STORY OF MY LOST HEART! (Completed!) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Nice story and loved the name 'Maanveer'... Its sooo good... I was wondering what would be his name but this apt... Ahhh!!! Maanveer, perfect name for a king...
Hope to get an update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part# 4


It was late in the night n I couldn't sleep a wink! As I recalled today's events! I knew things are going to be tough. ..

As it was getting dark Guruji asked us not to leave it could be dangerous to cross the jungle in the night! So we stayed back in the ashram for the night. ...standing near the window I was Lost in my thoughts with cool breeze blowing through my hair. .

By now I knew He is the one I lost my Heart to!

It was n will be only him who will have any rights over me but. ..what if he comes to know about my feelings...what if he asks me something which I couldn't give him! It's better this away! That very moment I took my decision!

I couldn't let my people suffer for my selfish reasons. .As now it wasn't only me but my kingdom involved. .. I thought!

So...
He's the king very handsome one though! If we would have met in different situations. .. I would have never allowed him to leave me ...I thought giggling. .

Really now!

Yes .. n I would have been ordering him around. ...wait wait! What if he's already committed or worse married!

Even thought was enough to shake me up! Oh god what r u doing to me. ...

U didn't have to worry about it Princess! I turned to find him seated near my bed on the floor casually but what is he doing here at this time n what if someone seen him!

Shhh. ..just calm down. .no one saw me coming to you as everyone's asleep.. n I'll leave before any one notices. .. U trust me right?

I nodded as I couldn't even think of otherwise. .

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I gestured her to come to me ... she silently came n sat beside me resting her head on my shoulder! I brought her to my embrace as she made herself comfortable. .. I started playing with her hair. ...

Princess I hope you are aware of the fact that from tomorrow nothing's going to remain the same!

She gave a slight nod.. I turned silent for a while absorbing the fact that she was really in my arms. ..

Geet!

This is what I wanted to call you when we're alone. . Where we r no enemies. .. where we are no King n queen ... she buried her head in my chest giving her acceptance. .

I tightened my hold around her ... night can't be more beautiful can it? I thought sighing. ..

Looking at the bright shinning stars...n the peaceful night ahead... it was time for some confessions I thought. .. .

Geet!

Ummm. .

U r listening right!

Ummm... Every heart beat !

Making me smile. ..

U know the first time I saw you in the market I was there to meet my old friend secretly. .. . I said Lost in my memories


By the way u really wanted to fight them didn't you?

She smiled slightly. .

Geet! I don't have anyone else in my life except u! I said after a while. ..

Yes! I am an orphan my parents were killed in a war with your country! This won't end here unfortunately! I said cupping her beautiful face..I could feel that she was scared. .

U know I'm not as cruel as u might have heard about me. .. she immediately nodded her head in denial! I badly wanted to distract her!

Princess!

The other day when I saved u from drowning, I was so scared! What were u doing at such a dangerous place?. ..

I was watching a warrior practicing sword! She said with a mischievous glint in her voice.

I wish things were more simple around us we could have met a bit differently ..can't even tolerate the thought letting you go

Maan! She gasped softly! Tightening her hold around me. .

What.! say it again. .I almost pleaded her ..she looked down blushing!

I turned to other side faking anger. .

She cupped my face tilting her head n she said n her melodious voice. .

Maan!

That's what I would call u when we were alone.. where you are no king n I'm no queen!

I was Lost staring at her beautiful eyes filled with dreams. . Face covered with beautiful blush. .n lips curved in to enchanting smile!

After few silent minutes I broke the silence while playing with her hair! I loved her hair long n silky. .

U know the other day when I saved u from drowning you were looking heavenly!

I knew it would be better to leave as it was getting tough for me to control!

I saw getting all red n shy! God why did u put us in such a place. ..

I don't like you wearing all these excess jewellery, just for the sake of it...I said changing the topic. ... when I'm with you. . I like you the way you were looking on our first meeting. . With delicate bangles in your hands ..Small n pretty thing for your ears which move with you. . N the nose ring! Simple n nice. .. I said while removing the unnecessary jewellery!

U know princess. . I have a painting of you with me. .

What! she suddenly moved away from me. . Making me confused. ..

Princess what's wrong!

U have my painting! I don't have anything of you. .. she said pouting turning other side. .

R u sure u don't have ??? I asked mischievously...

What do you mean by that! Now don't talk in riddles. .. she said still maintaining her angry from! making me sigh!

The scarf which they covered u the other day was mine. ..

What! Oh God I don't know where I've kept it. . Let me ask someone ... started getting panicked

Geet!

Ummm ...I stretched my hand for her to come to me to which she silently came n snuggled closer to me still pouting!

We talked about everything under the sky sometimes it was silence and sometimes our eyes that talked.. I knew it was nearing the time for me to leave. ..

As I was about to step out I heard her call me! may be for the last time...

Ummm... wo. .. can I have a ... aa .. a hug please. . She pleaded in her tearful voice

Please ... she said stretching her arms n tears flowing ...






To be continued. ..



Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Priyasi

Nice story and loved the name 'Maanveer'... Its sooo good... I was wondering what would be his name but this apt... Ahhh!!! Maanveer, perfect name for a king...

Hope to get an update soon


Glad u liked!
Thanks for reading! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part# 5

I can never c her pleading! rushing towards her i hugged her tightly ... almost crushing her ...as she let her silent tears flow... i pulled out of hug n wiped her tears ..as she was refusing to meet my gaze..

Princess! enough now no more crying ... from now on i want you to be brave ... n strong.. u r going to fight for your country! right!

she gave a slight nod!

i know you have taken your decision n I'm with you in it! its time we serve our people...tomorrow a day may come where you will have to fight me ...

she turned cold hearing me ...

Geet! its our destiny...

Maan !

Ummm. .

if i want to meet u then...

I'll come to ur dreams ..

if i want to talk to you then..

There is god right share it with him he will send ur every message to me...

If i ...

Shhh... enough!

I noticed some movement near our door I think someone is there...

So now it's time!

Thanks for saving my life princess! Better you take care of your land...

I'll take your leave now!

Maharaj! I'll pray for a day u have peace In your heart!

I saw him Walk away taking away the most precious thing of my life!

As I got ready to leave. . Guruji called me n said he heard what we talked for a moment I was worried but thankfully he heard only the last bit of it!

Today was the first day of me as a queen. ... The first gift I got was from him it was beautiful n delicate jewellery. .. just the way he liked on me I thought chuckling. ..

It also had a message which I knew was for me but my people took it on there ego!

Come on now I can't tell them that our enemy is my lifeline right!

As he warned me things were not simple everyone had there own way of showing there superiority but at the end of the day I was there queen!

As he said I made babaji my best friend. .. I made it a habit to share everything with him. .. Wishing he would send all my messages to him!

I met him twice in the previous 6 months to be precise. ..Once for the peace talks n the other in the temple!

Both the times all I did was to drool at him! Now that's not my fault right!

These days my stupid minsters n my dad were planning to join hands with other mighty kingdom as they feel it would be helpful for our upcoming war!

Oh god I didn't know that such a mighty kingdom will have such a lenient king! He doesn't even know the how to be serious. .. n his minister I guess he is the one who takes all the decisions regarding the kingdom!

The way he looked at me I wish I could kill him right away. .. Being a king how could he have such a creepy minister!



Yeshvardhan singh! He was all polite soft spoken n good looking but not more than my maan of course!



N his most pathetic minister Raajveer I think by the looks of it he's eying the King's throne. ..anyway that's not the question right now...

I don't know but I have this bad feeling about this alliance. .. something about it that I don't feel right!



To be continued. ...

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
I don't think anyone is reading this. ..
So if there is anyone ...
This note is for you!
Please do pm me if u want me to continue with this story!😕

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
hahaha...You turned all bollywood heroes and heroines into villain, vamp and supporting roles in Maaneet stories...😆 umm...i liked it 😃
lovely Maaneet meetings...both are bound by their own responsibilities and it seems the new alliance will not remain only at the political level.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am reading it as well as enjoying it too. please continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

hahaha...You turned all bollywood heroes and heroines into villain, vamp and supporting roles in Maaneet stories...😆 umm...i liked it 😃

lovely Maaneet meetings...both are bound by their own responsibilities and it seems the new alliance will not remain only at the political level.


Oh that it's coz I watch movies more. .
I don't know any tv actors names..😕
Aur phir itne sare stars kab kaam ayenge😉😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kabslocks

I am reading it as well as enjoying it too. please continue


Hmm ...
Thanks for reading! 😊
N for continuing this I really think there's something wrong with this story . ..😕

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😊
Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 11 years ago

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