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Posted: 11 years ago
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suhaana plz update ur story ..
i even pm u ..
plz post it ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2


( @kiran di ..

i'll make sure that i wont repeat the mistakes i did di 😊)

The sweet smell of the heena in her palms and the intricate designs made in her hands were the small source of the happiness that she always find in all the things she does.. she wasn't from a well off family but she was the only person she knows in her family .. leaving alone with the distant relative she wasn't too happy but the happiness that the sweet princess always finds in her heart was something that nothing can complete . she was self sufficient and self loving .. her love lies in the steps that she learns the only movement that she feels .. deprived of the quality of hearing and speaking she was the one of her own kind...

The princess looked at the heena designs .apart from her dance that relieves her from all kind of tensions the second thing that she loves to do is applying heena.. the heena she felt symbolises the dark effect of someone's love that she always feel around yet she didn't know when she can feel it in real.. the reality doesn't always lie in the eyes that she feels but the deepest truths are sometimes presented in a way that even the non believer of the love and god starts to know that every single heart beats with his permission ...

The next morning he took his camera in the small hope to find her again.. the greenery and the landscape was so soothing that gave even a burning soul the peace in their hearts .. but his eyes were in the search of someone who can reduce the unending search of himself ... the search which can only end with the discover of someone who can see right through him , just for him ...

Sitting in the silence for almost an hour he found the sun shining amidst of the heavy clouds and just like his mind said he turned and looked at the beauty painted in the orange hue that was right now looking like the sun that was setting its wings in the sky and she was shining the way he wanted that too in his life for the second time and making him lost in her ... he just like a thief he clicked her once again .. but this time he found her hazels staring at him in the confusion .. he smiled awkwardly and tried to look away but couldn't do so.. making his camera fall in the process ... and looking at her leaving the place ...

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Next : meeting and closure

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Posted: 11 years ago
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suhaana is something wrong ..why u r not replying ??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome part...he again captured her in his camera
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tabby999

something wrong going on ...

nothing is wrong
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wait is she marrying him
or someone else
once again he took her pics
she seems to be so sweet and innocent
lets see what happens next
she saw him huh
awww he was looking for her
and he found her
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful update! Maan admires her! He gets caught by her! he takes her pic! superbly written! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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itne dino k baad koi update mila wo b chotu sa 😕😕
ye galat baat h suhi
anyway nice update...
geet ko haatho me heena lagana pasnd h...
maan geet ko search kr rh th n usse geet dikh gai n maan ne again usski pic capture kr li but iss baar geet ne usse dekh liya
waiting for nxt update

p.s.-suhi plz Innocent Flower ka apna part jaldi se type kr aur kitna wait krwayegi????????????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hume updates chahiye suhi...tumne mere ccp ki story ka b update nai diya h 😭😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: chavvi16

wait is she marrying him
or someone else
once again he took her pics
she seems to be so sweet and innocent
lets see what happens next
she saw him huh
awww he was looking for her
and he found her



thanks chavvi
no no she isnt getting married
use mehndi lagana acha lagta hai

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