MG os Baate kuch unkahi si part 2,3, last part page 18,22,26 - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
u updated...y no pm?? Wonderful update! Maaneet alone n Mana cannot control! Her blouse knot are loose! Maan calls Meera! Wt did they plan? update soon n do pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 4 ( last )

he just went near them and ask what happen why you all standing hear like this and where is geet dev oh maan she feel not well so she taking rest you just give her company till we finish our dinner ok maan just nodded in yes , all just went from their and maan entered in hotel room and just froze in his place

he just get shock of his life he just stand on door with open mouth ,word are not coming from his word just than he get sms Maaan apna mhoo to band kar lo ye sapana nahi hakikat hai aur wo sifr tumari rah dekh rahi hai and me and meera staying in same resort if you need us ,dev.vicky ,meera and anni

poor maan just look to hear and there they standing near lift and give him thump up poor boy first time in his life all sharam se pani pani they give him best gift their first night in hotel room they all know they have to travel for another 3 hour than other custom in house than it may not possible that they have their sr may be geet get tired ohhh and his bro just make his day no no night he just give shy smile to them and sas them thanks with smiley face and just eneted in their new world where they become maaneet he just closed door oh poor boy in his life first time feel so nervous ...

he just took deep breath yes it is big moment of their marriage life part of their divine love which bounded in front of their family and their love one and holy fire this night is their journey to become one in all sense do se ek hone ki journey tan se ,man se attma se (with body , mind and soul)

In lamhon ke daaman mein

Paakiza se rishte hain

Koi kalma mohabat ka

Dohraate farishte hain

There are lovely relationships

In the lap of moments

The angels are re-reciting

The word of love 2

maaneet feel like ,nature also give them privacy , silence and sky is surprised with their beauty as couple nature also supporting them to their Milan ...just than rain start in heavily and because of thunder voice poor geet who is sit there with long veil hell nervous to maan look , maan touch just run to maan and hug him tightly because of fear

Khaamosh si hai zameeen

Hairaan sa falak hai

Ek noor hi noor sa ab aasmaan talak hai

The earth is quiet

The sky is surprised

There is an brightness up till the sky

maan first get shock than happy with geet sudden hug her soft touch on his body oh it so amazing like so many flowers touching his body and it flame desire in him after some time when geet feel his hot breath on her shoulder than she relished in fear she just hug maan and maan put his face on her shoulder , she want to went away from him but maan grip so tight she just wriggle in his hug like fish and she mummer in slow voice please

and maan just loosen grip on her and geet just run to balcony door which have attached balcony rain she stand near door , cool air and rain drop just touching her beautiful face and maan get J with that drop who touch his geet face shamelessly he want to weep that all drops from her face

he feel like her bangel ,her payal making music in atmosphere, when geet taking deep breath to control her raising breath , try to correct her hair which is flying with cool air that drops which are shining in candle light like pearl he feel love in the air

Nagme hi Nagme hain jaagti soti fizaaon mein

Husn hai saari adaaon mein

Ishq hai jaise hawaaon mein

There is melody in the atmosphere

There is beauty in every style

It's like love is in the air

he stop for second word love , yes he is love with this girl from eng to today yes he feel so new feeling in his heart how he get tense with her opening nougat , sms of meera bhabhi , how he stop himself for her happiness oh he feel like dream or reality so many emotions are coming in his heart

Kaisa yeh ishq hai

Kaisa yeh khawaab hai

Kaise jazbaat ka Umda sailab hai

What is this love?

What is this dream?

How has this flood of emotions erupted?2

Din badle raatein badli

Jeene ke andaaz hi badle hain

Days have changed,so have the nights

The way of living has changed

hear geet also in deep thought how her life change a girl who don't stop to talk now just mute in front of him , who never handle anyone tease now love to tease by him oh poor girl just get shy with her changing behavior how her life change after meeting with this Maan singh khurana

In lamhon ke daaman mein

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Samay ne yeh kya kiya

Badal di hai kaaya

Tumhein maine paa liye

Mujhe tumne paya

What has time done?

It has changed the side

I have attained you

You have attained me

just geet gasp when maan just stand very closed to her his body touching to her maan take aside her duppata and just blow to her shoulder and start to open her long hair , any every time his hand brushing to her shoulder and she feel like current passing from her body this desire ...passion just than in husky voice mummer near her ear geet please took that veil again , his lips slightly brush to her ear and she shake like dry leaf oh ...

Mile dekho aise hai hum

Ke do sur hon jaise madham

Koi zyaada na koi kaam

Kise raag mein

We have met the same way

As if two tunes have moderated

None of the tune is more or less

In the music

with shaking hand she just took that veil again and maan just turn her to himself now they are standing facing each other she just closed her eyes that transparent red veil oh on veil itself maan just kiss on her forehead , her eyes her cheek , and she just hold her breath she feel like that veil just disappear from her face and his lips making magic ...

maan just took that veil up and pull that duppata away from her head and just throw on ground ...maan just come closed to her lips and just say in most husky voice geet are you ready to take next step or you want to wait ...to know each other geet feel so proud of this man who try to control his desire and asking for her yes ,reply ...but she feel so shy to ans maan just say if your ans is yes just open your beautiful eyes I want lost in them geet please geet just took deep breath and just open her eyes and twinkle come in maan eyes he saw only love trust in her eyes , he just bend down and brush his lips with his lips and geet moan MMMaan

that sit maan just took that rosy petal in his lips which is teasing him from so many days , his desire start to play ...and he just start to play with her lips ...he feel like it is soft things and sweet like honey oh he just don't want to stop to kiss her and when geet lost in his kiss , he just make pattern on her smooth back which is teasing him from tea time he want touch it and geet gsap with his touch and open her mouth and maan tongue entered in her mouth and start to play with her mouth the kiss turn more and more passionate geet just try to respond to his passion


when they feel breathless he stop to kiss her and just took her in his arm and out her on bed poor geet get shy with his gaze like he is watchng her withcloth also ...he just turn and sleep on her back and maan growm geet oh her flowlesss marble white back ,that blouse which have only two dori and deep cut , he just put his plam onher back and start to make pattern on her back geet took duvet in her hand to control her moan


but next second she moan loudly as maan just open that two naught in one go and his lips start mark her on back he just kissing her from neck to low side of back with open mouth kiss that blouse just hanging loosely when he get satisfied with her back he just turn her she just hold that chole so her front side don't get n*** maan is maan he just blow on her navel and geet just hold his hair with her both hand and maan just took chance and just throw that choli somewhere

she just gasp with maan action and try to hide herself and for that she just hug him oh poor boy just moan loudly oh gggeeet and just kiss her shoulde give her first bite mark on her shoulder and mummer geet please and geet just cross her hand in front and come out from hug with closed eyes also she feel his gaze on her ...maan just took away her both hand and put on his cloth and within second maan come out from his upper side maan make her laid down and just look her beauty ...it is just out of world and he mummer perfect just perfect and next moment he start to worship that women's beauty with his hand , lips , tongue that room just fill with geet non stop moan

both just feel on fire fire of desire , love ,passion

Ke prem aag mein

Jalte dono hi the tan bhi mann bhi

Mann bhi hai tan bhi

Both heart and body are burning in the

Fire of love


Mere khawaabon ke is gulistaan mein

Tumse hi to bahaar chhai hai

Phoolon mein rang mere the lekin

In mein khushboo tumhi se aai hai

The garden of my dreams

Has blossomed because of you

My flowers had color

But they have fragrance because of you

just than maan get satisfied with sucking kissing, kenneling her blossom he just took out his lengha and say geet please look to my eyes when we become one in all sense please ,geet just open her eyes and maan just start to kiss he from her eyes to toe her hand making magic on her blossom , on her leg and just he stouch his whole body to touch her body than she got he is also nude like her and his that part touching or poking on her tummy she just moan maan and maan mummer ready geet she just nodded in yes and maan just try to entered in her it is hard because her virgin body she have a adjust with his m*******


she moan in pain tear come from her eyes maan just kiss her cheek , tear and say geet it just for second ...can I she just nodded in yes and he again try and this time he just broke her virginity and both moan in pain and desire next maan just took her in new world where pain turn in sweet pain ...pleasure

Kyon hai yeh arzoo

Kyon hai yeh justaju

Kyon dil bechain hai

Kyon dil betaab hai

Why is this desire?

Why is this search?

Why is the heart uneasy?

Why is the heart restless?

Din badle raatein badli baatien badli

Jeene ke andaaz hi badle hain

In lamhon ke daaman mein

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Nagme hi Nagme hain jaagti soti fizaaon mein

Husn hai saari adaaon mein

Ishq hai jaise hawaaon mein 2

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg it was what i thought it was
as in their sr preps
thanx to his siblings
oh ho maan puttar kya baat hai
so sr it is
damn that was hott
and passionate
and sizzling
haiyye main mar jawan
finally they are one
he asked her if she is ready
and she said yes
only then he continued so sweet right
cheers for pm
maan i guess right time you got you love her mate
and boy did he realise it at right moment
am glad about that
and she too kinda confessed
uska baad well what was supposed to happen did happen
chalo at least maan patience and control werent tested too much
thats something right
usually he has to exercise lot of control
poor maan but not so much
well thats a lie
he had been wating since their engagement naa
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab passionate update! Its their SR! Meera sends msg to a shoked Maan! Maan admires her beauty! Maan is in love with her! Maaneet become one! superb song! Well written! Thanks 4 a terrific OS ! Pls post epilogue! Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maans fam gv him a sweet surprise arranging their sr in hotel
They became one in all sense
Nice os
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update😊😊😃😊😊
love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the PM
Lovely update
Maan got such a wonderful surprise from his family ... So sweet...
At last they become one in all senses
Edited by achu66 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan got such a beautiful surprise gift from his family...Maaneet became one...loved their lovely Romantic moments...loved it so much...Waiting eagerly for the Epilogue...Thanks for the PM dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update dear so hot dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
surprised maaneet sr arranged hotel
finally maaneet became one
lovely update

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