Wired Hearts (4) Ch:34, Thread:5 (June 26) - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 28
awesome...
excellent...
too good...
Maan has changed so much...
but loved this update so much...
cont soon dear...


Thank you! I am so glad you liked it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
update kab milne waali hai maari bohut din hogayi hai
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

update kab milne waali hai maari bohut din hogayi hai


Aaj hi. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

arey waah kitni achi news di tune😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad


Now finally I am slowly understanding Get and Vyan's equation.
Poor Vyan, as far as Geet is concerned, Vyan is like the outermost ring of Saturn. His presence is there, in fact constantly, but it barely effects her.😛
Hmm... I am not sure if he will choose to remain the outermost ring of saturn forever. But sure enough, for the present, his presence does not affect her as much as Maan's.
While Maan, he is like the blazing sun. Sometimes when he is hiding behind the clouds of pretense, he may seem mild; however slowly but surely he is emerging from behind the clouds and it is making Geet uncomfortably hot.😉
That I agree with! 😆
"Yeah. You see, bland people need to spice themselves up with external ingredients, like the spices you are talking about. Naturally sizzling people just wouldn't care." He winked while I gasped at his remark.

"Yes, but when people just get attracted to your charm and follow you around, you need to change a little to accommodate them, right?"
The best part is, he knows he's hot and he makes her uncomfortable. He is testing her limits time and time again.
Exactly!

"You tend to have troubles accepting truths, I have noticed."
This one sentence opens up so many possibilities.
He wants her to notice the change in him. He needs her to notice it. To him, her noticing would be like a little pandering to his ego, that had been so badly damaged along with his heart.
*Grins* You have quite a knack for understanding the hidden meanings.
On the other hand, he thinks she has not changed much from the old Geet.
But she has. Perhaps not as obviously as him, but they both have changed.
And this change within them is what is going to finally enable them to find each other, where before they could not.
Her change is not as obvious as his, hence his belief she is still the same. But you're right on this count that the change is what will make them notice each other.

And finally the song. 😆
He is loving her, but definitely not like the old Maan. To me, the old Maan is somewhere inside the new Maan, who is wearing a facade or rather an armor of sophistication and flirtation.
But whoever he is, he's really, really getting under her skin😉
The song is of my favourite singer, but I hardly listen to it. My sister once made me listen to the uncensored version. I think you can imagine my reaction. 😆
This one was definitely the best update yet. There was a whole different conversation going on under their their conversation.
I absolutely loved this one.😃
I am so so relieved and glad to know that! Thanks, Apa! 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

don't u think geet is doing d same mistake again that she had done before with maan, misleading vyan!😡😡

ghosh! don't want to see another maan getting heart-break from geet
please geet ke dimaag ki batti jalao


I'll hold my opinion to myself on that, and I will tell you to wait for the story to unfold, but let me clear one thing, Vyan is not another Maan!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna1

Great update dear

liked it very much...


Thank you! I am glad you liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AKSashadow



Kuch bhi likhne ka sochu
wo kam hi lagta hai,
Teri story thoda padhu
to aur padhne ka mann karta hai.
itna chhota update dena kyu suru kiya,
Itne se mera dil nahi bharta hai.

Well, hats off to you ...

For the way you are writing this story. Really, enjoying this journey.

I know, I am not giving my comments on regular basis(Sorry for that). So do not deserve to be demanding but still... Kya karu dil ke hatho majbur hu.

And Maybe, I will not be able to give comment on regular basis in future too. (Sorry for that too)

But, this is for sure that writer like you, will not let me stay away from this forum for long.

And in last... I will just say two words for all the updates

SUPERBLY AWESOME.




Samjha kar yaar,
sare updates ke liye alag alag comment dene laga to phir mere hath ka band baj jayega.😉


Thank you for your kind words. I am glad you are enjoying the story so far, and I hope it stays the same throughout.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat

I see a colour change. Congratulations for the promotion!

Hmm... For some reason the last chapter didn't fit well with me...
I had that uneasy feeling amidst all the easy going nature with which Maan amuses his actions and reactions towards Geet ! And as for Geet I am not quite sure of how she puts aside her thoughts ... Like when she felt flustered and stood gaping at Maan retreating away from her at the door just after he amusingly whispered in her ears ... I was like kyaaa... Put it aside !! How can u Geet ! ...
Well, I am not sure if I should be justifying Geet here, but that's how her mind works. She always has that strong control over herself which lets her cover her emotions well.
There is so much both are knowingly blinking away from ..that I am not sure how they will take it when it will come down tumbling on them later !!
That is something for you to wait for.
I felt uneasy because likewise I didn't feel those flusters those titlis in the moment ...maybe coz when I read it I hadn't acknowledged her old nature ...her not reading well into things ..not knowing where her Heart is leading her ..
Her choice of ignorance twoards these matters...
I like Vyaan ! Like a lot btw ! Because he is progressive in his thoughts ...takes a step ahead and towards where his thoughts and heart is leading him to ..reminds me of traces of old Maan just an older version
Ahh! That is good to know. Yes, he takes a step towards where his heart is leading him. Take that as an obvious hint.
It's weird that though I may not agree to the line of Geet's thoughts in some ways ..but I love her ..for her aloof bholapan ... She has matured into a self sufficient woman but she is actually that child-woman deep down .. needs a nudge.. a poke ..a hand to lead her where he heart lies .. to where he stands ...
And.. I love her more now because after acknowledging this aloofness of hers as part of her nature .. her old geetness... I can only pleasantly wait for those moments when she will peel and reveal those layers of old Maan in him ...
I am glad you like her for her nature, because people normally tend to think otherwise of the likes of Geet.
This really does need a lot of wiring ! Hehee ... Need to bend and mould these wires to ignite those hearts and electrify their chemistry!!
You made me laugh with this one. 😆
Waiting for the next Ji 😳 😃
Thank you for being here Ji! 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

wonder what does he has in his mind...has he really moved on ??😕 this maan is confusing me also along with geet...and this vyaan is a real danger...😡


They are confusing, indeed. I hope the confusion diffuses as the story reaches the point it is surely heading towards. 😊

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