MG OS : ORE PIYA part 3 pg 12 JUly 22 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Lovely and beautiful OS👏👏⭐️ Maan is really deewane😳 Loved it so much❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
WOW!! it was simply beautiful...brilliantly written...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A very beautiful start. Very descriptive and it captures the emotions of the characters quite nicely. Looking forward to what is in store next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
congrats on the new OS! beautifully written! the way u described each moment was fab! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Awesome os...waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
sirf dil mein hi rahegi maan ki...life mein nehi ayegi...

interesting starting...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
interesting start dear...
maan tho geet ko dekhte hi uska deewana ho gaya...but kya koi past b h maan ka????
geet ne b maan ko dekh liya h kya????
maaneet kaise milenge?
waiting for nxt update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
🤗 🤗 omg this so well written, its beautiful...
an awesome start yaar...
update soon
love
~Anu~

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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Awesome start :-)
Interesting :-)
Maan Is all fida on geet at first sight itself :-)
Nice... :-) n geet all naughty n mature too...
y did geet blush while keeping heena is she gonna get married ???
Curious to know... :-)
Continue soon :-)


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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Wow.. mast hain...Ek Deewana.. N Ek innocent girl... Waiting for next part... Sweet story...

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