MG SS - Ek Anokhi Grahapravesh updated last pt on pg 39 jul 2.. - Page 4

Acha h maan ki ye curiosity hi usko geet k paas le jayegi! 😆

Part - 5

Maan runs after Geet...

Geet is not aware of it...

She thinks that this is a golden opportunity which she shoudn't miss...

She goes ahead with her mission...

Maan thinks that it's preplanned...

How would she know evryhting about this place...

Maan had no idea what's inside this place...

He is using only a part of it and is not interested about the rest of the place...

And this is only his temporaray residence...

He has other plans for this prime site...

Looking at Geet Maan gets suspicious...

She has already come here...

Just as Maan follows her with suspicion, he got his answers immediatedly...

This girl navigates with such ease that even Maan finds difficult to navigate as it's still confusing for him...he doesn't have the time or was not interested in this place till then...

Maan has not cared much about this place as this is only his temporary abode...

More over most of the servants still believe the ghost srories related to this place abd no one dares to get to the rear block which is said to be haunted...

Maan had gone there but didn't find anything interesting...

He kept it closed and never bothered about it...

Geet just went to the rear block and tried to open it...

She found it locked and goes and gets the keys from their hiding place...

Even Maan had no idea about it before the broker showed him the keys hanging in the hands of an old bronze statue...maan thought that it's just part of the statue...it's holding a sword which inturn is the key holder...the owners must have felt this as a safe place to hide the keys...

Why do anyone want to hide the keys...

There is nothing precious inside...it's looks like a guest house...

Only used when there were guests at the house...

But how did she know about all this?

This girl is hiding something from us, Maan keeps following her...

Geet turns back and makes sure no one is there...

She dusts the palce and is lookin so sad...

She even had tears in her eyes...

She found something in the adjacent shelf and hurried to take it...

She struggled to reach it and took a stool and stood on it to reach it...

In her anxiety she stepped on a corner and the stool fell off it's balance...

Geet too fell, but Maan was right behind her and he catched her...

Geet looked at him...Maan is not able to take his eyes off her...

She looks like an angel...maan keeps staring at her...

Geet: ohhh, aaap?

Geet is shocked...

Maan lets her down...he is very angry...

Maan: tummare himmat kaise hui mere ghar mein aaise chori chori gusne ki?

Geet: aap galat samajthe ho

Maan: tum yahan kya karhe aayi ho? sach sach bathao, aur tumme kaise patha hai ki chabhi kahan hai?

Geet has no answers...she keeps mum...

Maan: wahan kya hai? Hatto

Maan searches the shelf and finds out a photo frame...

It's covered with dust...

Maan: ye, tum isse dhoondh rahi thi?

Maan is even more shocked...

Geet snatches it from him, dusts it with her duppatta...and looks at the photo fondly...

Her eyes filled with tears...

Maan looks at the picture...

It's apicture of a couple, maybe the previous owners...

And who is this small girl...that girl has a striking resemblance with Geet...

Maan: sach sach bathao, tum kaun ho?

Geet points to that little girl on that picture...

Maan: ye tum ho?

Maan can't believe what he heard...

Geet: haan

Maan: toh ye tummara ghar hai?

Geet: nahi

Maan: what? Phir ye tummara tasveer kaisa ho saktha?

Geet: aapko yakheen nahi hotha?

Maan still can't believe her words...

Maan: nahi, tum inkke beti ho, tumme koi aur ne adopt kar liya hai kya?

Maan ko laga ki ye apne asli parents ko dhoondhkke yahan aayi hai...

Geet: nahi, ye mere mabaap nahi hai

Maan is even more confused...

Maan: ab tum bataoogi bhi ki yahan kya ho raha hai ya nahi

Maan shouts...

Geet: aapko itna gussa kyun aatha? Aap ko patha bhi hai ki ye kaun hai?

Maan: haan, lagtha hai ki yahi iss ghar ke malik hai

Geet: haan, ye meri mausi hai, Meera mausi

Maan: kya?

Geet: haan, ye hummara Meera mausi ka ghar hai

Maan: tumme patha hai ki ye kaise mar gayi?

Maan knows that this women commited suicide and that's why this place is believed to be haunted...

Geet: haan, inhonne aathmahathya karliya tha

Maan: toh tum sab kuch jaanthe ho?

Geet: kaise nahi jaanthi? Ye mera dusra ghar hai, ye mere mabaap jaise hi hai

Maan looks at her as if to ask why did her mausi commit suicide?

Maan: woh tummare mausaji, woh itna bhura the?

Maan has heard that this women died b'coz of her husband...

Geet gets angry...

Geet: aap kya jaanthe ho unkke barein mein? Aap na, unkke barein mein baat bhi mat karna, kahan aap aur kahan woh?

Maan: kya? Tum mere barein mein kya jaanthi?

Geet: aap na? duniya se sabse bade Dhust danav ho, dekha sab kaise aapse darthe hai? aur dekho aapne mere haath ko kaise pakda hai, chodo mujhe, mere haddiyan thodkke rahoge kya?

Geet: mein kahin nahi bhaagnewali aapke yahan chori karkke, samje aap?

Geet is very angry and blasts him...

He lets her off...

Geet looks at her hands...they have turned red...she is in pain...

She runs off...

Maan stays there for a few minutes and then he also returns locking it...

He keeps thinking about Geet the whole week and is waiting for her to return that Sunday...

He had that picture with him always and keeps staring at that little girl...

He wants to know more about her...

That girl looked so happy swinging in their arms...but this Geet is always looking sad...

She looks as if she has lost something and had come here in search of it...

What was she looking for? Did she get it?

Will she return to get it?

But she doesn't come that Sunday...

Maan is a little disappointed...

As he has gotten used to meeting her on Sundays he was eagerly anticipating her arrival...

And she is the only guest at KM... she also doesn't need any invitation...

Maan is not someone who would invite anyone home...

There is no one that Maan could invite...

That's strange...Maan has cut off his links with a few relatives back in their village after Dadi left...and they came for dadi's sake only...

That Sunday seemed to be a very long one...

Maan kept looking for the only guest and her absence disturbs him a lot...

That week doesn't go well for him...

He couldn't concentrate on his work at all...

Adi and the others really had a tough time handling DD at office...

When at home Maan kept wandering in the garden and the back yard where he finds solace in Geet's memories...

This girl has made him crazy...

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Part - 6

Next week Maan asks his driver to park his car at KC itself...

He thinks that she will come if she knows that he is not here...

Just as he thought Geet comes that Sunday...

She doesn't come inside the house...

She just goes to the garden...her favourite spot...

Maan is in his room still looking at her picture...

When will she come back? He just wants to see her once...

He doesn't know why this longing?

He had remained single all these days and never missed anyone's company...

But he is missing this unknown girl, whom he had met only a couple of times...

As he was thinking about Geet he hears some unpleasant sound...

He gets angry being disturbed from this beautiful thought...

He goes to the window and shouts...

Maan: Nakul, kya ho raha hai? tum log mujhe chain se rehne nahi de sakthe hai kya? woh awaaz kya hai? Nakuuulll

He peeps into the garden and finds Geet on the swing...

That swing had been kept unattended all these days so it's making those screeechy sounds...

Geet is scared and she tries to leave...

Maan: hare, rukho, koi pakdo ussko

Security stops her...

Maan gets down to see her...

Maan: tum? Yahan kya kar rahi ho? andar kyun nahi aayi?

Geet: kya? Aap ko lagtha hai ki mein chor hoon, haina? toh meinne socha ki mein andar aakke aapko pareshaan mat karoon

Maan: aaisa kuch nahi hai, ye tummara ghar haina? Tum kabhi bhi aasakthi ho, I'm sorry, meinne tumme galat samja

Geet: sach?

Geet: aap itna bhi bhure nahi ho, thoda thoda achche bhi ho

Maan: what?

Geet: par aap abhi bhi Dhust danav hi ho? jab dekho chilathe rehthe ho, haina babaji?

Geet runs off without waiting for his reaction...

Maan stares and Geet looks back at him and smiles...

She waves her hands : bye Mr.Khurana

Maan waves back...

But that was an error...haina? this is not MSK...

Maan is happy to see a smile on her face...

He is also feeling very happy...

Next Sunday...

Maan has gone out for some work...

Geet comes and finds that Maan is not at home...

She feels disappointed...

Btu she uses this opportunity to fulfil her wishes...

She runs up the terrace and finds her playing stones still in place...

Those were some left over granite stones big and small mostly rectangular bars...

Her aunty had got it from the nearby sight where Geet used to play in the sands in the evenings while her aunty had a chit chat with her friend, Mrs.Sharma, they were building this huge mansion and Mrs.Sahrma would proudly tell them the work in progress in detail...

Geet made sand castles and the engineer saw her interest in them and he showed her how they built huge buildings using the waste stones...

He would bulid her a new model everytime and soon Geet got interested in this new game...

Her aunt brought her a sack full of stones and she used to plat with them in their terrace...

Her aunt wanted Geet to be a career woman, and want her to satnd on her own legs...independent and free...she was very liberal as she came to Delhi at a very young age married to her doctor husband who was a nice gentleman...

When his whole family cursed his wife for not having issues he stood by her side and supported her, he ignored their advice to desert her and remarry...

He loved her so much and never let her feel inferior...they were made for each other...

She loved him so much and her world surrounded around him...

Starting from the early morning coffee to their late night stroll in the terrace they spent a lot of time together...uncle made it a rule nit to leave her alone for she would miss having their kids and took her along with him wherever he went...

Uncle had his own clinic ...

He always persuaded aunty to engage herself in some work...he never let her sit idle...

She joined a lot of clubs and organized charity functions for the needy...

She also organized weekend medical check ups for the children in the orphanage...

While uncle took care of their health aunty showered them with love and affection...

She used to give them chocolates after their vaccination ...

Infact the children called her chocolate aunty...

She also taught them how to keep themselves neat and tidy...

She taught the girls to set goals and persue a career, become economically independent...

Aspire to become doctors, engineers and scientists...

Geet used to accompany them to the orphanage only for the chocolates she also got from her aunt...

Little she knew about the misfortunes of its inmates...

She just made friends with them and played with them just as a kid...

Later she started to admire her aunty and her work...

Geet looked at the stones and remembered how uncle and aunty played with her like kids and her aunty would always insist on her not to give up her dreams of building such marvels in real oneday...

Here she is, going to complete her architect degree, but her aunt was not there to wish her...

Geet missed her so much...but she is determined to fulfil her aunt's wish...she would definitely succeed one day...

After a while she went to the garden...

Her aunty maintained the garden so well that every visitor never left before praising her efforts and admiring the beautiful roses indulging in their fragrance... The lady visitors always wanted to have those roses and only left after having a bunch of those...

Yes, it was a rose garden and Geet's favourite were the red roses...

She had a handful of red rose plants specially planted for her in a corner and would water them herself every day...wait for them to start flowering...eagerly counting the buds each day and sitting beside them to see them flower into beautiful roses until her aunt came in search of her and took her in telling her that it would only open in the morning...

Now her pretty rose garden looks like a desert...full of thorny bushes and weeds...

It was left neglected for so many days and Maan had no idea of reviving it...

For he had bought it from Geet's uncle's nephew who had inherited it and was an NRI...

He wanted to sell it at any cost as there were no buyers after it became a haunted house totally deserted for the past three years...

Maan knew the value of this place and bought this very cheap and decided to build a luxury apartment there...but as his investors refused to approve the project siting the haunted story behind the palce and it's unlucky tag...Maan decided to shift here and assure them that this place is just as good as the others...right in the middle of upper class residencial area...best suited for high class apartments...he just wants to stay here temporarily until he convinces his investers...

Geet came to know about this from the servants who wanted Maan to vacate this place at the earliest...everyone is so afraid and they stayed here just for Maan...

As Geet took a walk in the garden she comes across her swing...

It is looking like a new one shinning bright and painted and greased ...

Maan had got this done for her...got the area around it cleared...

She is very ahppy and merrily swings till she is contented...

She then decides to clear this place herself...

She starts plucking them one by one...

Maan has returned and he comes to know that Geet is here...

He rushes to see her...

She is not inside the house...

She must be in the garden...on the swing...

She must be surprised...

But, what is this? She is not here?

Maan looks at the empty swing...

She must have gone inside...

But this place is left unattended for a long time, what if there are some snakes or scorpions...

This girl is completely insane...

Maan gets in and searches her...

Maan bahut pareshaan ho gaya, pagal ladhkki, hamesha kuch ulta seedha karthi rehthi hai...

Maan: Geeet, Geeet

Maan had seen everywhere and there is no sign of Geet...

Maan gets a little worried about Geet...

What's wrong? Has she left?

That thought made him very sad...

No no, she won't leave that easily...

She likes giving him trouble...

And what's she up to now...

Ye ladhki mujhe pagal kardegi...

Jab se ye aayi hai Maan has turned into an emotional fool...

He used to be unaffected by human sentiments and neither had anyone to care about after dadi...this is the first time he has felt connected so deeply with someone...

Unknowingly Geet had entered his lonely kingdom and that has made a huge impact on him...

Maan then thinks about the garden...

Geet must be there only...

Maan rushes to the backyard...and here she is...

Maan has a broad smile on his face seeing Geet...

Maan DD banjaatha...

Geet doesn't notice Maan and she is busy in her work...

Maan shouts...:Geeet...