MG OS : ORE PIYA part 3 pg 12 JUly 22 - Page 5

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

wonderful update! Maan admires her! He gets caught by her! he takes her pic! superbly written! update soon

thank u
ii am typing next
i know my friends are waiting 😊

Originally posted by: nikkirocksss

itne dino k baad koi update mila wo b chotu sa 😕😕

ye galat baat h suhi

anyway nice update...

geet ko haatho me heena lagana pasnd h...

maan geet ko search kr rh th n usse geet dikh gai n maan ne again usski pic capture kr li but iss baar geet ne usse dekh liya

waiting for nxt update

p.s.-suhi plz Innocent Flower ka apna part jaldi se type kr aur kitna wait krwayegi????????????

nikku 😭😭😭😭😭
i dont know why i am loosing my interest in maaneet
still i m trying to be back
chotu sa tha i know but apt tha
i m typing next baby

IF bhi type kar rahi hun
aaj i am on my pc

mere tab ka keyboard bhi kharab kar diya mere bhai ne

soch 3 din ladne me gussa karne me chale gaye mere

Originally posted by: nikkirocksss

hume updates chahiye suhi...tumne mere ccp ki story ka b update nai diya h 😭😭😭

wait kar ye training khatam hone de
me garmi me ghum ghum kar pareshan hu yar

a very beautiful poetic concept i felt like i recite a beautiful poetry not a story ,.. very nice

Originally posted by: anuradha.nandam

a very beautiful poetic concept i felt like i recite a beautiful poetry not a story ,.. very nice

lolllzzz thanks di
thats a poetry i doubt
coz neither i can write nor understand the depth of poetry

awesome part ddear love to read both parts ,

part 2
lovely dear...
cont soon dear...

Superb update. Once again he manages to capture her image on his camera but this time she notices him and is connfused. Fab job as always and looking forward to what is in store next.

Originally posted by: spvd

part 2
lovely dear...
cont soon dear...

thank u di

Originally posted by: rsusmita

awesome part ddear love to read both parts ,

very beautifully written

will be he able to see geet again ...

will they talk.. waiting for their conversation

thank u di
for their convo
lets c