MG OS : ORE PIYA part 3 pg 12 JUly 22 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Superb Part.. He's stalking n capturing Her in his camera 😳
Nice..! Is she deaf n dumb? 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
she loved apply henna in her hand
he captured her his camera
lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: BDayGal-11Jan

Superb Part.. He's stalking n capturing Her in his camera 😳
Nice..! Is she deaf n dumb? 😕



thnks sheen
yup she is deaf and dumb
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The hide and seek was very much prominent in their life.. she was noticing one stranger looking at her capturing her.. Sometimes she feels too conscious sometimes good to be in front of him.. it was not intentional but the way his eyes depicts every time was something she never understand.. she wasn't of any rebellious nature.. but the way she was brought up with all the silence of conservativeness in her life was something that she cannot even say what she feels..although she was not given that much of power to express but still her heart knows what was there and wants to speak so much..

Suddenly she felt the dire need of having the voice that could make herself much more prominent and much more sufficient in comparison of what she was not.. there wasn't anything that she can't do so why today she felt the need to hear his voice..to reply to his questions that his dark eyes always ask her ..

The darkness in her life was suddenly given a path which wanted her to be on that.. she was very well observing him that he was following her from past few days.. but she didn't knew that those days were actually the span of two months when he saw her first and followed her.. she wasn't so beautiful she thought and the disability to speak and hear made her different and that's the reason she never look at anything that will make her sacrifice the smile that was given to her by her mother..she can't hear and voice out her feelings but she was given the blessing in the form of the basic education that made her that much capable of standing in front of the world.. the artist the pious and rhythmic dancer who just dances without knowing anything still makes the eyes to glue to her was not less than any blessing and the lady has learnt to find herself in the small happiness that was bestowed by god on her after lost her support her parents...

The sun was playing hide and seek with the clouds it was like if it permits the sun will let the clouds pour over..she was standing with her other fellow dancers , and her only friend.. she was the most graceful dancer and the way she emotes the feelings was something that no one can do.. it was the practice for the one of the best themed lyrical play that was chosen just for her.. she was the divine and beautiful radhika and the fellow dancers were the gopi's who were waiting for their salvation... the beat started and it started with all the other girls surrounding her and she was given the ultimate wait of her lifetime.. Fortunately he was also there sitting with her teacher who was constantly looking at her. making her improve and her eyes were closed just like it was the time she was given the salvation.. the music changed and she changed her steps following the beat amazing him .. it was the beautiful moment and for a second he forget to blink his eyes as she looked at him... his camera was lying just there with no owner of his own just like his was possessed with her ...

Suddenly the rain started to pour drenching her ..others walked to the safer place but she and her friend enjoyed.. she was dancing more beautifully looking like an angel now.. the way she was playing around his heart skipped a beat.. Involuntary his hands reached the camera and he clicked.. this time she jumped in the dancing pose and he click.. her eyes diverted to him..and just like someone or something provoke her ..she came towards him..they were alone now..her friend has left a little ago leaving her alone with the stranger of hers..

She suddenly felt conscious and adjusted the thick stall around herself covering her..her this gesture made him smile and he looked away while saying a genuine sorry to her with his eyes..that guilt that surfaced his eyes and made his eyelashes downwards spread a small smile around her gave both of them the divine feeling.. standing in the heavy rain..both were getting drenched.. but she suddenly pulled him away or it will be perfect if it was , she pulled him in the surface that didn't gave any harm to him...

He murmured a quick sorry and sorry to her..only to see her gentle smile.. he had expected a small reply but his expectation was not fulfilled creating a little void and small amount of tease ...

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Years later ,

He was sitting under the shiny twinkling stars looking at the pictures that made him mesmerized always.. still after years she is the one who with her khamosh nazren is capable of giving him peace for the pain that he once felt at the time she left him without saying anything ...

It is not always possible to get your love.. just the feel of some moments can give you the feeling of being loved ..

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THE END

Confusions

Since there wasn't any dialogue involved so i guess many were confused about the girl getting married while she was applying heena and her being deaf and dumb..

There isn't just a marrying occasion when heena is being applied some girls like to apply them just because they like it.. and here the girl likes it..and yes she was deaf and dumb and he never got to know this ..since there wasn't any special encounter of theirs...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was sad ending.. but still pure n divine love was there.. Everyone doesn't get their love.. 😭 just loved this os so much..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was simple n lovely os!
Thanks for the beautiful work!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
amazing update! Well written! Superb end! So sad tht they did nt ever met!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaana



thnks sheen
yup she is deaf and dumb


Ohhh, but where she vanished?? He fell in love with her aww
Waitinggg for An Epilogue !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful ending to another lovely OS.Love the moments that were created by both even though there was no direct conversation between them. Fab job as always
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: BDayGal-11Jan


Ohhh, but where she vanished?? He fell in love with her aww
Waitinggg for An Epilogue !




sheen sorry there is no epilogue since at last he has moved on in life and doesnt know where is she...

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