MG os Baate kuch unkahi si part 2,3, last part page 18,22,26 - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally maaneet get some privacy lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely...loving d arranged marriage thing...
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Fantastic yaar
Maan and naughty was just get
Haye humari sherni is soo shy shy
Maan toh bas geet ko tease hi kar raha hai
Will b waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww...such a cute update...loved the car romance of maaneet...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n excellent update! Dev n Annie r too much! Poor Maan! Annie played a prank on him! Maaneet alone! Maan cannot control! update soon! Well written
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 3



but now he get biggest difference of both marriage in love marriage you know each other , there is no newness , shyness in touch , hug because with dating that become old to them but in arrange marriage the relation is blossom like flower slowly in that every moment every touch look new for both of them this anxiety longing for each other just pull to each other ,you just waiting for small touch also it just pull to each other ...in new world their own world

first touch first hug first kiss ...so much things he just love this all (tanvi get it na ) this suspense in your first night with her oh god he just smile with closed eyes and geet all fida on her maan smile , she slap herself your maan ye kab hua geet ... just than maan open his eyes and both just lost in each other eyes both start to talk with each other with their eyes ...mahi just than driver use brake and geet just lost her balance and just bend on maan


gup-chup gup-chup chup chup...

Secretly, silently...

do dil mil rahe hain magar chupke chupke...

Two hearts are meeting, but quietly.

sabko ho rahi hai haan sabko ho rahi hai khabar chupke chupke

Everyone is noticing; yes, everyone is quietly noticing.

do dil mil rahe hain magar chupke chupke

Two hearts are meeting, but quietly and secretly.

geet face so near to maan face maan just want to touch her face love her , kiss her , he just gulp hard and current pass from geet body when maan just cup her face and say in husky voice beautiful just beautiful ...geet just bend little to maan she want to touch his face his handsome face and geet took her hand to touch maan

maan phone ring loudly and geet just went away from maan , she feel so shy , she try to touch his face she just closed her eyes and took deep breath , maan cribbed on that caller who called him in wrong time he just glare to phone and took call he just took called and say yes he will


and he about to turn geet same time geet turn to him for say something but both just come so closed to each other their face are so closed to each other both hot breath falling on each other face , her rosy lips just shake like patel , their closed proximity both could hear each other raising heart beats dhak dhak dhak dhak ...they want to see away from each other but their mind , eyes not lessioning them it is just like magic they are under spell of magic


saanson mein bari bekaraari

Their breaths are unsteady;

aankhon mein kayi raat jage

they've stayed away nights on end.

kabhi kahin lag jaaye dil to

Sometimes when you fall in love,

kahin phir dil na lage

you aren't pleased by anything.

apne dil mein zaraa thaam luun

I'll just keep hold of my heart,

jaadu ka main ise naam duun

since I recognize that this is magic.

jaadu kar rahaa hai asar chupke chupke

Quietly the magic is taking effect.

do dil mil rahe hain magar chupke chupke

Two hearts are meeting, but quietly and secretly.

at last maan control his feeling he don't want to lose his sense in car , today night is special for them and he want to make that more special ,he just tore his gaze from her and say wo we are stopping for dinner in 15 minute she just nodded like innocent child

aise bhole bankar hai baithe

They sit so innocently,

jaise koi baat nahin

as if there's nothing at all going on.

sab kuchh nazar aa rahaa hai

But everything is apparent (to those around them).

din hai yeh raat nahin

This is broad daylight, not the dark of night.

kya hai kuchh bhi nahin hai agar

What is it, if it's nothing at all?

honthon pe hai khaamoshi magar

Their lips are silent, but...

baatein kar rahi hain nazar chupke chupke

silently their glances speak to each other.

do dil mil rahe hain magar chupke chupke

Two hearts are meeting, but quietly and secretly.

geet also go back and nodded in yes , she get amazes with her own behavior

after some time car just stop near hotel ,oh it is beautiful resort ...but geet fix in problem big problem she searching for anni or meera bhabhi dev wife she want to go rest room she feel like her back naught get open any time and she cant even tell maan ...she feel so shy to tell him she somehow come out from car and try to cover her back with her sari but maan saw that

her blouse who have naught design it start to get open oh ...he get tense that how he tell her and geet just try to walk and her moment ...now he is fix he just sms meera bhabhi and pull geet to himself now geet back fix on maan front , till than their car also went to parking area



geet get shock with maan act but maan next word she get embarrassed with his word

in low voice maan mummer geet I know your blouse naught , geet gasp and push more herself to maan and both feel like current pass from their body , geet cold back touching maan front , he feel her heartbeat which increased with their closeness he just closed his eyes and say please geet don't move please it is so hard for me please

kahin aag lagne se pahale

Before flames burst into life,

uthta hai aisa dhuwan

smoke like this arises.

jaisa hai idhar ka nazaara vaisa hi udhar ka samaa

And it looks just like it does right here.

dil mein kaisi kasak si jagi

What an ache awakes in the heart!

donon jaanib baraabar lagi

Both sides seem (to feel it) equally.

dekho to idhar se udhar chupke chupke

Look from one to the other, silently.

do dil mil rahe hain magar chupke chupke

Two hearts are meeting, but quietly.

sabko ho rahi hai khabar chupke chupke

Quietly, everyone is noticing.

do dil mil rahe hain magar chupke chupke

Two hearts are meeting, but quietly.

gup-chup gup-chup chup chup...

Secretly, silently...

magar chupke chupke...

But quietly...

just than meera come to their rescue and just give shawl to maan and maan just put that shawl around geet shoulder and meera just took geet with her , maan just took deep breath and went to took coffee after 15 minite he get sms from meera bhabhi please come in room xyz its urgent

maan get tense with sms , is she ok or not ,if something happen to her , her health etc etc, in no time he just reach to hotel room where he saw meera , anni Vicky and dev standing near door with serious face he just miss his heart beat oh...

he just went near them and ask what happen why you all standing hear like this and where is geet

dev oh maan she feel not well so she taking rest you just give her company till we finish our dinner ok

maan just nodded in yes , all just went from their and maan entered in hotel room and just froze in his place

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
they are planning to send him to his bride
haiyye kya baat hai
ufff maneet being so shy shy
wait could he not have closed the knot
guess not huh
wonder what they planned for him
wait dont have to wonder about it
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsom updt
now wht maan sa
waiting fr next

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice😃
shy geet n trying hard to control maan
why maan get shock after entering hotel room
waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awaesm part maaneet moments r simply superb waitng 4 nxt part mahi

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