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Posted: 11 years ago

Part - 32

At KM...

Geet is very satisfied with her first day's work(?)...

She is also feeling very hungry...

She heads to the kitchen and Maan goes to freshen up...

Geet peeps in to see what's cooking...she had smelled yummy chat masala...

Nakul comes running seeing Geet...he had come with Maan's juice...

He thought it is Maan, but Maan never comes there, Nakul takes it to the room...

Geet comes to take it...Nakul gives it to her...now that Geet is here, it's her duty...

Nakul: Maan sir ke liye hai

Geet looks disappointed...

Geet: kyun? Mein nahi pisakthi?

So saying Geet takes a sip...it's without sugar...

She is angry with herself...Nakul already warned her that it's for MSK...

Then why did she drink it? She curses herself and gives it back to Nakul...

Nakul : iss mein cheeni nahi hai, Maan sir aaise hi pithe

Geet: mera muh karab ho gaya

Nakul: aap ke liye kuch aur hai, aap khalo, mein issko Maan sir ko dekha aatha hoon

Nakul: Chandu, Geet m'am ke liye chai aur nastha lekhe aao

Chandu brings her tea and snacks...

Nakul had made gol gappe for Geet...this is what Geet wanted...

Geet is very happy...Geet finishes them in a second and heads to her garden...

She loves to spend her evenings there...she goes to the swing and Maan just comes...

Maan takes her to the swing and starts swinging just like her uncle does...

Geet likes it very much...

Maan: tum enjoy karo, mein chaltha hoon, mujhe koi kaam hai

Maan leaves abd Geet continues swinging looking at the smilimg flowers...

Her mobile rings...she takes the call...

It's some new number...Geet wonders who it might be?

Geet: halo

"Geet, tum aagayi?" it's Ranno...

Geet is very happy to hear from her after a long gap...

Her father had but the landline connection for Ranno used to speak with Geet secretly...

Then she used to call her Didi's mobile but that too is dead now...

Geet: maaa, tu kaisi hai? aur Didi ka mobile bhi nahi lagtha? Didi kaisi hai?

Ranno: mein bahut achchi hoon, lo tum hi didi se baat karlo

Geet: Didi wahan? Mujhe pehle hi patha tha aaisa hi hoga, buaji ne didi ko ghar se nikhaldiya haina? Ye sab meri hi galthi hai

Geet starts crying...

channi: Geeet, tu ro rahi hai? mujhe koi ghar se nahi nikaal saktha, mein kudh aayi hoon maa ke paas

Geet: kya?

Didi: tujhe toh kuch bhi patha nahi hai, Maan ji ne tujhe kuch nahi bathaya?...

Maan had forgotten to tell in all the confusion at Rohtak...

Geet: aap kya keh rahe ho?

Geet is shocked...why didn't Maan tell her anything...

What was he hiding? What happened to her didi?

How could Maan be so selfish? Apna kaam ho gaya toh sab ko bhool jaathe hai kya?

Geet bahut naraaz ho jaathi...

Geet: didi, ye kya ho gaya hai?

Channi: Geet, mein bathathi hoon ki kya hua

Geet: aap teek toh hona? Aur chotu kaisa hai? woh aapke saath hi haina?

Geet curses herself for all this?

Why did she run away? She never thought about her poor sister...

She feels ashamed and guilty...

Geet: didi mujhe maaf kardo, meinne bahut badi gakthi kardhi ye shadhi karkke

Channi: hare pagli, tumne koi galthi nahi kiya hai

Geet: nahi, aap mujse joot bolthe ho, mein jaanthi hoon, mein bahut bhuri hoon

Channi: tum bahut achchi ho Geet, aur tere Maanji tumse bhi achche hai, agar woh nahi hothe toh shayad mein aaj bhi ussi ghar mein aaj bhi ek gulam bankke rehthi

Geet: toh ye sab unka kaam hai? unko kya haq hai aapke zindagi barbad karne ki

Channi: tu kya kehthi ho? kissne meri zindagi barbad kiya tha? Aur kisne mere zindagi mujhe wapas diya hai

Geet: par didi, ab aap kaise kush hogi?

Channi: Geet, tum kya bakwaas batein kar rahi ho? mein bahut hi kush hoon, aur iss ke liye toh humme Maan ji ko hi shukriyada karna chahiye, tum bhi unko meri taraf se shukriya kehdo Geet

Geet: kya? Maan ne aaisa kya jadu karliya hai? ab aapko bhi unhonne apne bathon se behkaya aur aapko ghar chodne ko kaha? Aap bhi unke bathon mein aake itni badi galthi kaise kar sakthe?

Chnni: Geet, meinne aaj hi apne liya hue galthyon ko sudara hai. abmujhe bhi patha chal gaya hai ki guna karna hi nahi guna ko sehna bhi galat hai

Geet: didi?

Channi: haan Geet, ye toh meinne tum se hi seekha tha, jaise tum meri tarah kamzoor hokke uss zabardasthi shadhi nahi kiya aur apne haq ke liye lada bhi, jaise hummari mausi, aaj tumme dekhke mujhe mausi ji hi yaad aathe

Kyun nahi? unki parwarish ne hi Geet ko kamzoor se himmatwali sherni jo banaya hai...aur Maan ko bhi yahi sherni se pyaar ho gaya tha,haina?

Agar Geet unke mausi ke ghar pe gusne ki himmat nahi karthi? Agar Geet ne Maan se baat karne ki himmat nahi kiya hai? toh Geet ko Maan nahi miltha, aur Maan ko bhi Geet nahi milthi, haina?

Channi tells her what happened...

Flash back...after Geet left with Maan and Channi and her hubby returned home, buaji refused to let her in and Rajji fought her way in...

Then Daman and buaji started to threaten her to transfer the property that Channi got from Geet to daman's name, else she has no place in this family and she had to go back to her house...

But Channi was adamant to stay with her hubby and kids...

They threats grew bigger and bigger day by day...

Geet had constantly inquired about Channi and Ranno never told her anything as she didn't want Geet to be worried...pehle hi Geet bahut pareshaan hai apne shahdi ko lekhe aur najaane wahan kya haan hoga...

Then after Handaji disconnected the landline Geet called Channi and she too told Geet that everything was fine...buaji got angry that Channi spoke With Geet and she smashed Channi's hubby's mobile that she used to contact Geet...

Ranno couldn't handle it alone and she tried to call Geet, but Geet had switched off her mobile at Rohtak so she went to Sarpanchjii and got Maan's no to speak with Geet...

Maan told her that Geet has gone on a trip with her friends and he found Ranno's voice broken, he asked her what's wromg and ranno told him everything...

Maan immediately went to Channi's place...

Daman was fully drunk as usual and he and his mother were trying to throw Channi out of the house unless she signs the papers on Daman's hands...

Channi is not ready to sign as it's the ony source she has...

Maan enters and beats up Daman and warns buaji not to say a word about Geet and her family...he cn't tolerate her rubbish language and he gets very angry...

He thinks that it's time for Channi to leave her so calle sasural which is not a safe place for her to live...

Maan: didi, aap ab yahan nahi reh sakthe, ye pagal aurat aur usska nalayak beta aapko jaan se mardalenge, aap apne bte ko lekhe aayiye, mein aapko apna ghar chod detha hoon, agar Geet aaj yahan hothi toh yahi karthi, aap mujhe paraya mat samjiye, mein yahan sirf Geet ke liya aaya hoon, aur mein nahi chahatha ki aap yahan inke saath rahe

Maan stares Channi's hubby Lucky...

Lucky hides behind Channi...

Maan asks Channi to pack her things and Channi goes and gets her things...she is fed up with her darfok hubby and decides that she had had enough, it's time to move on...Geet had given her the property which had given her the hope to survive on her own...

And moreover Geet is there to support her whenever she needed her help...

As Channi follows Maan, Lucky stops her...

Lucky: Channi, mujhe bhi tummare saath lekhe jao

Buaji: kabardar tumne iss ghar ke bahar katam rakha tooh, phir tum bhool jao ki men teri maa hoon

Lucky: tum meri maa hi nahi ho sakthi, chalo Channi

Channi is so happy...she goes and hugs her hubby...

This is the first time he had stood up against his mother in support of Channi...

Lucky bows his head and follows Channi...

Channi: aap toh ab mere sher ho, apna shir utake chaloji, mein toh aapki hokke aaj hi apna shir utakke chal sakthi, mein bahut kush hoon ji, aap aage jao, ab aap mujhe jahan bhi lekhe jaokke mein aapke saath aathi hoon

Buaji: Lucky, tum usske saath jaathe toh tumme iss jiadaat se ek paisa bhi nahi milega

Lucky: mahi chahiye mujhe ye daulat, nahi chahiye koi zameen, aap hi rakhlo, jiss din meinne iss Maanji ko apne ghar ko hummare Geet ko shadhi ke toofah mein dene ko dekha, ussi din mujhe patha chal gaya ki pyaar daulat se mehenga hotha hai, aur aap logon ko woh kabhi samaj mein nahi aayega, mein to hiss Maanji ko jaantha bhi nahi aur ye hummare Geet ko jitna pyaar karthe honge ki unhonne Geet ki kushiyon ke liye apna ghar ko hi kurban kiya, aur unke saath shadhi ke badh Geet ke aankhon mein jo kushi meinne dekah, woh meinne aaj hi Channi ke aankhon men dekh raha hoon, aap log samjthe ke shadhi ki kamyabhi ladhki ke maaike se liya hue dahej se hothi hai, nahi, shadhi ki kamiyabhi uss ladhki ki pyaar aur sasural mein usski kushiyon se hi hothi hai, mein chaltha hoon

They leave and Lucky is confused where to take Channi...

Maan advises him to stay at Channi's house till they sort out their future plans...

Maan takes them to Hoshiarpur...

Handaji stops Maan from entering the house and Maan is happy that Channi is finally safe with her family...he then left...

Channi thanks Maan for his help for if not for him Channi would have succumbed to their threats by now...and she would have gone back to that same hell...with a useless hubby...

Channi: Geet, tum toh bahut kush hogi, Maanji ke saath jo hai

Haan Geet bahut bahut kush hai...tears run down her eyes as she heard everything...

Geet: didi mein badh mein baat karthi hoon

As she hears the whole story Geet is gets very emotional...

Aakhir meinne aaise kya kardhi ki Maan mere liye itna kuch kar rahe hai?

Babaji, mein wada karthi hoon ki ab mein Maan ki zindagi kushiyon se bar dhoongi, jaise Maan ne mere sare pareshaaniyon ko dhoor karkke mere muskurahat wapas laye hai, waise hi ab mein sirf Maan ke chehre pe hasee muskurahat dekhna chchathi hoon...

Aur ye mera wada hai aapse ki mein kabhi Maan ko akhele mehsoos nahi karne doongi, itne din woh jaise bhi ho ab mein har haal mein unke saath doongi, aur kabhi unko chodke nahi jaoongi...

Geet just wants to be with her Maan now...

Geet runs upstairs...she keeps searching for him here and there...

Geet: Maan...kahan hai aap?

She looks everywhere...Maan is not in his room...

Then she remembers that Maan has shifted to her room...

Geet: mein bhi na? kaise bhool gayi?

She runs to her room...She runs to see her Maan, Geet ka Maan...

Ab Geet Maan ko aur chahane lagi...

Maan is in their room...

Geet goes and hugs him...

Geet: aap bahut achche ho

Maan is surprised...

She is still breathing heavily...

Maan: kya hua Geet? tum itne tez kyun bhaagthi ho? dhere nahi chal sakthi? Kahin gir jaathi toh?

Maan scolds her but Geet isn't hearing a word...

She keeps staring him...she is overwhelmed with joy and gratitude...

Tears well her eyes...

Maan stops them from droping...he wipes them off...

Maan: mujhe inn asuoon se sakt nafrat hai Geet, haas karke jab woh tummare aankhon se ghirthe hai

Geet still couldn't control her tears...

Maan: nahi Geet, ab tum kabhi nahi rogi, mere hothe hue tummare ankhon se ek boondh asoo bhi nahi nikhal saktha

Geet's tears stop immediately...as if they are also afraid of MSK...

She burries her head in his chest and calms down...

It's magical...as soon as she is in his embrace she feels so light, all her worries seem to vanish into thin air...she feels so secure...

Maan tries to console her...he is really worried...

Maan: kya hua Geet?

Geet: aap itne ahcche kaise ho sakthe?

Maan: kyunki tum milli ho mujhe, Geet

Maan kisses her forehead...

Geet: didi ka phone aaya tha

Maan understands her feelings now...

But Maan thinks that it's his duty as a hubby and he has just fulfilled it...

Maan: ohhh, ab toh tumme kush hona chahiye Geet, lekhin tum toh hamesha rothi rehthi ho

Geet: abhi nahi, jab se aap se milli hoon, meinne toh rona hi bhool gayi thi

Maan: toh ye kya?

Geet: ye toh kushi ka asoo hai

Maan: achcha?

Maan tastes his fingers...

Maan: yuck

Geet: ye kya kar rAhe ho? pagal ho gaye ho kya?

Maan: nahi Geet, mujhe laga kushi ka asoo hai toh meeta hona chahiye, haina?

Geet: aap bhi na?

Maan: ab toh tummare ankhon se kushi ka asoo bhi nahi behega, samji tum?

Geet: chalo, ab aap yahan chup chupke kya kar rahe ho?

Geet finds that there's something wrong in her room...

Maan has been doing something...

Yes, he has successfully fixed hus dream girl's poster alomg with Ranbir's poster...

Geet moves Maan aside and looks at the poster, it's Katrina!

And she looks smokimg hot in the shiela ki jawaani poster...

Geet feels jealous now...but hse pretends to be OK with it...

Maan: kaisa hai Geet?

Geet: achcha hai, par aapko yeh wala poster hi milla kya?

Maan: kyun Geet? achcha nahi hai kya?

Geet: bahut ahchca hai

Geet turns away...

Geet: aapko ye idea kahan se aaya?

Maan: woh kya haina Geet, ye Ranbir haina Ranbir?

Geet: haan haan bolo

Maan: usne kal raat mujhse kaha ki sab apne apne Jodi ke saath hai aur woh yahan kab se akhela latak raha hai

Geet: kya? Ranbir ne poster se nikahlke aapse kaha tha?

Maan: kahan na, sapne mein, ab toh woh bhi kush mein bhi kush

Geet: aap itna kush kyun hothe ho?

Maan: ab toh Ranbir ke tarah Katrina bhi mere sapne mein aake

Geet: aapse baat karegi?

Geet toh jal rahi hai...

Maan: Katrina mujhse kya baat karegi?

Geet: ye teek hai

Maan: hum toh batein karkke apna time kyun karenge?

Maan winks...Geet just explodes...

Geet: aapko Katrina chahiye? Mein bhi dekhthi hoon ki ye yahan kaise rehthi?

Geet tears off botht the posters...

Ab Geet bhi kush aur Maan bhi kush...

Maan stops her and pulls her in to a hug...

Maan: itna gussa?

Geet: haan, Maan sirf mere hai, Geet ka Maan

Maan: ab tum bhi manthi haina ki Geet bhi sirf meri hai, Maan ki geet

Geet: haan

Maan: Geet

Geet: Kya?

Maan: dekho tumne phirse kya kiya?

Maan is fully aroused...

Geet pushes him on the bed...

Geet: ab dekhthe hai ki aapke spane mein kaun aatha?

For a change Geet gets all passionate and wild...

Maan toh babut mush ho gaya...ek theer mein do nishaani...

Mahiii ...

Ab inn donno ko hum akhela chodthe hai...

Ye tha Geet aur Maan ki anokhi Grahapravesh...ab yahan ye donno apne nanne munne bachon ke saath kush rahenge...happy ever after...jaise har Maneet ki kahaani unke ladayi mein shuru hothi aur mahi mahi mein katam hothi ye kahaani bhi yahi katam hothi...

THE END

STARTED NEXT FF...

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Posted: 11 years ago
i had missed few parts from maaneet SR😉
read all the parts...maaneet finally together & happy👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
kya geet...jhalli kahinki...shadi k baad husband n wife ek hi kamre mein rehte hai...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
fab yaar.. maaneet maaahiii.. u ended.. zabardast ending yaar.. do we get an epi? :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 32
last part
awesome dear...
why did u end it?
could have posted their kids part too na...
but lovely...
Maan has done so much to Geet's family...
and Geet is so happy...
excellent...

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