MG SS - Ek Anokhi Grahapravesh updated last pt on pg 39 jul 2.. - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
so maan has got repaired the swing because of geet and now he is badly missing her if he doesnt see her and geet now freely enjoying with her old memories
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
wow nice part
maan liking geet coming home...he repaired the swing😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
so maan repaired d swing...n wants to see her...wow maan good going...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
lovely update
maan is missing geet...
in past maan repaired swing for geet...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
part 4
awesome...
interesting...
Geet and her antics are cute...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
part 5
awesome dear...
so this Geet's second home?
what is she doing here?
Maan is surprised as well as curious now...
nice...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Part - 7

Geet turns back and finds Maan angry...

But why is he so angry...she has not done anything wrong...

She only trying to clean this mess and bring back this garden to a bloom again...

Just like it used to be when she was here...

Maan finds her plucking the thorny plants...

This plave has been left like a dessert for months and there maybe some dangerous creatures around the bushes...

Maan gets scared that something would harm Geet...

How could she be so stupid to step inside this place first?

This is not the place what she thinks, this has turned into some jungle now...

Maan runs to get her out the place immediately...

Maan: Geet, ye kya kar rahi ho?

Geet turns back to answer him and a thorn runs into her tender finger...

Geet cries in pain...

Geet: aahhh

Maan ruhses to help her...

Maan: kya hua? Mujhe dikao

Maan looks at the blood drops and plucks the thorn out...

Maan: tujhe ye sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi?

He takes her in and dresses her wound...

Geet: ye hummara rose garden hua kartha tha

Maan: toh?

Geet: aaj kaise ho gaya?

Maan: Geet, ab ye mera hai, tujhe isski fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, samji?

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, tum samajthe kya apne aapko? Tumne toh sirf iss ghar ko dekhne ke permission liya tha, haina?

Geet nods her head: haan

Maan: ye sab karne se pehle mujhse poochna chahiye hai ya nahi?

Geet is scared...

Geet: woh...mein bas aapki madat kar rahi thi

Maan: kaisi madat?

Geet: mein aapke garden ko saaf karkke aur pehle ki tarah ussko sundar banana chahathi thi

Maan: mujhe tummare madat nahi chahiye, agle bar aaise bewakoofi mat karna, agar tumme kuch ho jaatha toh?

Maan bahut dar gaya tha...

Geet can't understand why he is so concerned...

Geet: mein teek hoon, mujhe kuch nahi hua

Maan: kuch nahi hua? Ye kya hai?

Maan points her wound...

Geet: ye kuch nahi hai

Maan applies anti-septic...

Geet: aahhh, chodo mere haath

Maan: Geet, tum bachi toh nahi ho, anti septic nahi lagathi toh infection ho jayega

Maan gently blows on her wound...

Geet feels shy...

She pulls back her hand and tries to get away from him...

Maan stops her and pulls her closer...

Maneet eyelock...mahi...

Nakul comes and knocks...

He has brought them snacks...

Geet: thanks

Maan: coffee meinne nahi banaya, tumme toh Nakul ko thank karna chahiye Geet

Geet: woh nere jula ko teek karne ke liye

Maan smiles...

Geet: aur

Maan: aur?

Maan looks into her eyes...

Geet is unable to meet his eyes...she looks somewhere else...

Geet: mere ghaav ko mallam lagane ke liye bhi

Geet blushes...

Maan is surprised to see her face turn red ...

He thought that she is still a kid...

But this girl is no longer a kid...

Maan too is smitten by her raw beauty and her innocence...

Geet: toh mein chalthi hoon

Geet leaves but she has made her deep impressions on Maan that could last for his entire lifetime...

Maan starts to wait for the next Sunday...

This time he gets the garden cleared and readied to be planted...

Geet brought some rose plants with her this time...

She is happy to see her garden ready for planting...

She plants them herself...

Maan keeps looking at her from the balcony...

She finds her struggling to do it alone...

He asks chandu to go and help her...

Geet finally waters them and strictly orders Chandu to take good care of them...

They should have grown taller and started to flower when she comes next time...

Chandu listens to her carefully as if she is the boss here...

Since Maan respects her so much the servants tend to obey her too...

She just begins the work and Maan completes it...

He gets more rose plants and fills the garden with them...

He appoints a gardener...

He could have done it himself but he doesn't want to disappoint Geet...

She wanted to do it herself know...

She loves this place so much...she has fond memories of this place...

She still treats it as her own...

Maan won't complain as she has entered as an angel in his life...

He just wants to hold her hands and follow her blindly...

She is the one who could teach him how to enjoy life's little joys and bring soul to his otherwise empty life...she is the one who has filled the void deep inside his heart...the one to take Dadi's place in his life...

Slowly and steadily they began to compliment each other and enjoy their newly found company...

Unknowingly they start to admire each other and become inseperable...

Though they meet only on Sundays , it's just those memorable moments that they spend together that keeps them going for the whole week...

Geet is now very comfortable at KM...she doesn't need anyone's permission now...

Everything is done to her will...usski marzi hi chalthi...

Even Maan had to give in...how could he say no to this cute innocent doll?...

Maan plans to go to Mumbai this weekend...

He informs Geet and asks her to be careful when he is not around...take good care of herself and the house...Geet agrees to take care of KM...

Geet comes up with a plan to turn this weekend memorable...

Afterall this place won't remain the same in the near future...

She wants to spend as much time here as she could...

Iss jagah se kitne sundar yaadein judi hai Geet ki...

Her days spent here with her uncle and aunty were the most happiest so far and for her uncle and auntu too it was a dream come true for them, having a kid in their family...

As Maan is not here she can do whatever she wants...haina?

Her aunty used to throw kitty parties for her friends every month and Geet enjoyed them as she got to get pampered by all of them...

They ask her to sing and dance and they all just loved this cutie angel...

Geet wants to relive those occasions...

As it's Sunday most of her friends were free and she wanted to throw a party for them...

A farewell party to her beloved home...

She called some friends and soon they all got together...

They were all so excited as it's very tough for them to get a wonderful place like this exclusively for them to party, it's a girls' show...they can do anything they want to...

Wherever they go, a friends b'day or disos the boys dominate them often...

But this is their party...

Geet tips the servants and makes the arrangements...

Nakul makes some desi delicacies and Pinky gets some refreshments...

Some one brought a music system and they palyed the latest numbers and danced their heart out...

There is no one to stop them...

They just freaked out and made a mess...

No one noticed the time and it's already 3 pm...

Some parents called and they ended their bash reluctantly...

Many wanted to have the party every weekend...

Everyone left except Geet and Pinky...

Pinky: chalo Geet, ab hum bhi cahltein hai...

Geet is overwhelmed, she wanted to stay there for a few minutes all alone...

Geet: Pinky, tum jao, mein kuch dher yahan akhele rehna chahathi hoon

Pinjky: par zyada dher mat karna, jaldhi aana, bye

Pinky leaves...

Geet sits there, her mind going back in time...

And she was completely lost in her thoughts until someone came and shook her up...

Geeet

It's Maaan...

Geet is worried...babaji, ab mein kya karoon?'

Inko itne jaldhi aane ki kya zaroorat thi?

Geet runs around to hide herself...

But that's impossible, Maan is already here...and no one can escape his eagle eyes, particularly Geet Handa...haina?

Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
wow maan fulfilling geet's wishes
ab maan kya bolega party keliye
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
geet tu toh gayi kam se...abb kya hoga...geet n maan falling fr each other...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
nice update..
both r falling for eachother...

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