to fall. He came forward and catah geet in his arm. Geet in fear of getting hurt close her eyes and when she didn't fell pain open her eyes to see maan angry face in front of her.

Maan(angryily) - jab tume pata hai ki tumse kuch kaam nai hota toh karti kyun ho?

Geet - hwww aap aisa kyun bol rahe hai. Ye sara decoration mein kiya hai.

Maan - clge chod kar event management company join Karli kya?

Geet(cutely) - nai clge toh jati hu ye toh bus aise hi.

Before maan said something Vicky broke their conversation

Vicky - bro aapne geet ko aise kyu utta rakha hai?

Both realize in which position they are arguing. Maan made geet stand on her feet and answer vicky

Maan - ye gir rahi thi toh maine isse pakad liya.

Vicky - maine kaha tha na ki main ye karta hu tum kaha dekh lo par nai tum sunti kaha ho?

Maan(confused by Vicky talks) - tum isse jante ho Vicky?

PRECAP LOTS OF MAANEET SCENES

HOPE U ALL LIKE IT AND GIVE UR PRECIOUS COMMENT

CHAHAT

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome yaar... geet has stunned evrybody saying maan helped her. Loved the conversations,... waiting for nxt
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Well written! Geet reveals tht Mana helped her! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part daadi vicky nd nt came 2 knw dat maan hlpd geet nd all r shockd
maan went 2 clg nd geet 2 km bt maan is search 4 geet
nd when dey met again their fightng startd
waitng 4 d nxt part update soon

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