MG SS - Ek Anokhi Grahapravesh updated last pt on pg 39 jul 2.. - Page 6

maan kiya bole ga bechara geet per fida ho gaye hai

Part - 8

Maan had come back earlier...

Or maybe Geet didn't know that it's so late...

It's almost 6 pm and even Maan has returned from his trip...

He was surprised to hear that Geet is still here, at the terrace...

Normally she leaves by 4 pm...

Geet is shocked to see Maan...

She turns her back to him and gets busy tring to eat her gol gappe...

But she is too full...

She just tries to ignore him so that he would leave in anger...

But that's not going to happen...

Maan is in a way happy to find her still there...

Maan stares Geet and she knows very well that he is not going to leave without causing her trouble...

She then tries to manage the situation...

She pretends to be unaware of his early arrival...

Maan: Geeet

She turns and looks surprised as if she had not seen him...

Geet: aap? Yahan kaise?

Maan: Geet, ye sawaal toh mujhe karna chahiye tha, shayad tum bhool gayi ho ki ye mera ghar hai

Geet: woh...mein chalthi hoon, mujhe jaana hai

Geet runs and her duppatta flies in the wind and Maan catches it...

Geet stands there feeling shy...

Maan takes it to her and covers her...

Geet tries to leave but Maan still holds her duppatta slowly pulling her towards him...

Geet is a little scared...

Maan looks at her, he is not able to let her go...

He wants to have her with him forever...

He wants to feel her, to merge with her, his body aches for her...

His heart says that she is his Geet...his life, his love...

But his mind reminds him about the reality and warns him that this is impossible...

Maan: tum aaise nahi jaasakthi

Geet turns back and looks at him...

Maan: aaise kya dekh rahi ho? pehle mere sawaal ko jawab do, ye sab kya hai?

Geet: woh...mein apne iss gahr ko ek farewell party dena chahathi thi, aap issko demolish karnewale haina?

She looks very upset...

Maan: kya? tum ghar ko farewell dena chahthi thi?

Geet: haan, ye mere zindagi ka bahut khaas tukda haina?

Maan wonders who would treat a lifeless building so dearly...like a living person...

Geet: ab mein jaoon

Maan: nahiii

Geet is puzzled...

Maan wants her to stay with him some time longer...

Maan: iss jagah ko dekha, kitna ganda hai

Geet: woh, Cahndu haina, Chandu, Geet shouts

Cahndu comes running...

Geet: zara issko saaf kardo

Chandu starts cleaning...

Maan: Chanduuu, rukh jao

Chandu looks at Maan confused...

Maan: tumme aur koi kaam nahi hai kya?

Chandu: haina sir

Maan: tum jao, apna kaam karo

He still waits looking at poor Geet...

Maan: tumne suna nahi meinne kya kaha, jao, apna kaam karo

Chandu leaves...

Geet: ab isse kaun saaf karega?

Maan: aur kaun? tum

Maan: haan, mujhse bina poochkke itna sab kar sakthi haina? Toh isse saaf bhi tum hi karo

Maan stands there staring at her...

Geet stares back...

Maan: mujhe gurkke koi faida nahi, chalo, shuru hojao

Geet: mein akhele kaise kar sakthi?

Maan: mein kuch nahi jaantha

Geet starts cleaning...

She struggles to lift the table...

Maan helps her...

She is already tired...

Maan feels pity for her...

But he is liking this...

Maan: Geet, tumme kaise patha ki mein iss gahr ko demolish karnewala hoon?

Geet: mein sab jaanthi hoon, yahi aapka kaam haina? Aap bhi real estate ke business mein hi ho

Maan: achcha, toh tum mere barein mein itna sab kuch jaanthi ho? aur kuch jaanna hai toh mujhse hi pooch sakthi ho

Maan smiles...

Geet looks at her rose garden...

Maan: kya soch rahi ho?

Geet: aap issko toh kuch nahi karenge, haina?

She looks worried...

Maan: Geet, tumme toh patha haina ki mera kaam hi kuch aaisa hai, mein kya karoon?

Geet: par aapka naya project mein bhi garden hona chahiye haina? Issko bas aaise hi rehne do, pls

Maan: tumme ye jagah itna pasand hai

Geet: mujhe pasand ho ya na ho, kya farak padtha? Waise ye ab mera nahi hai

Maan: farak padtha hai Geet, tum bathao, tum chahathi haina ki ye sab aaise hi rahe?

Geet: haan

Maan: toh aaisa hi hoga Geet, mein tumme niraas nahi kar saktha

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, ab ye mera ghar hi rahega, hamesha

Geet: aap mere liye joot bol rahe haina?

Maan: tumme yakheen nahi hotha?

Geet: nahi, aapko kya zaroorat hai ki issko aaise hi rakhne ki?

Maan: sach mein Geet, mein toh issko renovate karne ka bhi soch raha tha, tum chaho toh, ye kaam tum hi kar skathi ho, iss ghar ko tumse zyada koi nahi jaantha, haina?

Geet: sachiii?

Maan just can't control himself...

He too hugs her...they get lost in each other...

Maan: chalo, mein tumme drop kartha hoon

Geet: mein chali jaoongi

Maan: Geet, bahut dher ho chukli hai, tum ab akhele kaise jaogi?

Geet: mein manage karloongi

Maan: tumne suna nahi meinne kya kaha?

Maan drops her at her hostel...

Geet looks very happy ...

Geet: Good Night sir

Maan: what? Tumne mujhe sir kyun bhulaya?

Geet: aaj se mein aapke liye kaam kar rahi hoona? toh aap mere boss ban gaye haina?

Maan: tum kya keh rahai ho? mujhe kuch samaj mein nahi aaya, meinne kab tumme kaam pe rakha?

Geet: kya? toh aap joot bol rahe the? Mein jaanthi thi, tum log na, aaise hi hothe ho, aapko sirf paison ki padi

Maan: Geet, ab meinne kya kiya? Meinne toh tummare liye kitna bada offer ko tukhraya hai, tumme maloom bhi hai ya nahi? Uss ghar ki keemat tum kya jaanthi ho?

Geet: dekha? meinne sahi kaha na? aap aur aapke paise

Geet tries to walk away without even looking back at Maan...

Maan runs and stops her...

Maan: tummare problem kya hai?

Maan is very angry...he holds her wrist so hard that it hurts her a lot...

Geet: chodo, chodo mere haath

Maan just then realizes what he is doing and controls himself...

But still he can't let her go...

He looks into her eyes...

They look so innocent...

She is still not able to understand his concern and his feelings...

She is too nave for all that...

Her love is only for his so called Mansion...

But why Geet? tumme mere pareshaani nazar nahi aathi?

Kya tum mere ankhon mein apne aap ko dkeh nahi apyi?

Kya tum inn aankhon mein apne liye itna bhi pyaar nahi dekhi?

Kya mein itna bhura hoon? Kya mujhe pyaar karne ki haq nahi hai?

Kya mein insaan nahi hoon? Kya mere paas dil nahi hai?

Kya mein kissi ko kush nahi rakh skatha?

Kya mein kssi ko pyaar nahi de saktha?

Kya mein kssi ke pyaar ke layak nahi hoon?

Maan ke dimag mein sawaal pe sawaal utke ussko pareshaan karthe...

Aur ye sare pareshaani Geet ke upar Maan ke gusse ko badathe...

Tumme bhi uss lifeless makhaan ki padi, meri itna bhi kadhar nahi hai?

Maan is very disappointed...he wants her to respond to his feelings...

Somehow he feels that she too likes him...

Maan keeps looking at her innocent yet bold eyes...

They tell him that she is also feeling the same...

They always mislead him and torture him...

But when the time comes to accept the truth they always back off...

Try to hide form him...

Maan hates this hide and seek...

He needs to know the truth immediately...

He needs to know that Geet loves him too...

But he has forgot to realize that Geet is too young and it must be even more difficult for her to handle this...Maan has to give her some time...

Yes, he has to let her realize that he loves her...and it's not a one-sided affair...

Geet may not know what's happenng to her, but Maan knows that she is also in love...

She has to accept it...sooner the better...

Maan won't wait for her a lifetime...

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Maan holds her hands tight as if she would escape and vanish...

He would never let her go...from his life...he needs her...

Maan keeps staring into her eyes waiting for an answer...

Trying to find out what their new message is...

Geet couldn't face those powerfull eyes...

What is that they want from her?

They are so demanding, commanding her always...

Yearning for something...yearning for her one look...one smile...

Why do they always follow her like a hawk?

Why is she afraid of them?

Why is she shying away from them?

What is stopping her?

She knows very well that she has no business with this man, she is only concerned about his new abode...one that he is least bothered of, but the one she is so fond of...

That's the only link they share...nothing else...haina babaji?

Geet can't take it anymore...

Geet: chodo mujhe, mujhe dard ho raha hai...

Kaise dard? Ye toh Geet hi jaanthi hai? Dil ka dard...

Maan tries to ease the situation...

Maan: toh tum kab kaam shuru kar rahi ho?

Geet: mujhe aapke saath koi kaam nahi karni

Maan: teek hai, mein koi aur naya architect ko hire kartha hoon

He just leaves his hold...

Geet didn't expect this...

Maan continues...

Maan: mein ek architect ko jaantha hoon, she is the best in town, she is best known for renovations, kehthe hai ki usske haath mein jadu hai, she turns the places into palaces, she just remodels them into new wonders, koi dekhega toh unko lagega ki ye naya hai, bilkul naya, she gives such a new look, but she is a little expensive, she wants to demolish everything she dislikes and wants everything to be upto her standard, tum toh ussko jaanthi hogi, Sameera

Ye naam sunthe hi Geet bahut pareshaan ho jaathi...

She knows Sameera very well...

She is a guest lecturer at her college...

Everyone is crazy about her...specailly the boys...

They just never miss her sessions...

She is known for her innovative ideas and her ultra modern designs...

She always likes changes...

Either her look or her dressing...she keeps changing them everytime...

There is always this buzz around her whenever she makes a visit...

she looks stunning in every look...

The girls are jealous of her and they try to copy her...

Geet likes the past more...

Our heritage, their elegance...their painstaking sillful workmanship...

Their interest in minute details...

Geet knows very well that Sameera would bring her house down within days...

As if there was an earthquake...

She would just convert it into a stylish concrete block, leaving no traces of its present looks...

Erasing Geet's fond memories of that place forevr...

Geet: ek minute, Maan sir

Maan turns back with a victorious smile...

MSK just can't stop smiling when this girl is around...

Maan: kya kaha tumne? Phir se bolo

Geet: woh...ye kaam mein hi karoongi, Sir

Maan: lekhin tum toh mere saath kaam nahi karna chahathi thi

Geet: nahi nahi, aaise koi baat nahi

Maan: pacca?

Geet: haan, pacca

Maan: toh teek hai, kaam kab shuru karogi?

Geet: ek choti si problem hai

Maan: kya?

Geet: mein abhi bhi student hoona? Toh mein sirf weekends mein aasakthi, lekhin mein ek hafthe ka kaam do din mein karloongi

Jitna dhere kaam chalega utna achcha hoga, kyunki Geet utne din Maan ke saath rahegi, haina?

Maan: mujhe koi jaldhi nahi

Geet: par mein jitney jaldhi ho sake utne jaldhi kaam katam karne ki koshsish karoongi

Maan: meinne kaha na? koi jaldhi nahi hai

Geet: teek hai, mein Saturday ko aathi hoon

Maan: mein intrezaar karoonga

Geet: thank you Maan sir

Maan: good night

Geet starts her work ...

She makes some sketches for the interior looks...

She just wants to restore its earlier look...

She recalls the places as they were when she used to stay there with her aunty...

The exteriors just need some cleaning, fixing, shinning and painting...nothing more...

Only the interior looks devastated...without the furnitures and the beautiful collection of paintings and sculptures that aunty brought from different parts of the globe...

But where have all these gone?

That Saturday Geet just searches the whole house for those missing things...

She then finds them in the store room attick...

She climbs the ladder and tires to get them down...

Maan just comes looking for her...

Maan: Geet, tum yahan kya kar rahi ho? woh bhi akhele. Kissi ko saath lekhe aathi?

Geet just turns back to look at Maan...

She tries to show him something...

It looks loke an old clock...

She tires to pull it out if the mess...

She pulls it hard and looses her balance...

She falls off fron the ladder...

Luckily Maan catches hold of her...

Maneet eyelock...

But the clock falls down and breaks into pieces...

Geet jumps off and goes and tries to collect it...

The glass cuts her finger and blood drops from her finger...

Maan rushes to her aid...

He holds her hand and tries to take off the glass piece...

Geet is in tears...she is in pain...

Maan is hurt to see her in pain...

His pain turns into anger...

Maan: Geet, ye tumne kya kiya hai?

Geet doesn't reply...

Maan: pagal ladhki, itna bhi akal nahi hai

Geet starts to cry...

Maan tires to console her...

Maan: Geet, bahut dard hotha hai kya?

Geet nods her head...: haan

Maan lifts her and takes her to his room...

Geet doesn't resist...

Maybe she is in a lot of pain...

Maan puts her on the couch...

He takes the first aid box and starts dressing her cut...

Tears keeps dropping from her eyes...

Maan: ab kyun ro rahi ho? tumse toh ek paanch saal ki bachi behthar hai, ab dekho kya ho gaya? kissne kaha tumme ye sab karne ki? Mujhse ek bar poochthi toh mein tummare madat kartha, ya kissi ko tummare madat ke liye bhejtha. Lekhin nahi, tum toh hamesha apne manmaani karthi rehthi ho

Geet ko toh kuch bhi sunayi nahi detha...

As soon as Maan finishes his work and leaves her she runs off immediately...

Maan tires to stop her but he couldn't...

Maan:Geet, rukho, kahan jaa rahi ho?

Maan follows her...

She is off to the same store room...

Chandu is cleaning the mess...

Geet: rukhjao, hatto

She pushes him off and tries to assemble it back...

Chandu: madam, ye tootta hai, aapke haath

Maan: Cahndu, tum jao

Maan: Geet, ye kya pagalpan hai?

Geet answers him still crying...

Geet: ye, ye toot gaya, meinne kya kardiya hai? auntyji mujhe kabhi maaf anhi akrenge, haina babaji?

Maan: Geet, ye toh bahut purana hai, abhi toh kaam bhi nahi karega

Geet: ab kaise kaam karega? Babaji, ab mein kya karoon?

Maan: kuch nahi, kuch bhi nahi, samji, aao mere saath

Geet: par ye

Maan: ye toh Chandu saaf karega

Geet: nahi, ye mera hai, koi haath nahi lagega, samje aap

Maan: teek hai, tum yahan beitto

Maan carefully picks up the pieces...

Geet keeps looking at him...

Maan treeis to fix it...

He throws off the broken bits of glasses and puts the remaining parts together...

It's an alarm clock with a cuckoo singing every hour...

Maan: Geet, ye kaise kaam kartha?

Geet snatches it from him and tires to wind the keys...

But no use, it's all broken...

Geet starts crying like a little kid...

Maan pulls her and hugs her...

Maan: Geet, aaise kyun rothi ho? mein issko teek kar saktha hoon

Geet: sachi?

She jumps in joy...

Geet: aapko ye sab patha ahi?

Maan: nahi, mein isse kissi achche antique shop mein dekhe repair kartha hoon

Geet: aajkal aaise masterpiece nahi millega, haina?

Maan: haan

Geet: yahan aur bhi aaise bahut kuch hai, aap aao mere saath

Geet tries to climb up the ladder...

Maan stops her...

Maan: aaj nahi, aaj ke liye yahi khaafi hai, hum kal dekhkenge

Geet: lekhin mujhe aaj hi dekhna hai

Maan: Geet, tumne suna nahi meinne kya kahaa? Chalo, ab hum chalthe hai

Maan forces her out...

awesome update

lovely part
maan tho pura fida over geet😳
geet agreed to work 😊

fabulous update, this is very .beautiful ss

awesome update

awesome geet agree to work