Wired Hearts (3) Ch:28, Thread: 4

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Madhuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

congrats for the new thread

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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Susegad
Congratulations for WH - Thread 3, Mayyo.🤗

Hoping for many, many, many moredil dhadkane wale threads(most important part)😆

Dil dhadkane waale? Mera level abhi bhi uss stage se bohat neeche hai, Apa. 😆

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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: dqno1

ab tum dono ke match up dekhne ka mazzaa aayega😆

lets see kaun zyaada dil dhadkata hai😃

Ummeedein saari Apa se rakho. Meri taraf se agar koi aisa dil dhadkane wala part aa gaya toh woh bonus lagega. 😳

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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Susegad

I am not in denial Avi, I only hope I can write stuff that will make your heart go boom boom😆

As for her, weeell, if we keep hinting and pushing and prodding and cajoling and threatening she may allow us a glimpse of the hidden light under the bushel😆

We absolutely know she has it in her to write heart pounding stuff, now if she'd just let herself go😔

Yeah, probably if you keep cajoling and prodding then I'll be able to write something that would at least give your hearts a tiny flutter, if not boom boom. 😆

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Madhuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

so geet decided to be stranger and not let the past come over the present..

she was disappointed to see such change in him...so casual, altogether diff view seeing some randum girl, which pinched her...

may be he was too hurt with geet's denial that he changed so much...but now it will be more difficult for geet to make some place in his life...it will be difficult for maan, too, to allow her enter again...

cont soon

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Madhuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

I dont have any problems with only geet's pov...

It is diff and better from earlier...

I am liking the story the way you are writing...

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

part 19
nice part...
cant understand Maan...
so its gonna be completely from Geet's POV...
cont soon dear...

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_SnowFlakes_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Congratz for new thread :)

Superb update !!!!

Geet thinking abt the changed maan & kind of suprised or say confused with this vast difference between 7 yrs ago wala maan & nw this new maan ..

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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz
😊

Is this a "reserved" smiley or is this a "hello" smiley? 😆

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honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

nice one...somwhere i was disappointed with the way raya reacted when geet told her about maan...but may be that was the way she should have reacted...😕 and this maan also is very very disapponting...bhaav bi nahi diya humare geet ko