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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: maansi25

lovely meeting

carry it on😉


Thank you!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

Congrats for t new thread
Sweet update
Thanks!
I am so feeling worried for vyan
He is being mislead
Feel bad for him actually not 😆
not because he is not maan
But for t fact that geet is trying her best to maintain a professional relation & that distance
But he is bent upon twisting & turning everything
Well, there are some things which are out of anyone's hands, and such is the case with Vyan and Geet...
Still would love to know maans POV all along
It would be fun to read
He is definitely not oblivious to all
He does know may be little too much
& she is so caught a midst of it
Oh, definitely not oblivious. He is in quite a lot of awareness and you'll know that as the story goes. Also, his mystery will begin to open up soon which will help in understanding his side as well.

So much to his inner turmoil
"She seem to have problem accepting t truth 👏 "
That spoke so much of it
Sometimes less words speak a lot.
T lyrics & him switching it off 👏
Just deep
Hmm... Seems like you're reading between the lines. 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

congrats for new thread

Can I tell you how much I love your style of writing?
I love it
Love the scenes you create
Love the anticipation it creates in me
Love the eagerness I have to read more
Loved it
You sure do know how to make someone's day! 🤗
One eating cool icecream.. coolness personified..
The other choking.. on emotions? on all the things he triggers in her?
Ha!
I enjoyed it so much.
I'm glad!
Fawad was there but Maan stole the show!
Mission successful! 😆
Though I confess to liking Fawad a little bit more
Mostly because torturing Maan is one of my favorite things..😆😆
Your way of torturing him is quite an interesting one. 😳
Kyun na ho?
After all after four years we are all still Maan mad😆
I agree!
Thanks for updating..
BTW, this does not qualify to be called a long one but it is better than the paragraph or two we have been getting...😲
You'll know the importance of this length when you don't get it for a long long time. 😛
There ladai bhi kar li
😆
now my day is done..
going for vacation
miss me😃
Gone, and back and now I'm replying. 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

congrats dear for the new thread

ab poor vyan kehrahi hoon bechara kitna bechain horaha hai geet ko apni family se milane keliye 😆😆😆par madam tho professionally lerahi hai 😆😆

maan ka attitude tho bindaas hai arey waah aathe hi no hi nothing perfectly suited for geet😆😆😆

arey waah kya gaana lagaya 😆😆kuch tho patha hai maan ko


Thanks Priya!
Maan babu itne bhi anjaan nahin jitna wo dikhawa karte hain! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anant90

you made my day by this update...oops i mean evening...😛


I'm glad! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Luvforever

Congrats Di for d new thread... :-D

D part was awesome & worth d wait as I said... ;-) u don't diamsappoint bt gave an awesome twist & part which make us eager to read d nxt part soon... Nw I seriously doubt was it really a coincidence or d dilebrate attempt of Mrs.khurana's... :-D well whatever it was bt gave us a evening full of maaneet though not same as earlier bt still a eve wid new geet & maan... Maan has really changed a lot bt still somewhere craving for d attention of geet it seems & thus d haughty & arrogant at its best... & geet ahh having a hard tym to understand things or just trying to not understand like she isn't understanding d obvious interest of vyan on her... Y she choose to ignore things till it can be avoided...??? Is it her way to deal or she really doesn't understand... & d end was super lovely can't wait to read what will happen Nw & hope night is still not over or is it...????? Well thank u for d bigger & beautiful update...

Prati


Thank you, Prati! 😊

I am really glad I have managed to keep up to your hope of not disappointing you till now.
Mrs. Khurana's role in this? As the saying goes, "aam khaao, guthliyan kyun gintay ho"! 😉

I will say it is Geet's way of dealing with things; to turn a blind eye on them until they are unavoidable. Not the bestest of ways, if you ask me.

About the evening, well, read to know if it's over or there's more to it. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

awesome ud

wat maan want 2 do
wat he thing of geet


Thanks!
You'll have to wait a bit to know the answers to that.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

😆


What's with the laughing emo and then suddenly the ouch emo? 😆
i miss my vyan.. but more than that i miss my emotional turmoil and my anomaly !! 😉😆
Your anomaly is right there but the emotional turmoil has cut down. 😆
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Parred:

Vyan - he is not another maan.. few of his traits might be similar ...if we are comparing it with IOYSM Maan... but not entirely... and some of the traits .. common traits we do see among friends..
Definitely. He is not the next Maan. As for comparing, I think all of us do that if one guy is pitted against another..
i love this Romeo and Juliet play and their convo
im never a hard core fan of all those legendary stories... but yess.. the idea of dying for the love does appeal me.. it amuses me to no end.. ... Ahaana...
"Amuses"? Well, that's a first! I have always heard people associating words like "romantic", "true love", etc, with Romeo and Juliet but never heard anyone say it amuses them!
i love this setup... ballroom.. and her view about this guy... Vyan

for Vyan - "Thode Badmaash ho tum..." this song perfectly fits him... 😳
I like the song, but I wouldn't pick this one for Vyan, unless, of course, you are dedicating it to him. 😆
the dance- i see she has no feelings for him... the way she felt for maan and the way she feels for vyan are totally..different..
You got it.
and all i see is Fawad ☺️ yessshhh.. out there in that white shirt and grey vest and pants... Ahaana 😎
That must have made it easier for you to deal with him. 😆
the way u describe guys.. ☺️ be it Maan or Vyan 😉😆
This one made me laugh. It makes me feel like I notice guys much more. Which is not the case, I tell you. 😆
i like the way she easily went with the flow.. the date ... which is pretty much casual... that too with a guy like Vyan.. i tho LUB to gooo😛 😆
Imagine yourself in her place. 😆

about sasha ...🤔 i dont really think she is someone who will b a turning point or someone who is going to turn the tables ... so im not going to waste time on someone who is going to b in this story for a very lil time...😛😆
Exactly! She was there was just that little part. No big role. That is reserved for someone else.
I read the open invitation to couples for the ball scheduled to be held tonight at the ballroom of one of the restaurants.

"How about we both go? We will dine at the buffet there. It's a date." His blue eyes were twinkling with excitement, and his face was alight with an eager smile.

"A date?" I thought for moment. I did not have any problem but the expectant face of Vyan made me want to be a little naughty, as he waited for my answer. I pretended to think for a longer time. "Actually..." I trailed off as if I was going to refuse and saw his smile dim a bit. It felt like he was holding his breath and it made me laugh. "I don't mind."

He released a breath and laughed slightly.

Geet is not really changed... the way i feel here... she is much more open .. and trying to accept people as they are... not that she dint previously. Before she used to b hesitant... now she is not hesitant.. but sometimes outright blunt and snappy and yet times.. taking a chance to b happy in her own bubble... where she is allowing only few ppl.. depending on the other person and the situation at hand.. she reacts..

she is much more matured.. and at the same time.. an idiot too..
@Bold: You got that what I wanted to show. Everybody says she has changed, and yes, she has, but the change is almost limited towards her becoming more open.
it did bother her that Maan is hanging with sasha... not bcoz sasha is not that type of a gal Maan likes.. but the otherway around..
Right!
her blushing when Vyan complimented... i take it as very simple interaction with a friend and a colleague.. where the other tries to impress u and u being u.. knw their tactics and still feeling content with it,...
I feel like you're reading what was on my mind!
she is never leading men,... what i feel is.. she is just the way she was..is.. and will b..
This one line gave me the satisfaction which is incomparable to anything else. You probably know why if you have read Shika's OS.
a date with a guy like Vyan who knows his limits ... and few interactions with a gal like geet.. even though Vyan have feelings for geet (*who doesnt btw) 😛 but he is sure that Geet is not that kind of gal who will fall for him...and he knows that he needs to work hard to know her .. and come close..
But is it geet fault if vyan is falling for her... ??
yes.. it might give a signal .. but then again.. enjoying the attention is not wrong.. and he is her friend..
For saying this 🤗
after all that i heard tum se hi... and god..
I love that song!
The evening with Vyan was not an uncomfortable affair at all. He was a friend, and more than that, an amazing person, and that was what shined throughout the evening. He was at his chivalrous best; holding the door open and leading me inside, pulling out the chair for me, offering to get me a drink. He made me laugh with random incidents he narrated in such a jocular manner.

"You dance pretty well." We were waltzing around the dance floor.

"Why, thank you!" He said sweetly and then continued with an air of haughtiness. "High school dance champion here."

"Really?" I raised my eyebrows. "That's impressive! But tell me, did you really not find a good sport to master in instead of dance? You chose dance, seriously?"

He knew I was just pulling his leg so he played along. "Of course. I was plotting to impress the gorgeous Geet Handa with my dancing skills someday!" He winked at me and I laughed even as he twirled me around.

Dancing was fun and friendly with Vyan. He kept a casual string of conversations throughout, not letting any awkwardness settle between us even when he had his hand lightly placed on my waist and mine was on his shoulder. I really liked the fact that he seemed to know, and take care of, the limits I was comfortable with.


everything is going smoothly... and damn Maggie !!!
Her munbe va... her iyer sisters 😡 ...
Ehh, I don't get this. 😕
all thru waltzing ...i was visualizing Vyan and geet.. but after some time.. all i can see is Maan and Geet 😲 😡 😆
Haha! Give all the other readers that vision too. 😆
@bold red... hahaha No comments😆.. I see many are holding grudge against Geet in this chapter.. and for me.. all is see .. a modified but still grounded geet.. 😳
I held my own comments for that chapter too, you know. 😆
"Sometimes, things are funny in the way they change."

the grass is always greener on the other side 😉 😆 what say ??
True that!
this is a random quote i stumbled upon... and it aptly fits Maggie's A Story of Her and now a confused couple Maan and Geet!!

"People think a soul mate is your perfect fit, and that's what everyone wants. But a true soul mate is a mirror, the person who shows you everything that is holding you back, the person who brings you to your own attention so you can change your life.

A true soul mate is probably the most important person you'll ever meet, because they tear down your walls and smack you awake. But to live with a soul mate forever? Nah. Too painful. Soul mates, they come into your life just to reveal another layer of yourself to you, and then leave.

A soul mates purpose is to shake you up, tear apart your ego a little bit, show you your obstacles and addictions, break your heart open so new light can get in, make you so desperate and out of control that you have to transform your life, then introduce you to your spiritual master..."
Well... this quote is quite different from what I have always heard and believed about soul mates, but I am surely going to use it for reference in the future.

and about update : 😉 😆


"I wanted a perfect ending. Now I've learned, the hard way, that some poems don't rhyme, and some stories don't have a clear beginning, middle, and end. Life is about not knowing, having to change, taking the moment and making the best of it, without knowing what's going to happen next.
Delicious Ambiguity."
And I love this one! 😃

i can go on and on with this update... heheh 😆
I can read it forever. 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _BlackPearl_

Congratz for the new thread!!!

Feeling scared for Vyan, the man is getting wrong signals.
He will be only felt heart broken.
And Geet concluding the facts without thinking how the other person will be taking it.


Maan is becoming so interesting, I would really like to know about this new Maan.
I would really love to read Maan's POV of story, please try whether you could include it too.
It would give new insight to his character and story.


Awesome chapter.


Thank you!
Well, some things cannot be stopped from happening...
I will try to make Maan's side of the story clearer once the mystery surrounding him dissolves. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: farzu3008

awesome update. feeling sad for vyaan as don't want him to suffer a heartbreak. now coming to main topic I think mrs khurana plan all this . hope the night has not ended here. hope in next update we get a coffee invitation to maan by geet. waiting for next soon plz plZ


Thank you!
We can only hope Vyan does not need to go through all the pain. As for the night and Mrs. Khurana's hand in it, who cares as long as we get such evenings, no?

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