MG OS : ORE PIYA part 3 pg 12 JUly 22 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice os
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow that was fantastic just mindblowing
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awesome part he is fully blown by her beauty
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awesome part he is fully blown by her beauty,innocence,naughtiness and much more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice os please update soon
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just one look at her & he is already flat!!!!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice OS...
Loved it...
Plz continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it's such a beautiful start meri pyari di just in love wid this story aur di waiting for the next part eagerly jaldi se dijiyega di😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Maan has become deewana of Geet in one glance...

why she is applying mehndi ?...I know it is very small and normal thing for a girl to apply Henna but when u write a story we expect every gesture to have some meaning...is she getting married ?...or does she loves someone and her friends are teasing her that is why she is blushing...

very interesting and sweet start...

waiting for next part...

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