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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Chapter 3 & 4
lovely updates..why is Geet avoiding Maan, does she know him...looks like some mystery or past secret is going to get revealed...curious to know the homonym part, is it one person wearing many faces or similar faces with different personalities or something else.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Hmm
It's actually nice to read ur work😊
Pata h kyu.. coz u description gives this feeling of being the character then imagining the scene. .
Phir chahe wo geet ka maan k mu pe darwaza band karna ho ya pari ki suspicious behaviour😆
It always like something happening next door!

So keep writing waiting for the next!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 5 - maan welcomed her in his house...but he may have expected her to come alone without geet...
so new entry rahul malhotra...pari's love interest...?
so pari is on mission to know more about maan & geet's connection..
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Loved Maan's friend. great updates.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Chapter 5
loved the way the character description is coming implicitly in the story. Maan is wearing a plain mask just like the bare walls in his house, without revealing the real self within, though there is more mysterious behavior on Geet's side as well.

Aha, Pari on a secret detective role, may be she needs to investigate both the sides.
Pari - 😃



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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
"Are you sure you're okay with this?" he asked her. His eyes lingered down to the tight hold she had on his jacket, her fingers almost white from the pressure.
Geet's eyes glazed over the building, and a feeling mixed of anxiety and fear swirled in the bottom of her stomach. She felt nauseaous and what she really wanted to do was to jump into Johan's car and speed off as fast as she could, without a second glance back.

"I'm fine," she replied, taking a deep breath to compose herself. Johan understood her nerves and patted the hand which clutched onto his arm for dear life.

"They love your work, and they've been pestering me to bring you along ever since your first exhibition. You have nothing to be nervous about, trust me."

They walked along the cobbled steps to the entrance of the venue. Small fairy lights illuminated the way, the building surrounded by cherry blossom trees. A magical sunset gave the place an ethereal, golden glow. She was awed by the sheer serenity; her muscles relaxed themselves almost instantly.

A valet driver passed them by on their way in, to whom Johan handed his car keys and asked him to bring a painting around the back entrance.

"Usually, I ensure the painting is displayed before the onlookers arrive," he explained to Geet, leaning in so that his voice caressed her bare neck. "But I thought it would be more momentous if you were there to witness the unveiling."

She smiled in response, putting Johan at ease. Although they had only become acquainted a few months ago, he felt as if he had come to understand her creative yet introverted nature - not just through her behaviour, but through her artwork. Although the majority of her pieces were simply replicas of everyday objects, one sensed that she gave away a small section of herself into her art, thus displaying it for the world to see.

They arrived at the entrance and made their way in. Geet was startled by the sheer number of people who had decided to attend. Johan was keen to introduce her, but she exchanged a few polite smiles and greetings before wandering off to admire the other works that illuminated the walls.

She was inspecting a particular piece, which appeared to be an abstract portrait of a man and a woman in an intimate embrace. The sheer beauty and magnitude of the painting took her away to another world, and it was a tap on the shoulder that brought her back to the present.

"I'm so sorry to interrupt," she was met with the face of a graceful lady, whose wrinkles shone when she smiled and her grey hair almost transparent under the soft lights. "I'm Rosa Cruz, I've always admired your work."

"Thank you," Geet was always bashful when it came to compliments; a feature that didn't go unnoticed by the lady.

"You are too modest." Her face lit up as she looked past Geet and appreciated the painting by which Geet had been so transfixed. "Ah, it is a breathtaking piece. A story of two lovers, grasping onto what remains of their sanity."

She turned back, her eyes glazing over the picture of delicacy and love that was represented. "I couldn't agree more."

"Which leads me nicely onto something I have always wanted to ask you." Geet turned back to Rosa's curious expression. "I notice an illegible scribble of initials in the left corner of every single one of your paintings."

Geet licked her suddenly dry lips and swallowed thickly.

"Whose initials are they?"

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A/N: The painting which captures the attention of Geet and Rosa.

Edited by Kalam. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
This reserve business of mine is definitely homonymous !! Hehee
********* Edited my comment in pg2 and 10 Ji

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You know your thought process is so artistic that I'm awed with it ...!!
I am not sure if I'm reading between the lines but it seems like u have left it upto the reader to decide what they want to see...

I saw that everything leads to or is used to create that state of homonymy...
Like the first chapter itself... The apartments... Same looking apartments but different... One is his and the other the girls' ... Homonym

Two sisters ... Homogeneous yet different !

And Aah the paintings !!
Two lovers inclined in one intimacy, their love the same ..yet each is different ...

And if I look at it as comparing to Geet's still life paintings vs the two lovers one ... Then the difference is the outlook yet they mean the same ...
She gives life into the still life images even as flowers ..which give a notion of a being or a life blooming them ... And the lovers show the same ... The state of living and loving ...

Does it make sense .. I love the title ...makes it sound so abstract when its as common as us homogeneous beings!

Waiting for more to unravel ..to understand the homonymy in Geet and Maan
Edited by mishtimohabbat - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Wow nice update

Still no Maaneet😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
part 6 - so geet was introduced to the wolrd of fame...now curious to know the initials at the left corner of painting...cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
lovely update
questions are increasing without any answers
waiting to read more

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