MG OS : ORE PIYA part 3 pg 12 JUly 22

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Captivating eyes , the sweet chime of the gungroo caught his attention.. he was looking at her just like a bee is attached to the honey.. the way she was twisting and turning made him hypnotised .. the way everything was turning out to be it was not something that can be judged or was planned .. captivated by the moves he looked at the gigging sound.. she jumped and took a bow .. as soon she turned he clicked a picture ..

So beautiful.. that were the words that escaped from his mouth.. the innocence that filled in his heart and soul at that instant cannot be seek and seen anywhere .. There was a little hesitation when he clicked that pose for the first time, the way she shied made his heart flutter .. for some time or say for the instant of time he wanted that smile that innocent features and that naive damsel for him.. a soft chuckle escaped his mouth seeing her getting scolded but that was not the thing that he wanted .. it was his heart that laughed seeing her doing a mistake.. a child in her .. taking two pictures more he went in the deepest nook of his life .. every niche that he had hidden was suddenly alive with her .. that white and red colour outfit made her look angelic that glow on her face when she smiled when her teacher didn't caught her mistake was so adorable ...

He sat on the bed , it was the chilly night .. the December was known for having the worst cold nights in that small village .. he opened his camera and glanced at the photographs... he was marvelled at the beautiful creation of god whom he had clicked... that small wave of emotion on her face .. that deep emotion of the pain that she danced made him live the dream that he always wanted to ...

How can someone be so innocent ... she is naughty and her heart is full of love.. he said all to himself .. the way he was talking to her pictures can make anyone say him the deewana in her love but is it possible ... asked his cold heart ... he was not there for building any kind of relation again but will it possible for him to remain away from her ..

Unknown to what that innocent smile that pure heart and the bubbly nature did she was unaware of the storm of those emotions that she had unknowingly created in the heart of someone.. that child like heart giggled at the second talk that a friend of hers said sometime back .. She was absolutely delightful.. Her curls that roughly settles on her nape were like the dark clouds playing hid and seek with the shiny stars.. those rosy lips which always find another reason to smile in spite of the heavy circumstances in her life ..

She gestured her friend to say something and apply the dark heena on her palms .. taking in the fragrance on the heena those dimples came on her milky white skin were unbeatable .. her friend said something and the next moment a blush crept on her face..

If she was the epitome of naughtiness than she knew how to portray maturity in her .. the classical dancer that dances only listening to the tunes.. there was something that always makes her different from others ..

But this difference will be loved by him... she is a nutshell princess and he is the princess who will keep his princess in his heart ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's so well written I can clearly visualise the scene. ..
Loved it!😊
Waiting for the next!
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Nice OS...
Loved it...

Plz continue...


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awww he is smitten
but hope he will tell her
wait does he know who she is
taking her pic
yeh toh sach mein deewane huye inke
awww that was so adorable
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Loved it!😊
Waiting for the next!
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vry nice n captivating concept
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Awesome Part.. Continue Soon 😉
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beautiful n lovely start
waiting for next parts
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aww sooo cute ..
their lives soo different ...
thoughts so different.
evn the circumstances different..
stilll they meet..
is it an accident...?
no...its fate..

will she b abl to fill warmth in his cold heart...
n how he will preserve her naughty n innocent self..
is yet to b seen

n it ws beautifully written...
an imagery i would say 😊

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