Wired Hearts (3) Ch:28, Thread: 4

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dqno1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Since we are no longer allowed to spam or post waiting messages let me ask you a question about the previous update..😃

Noticed no description about Maan there.

Was that deliberate?

I mean when he is in front of her, she did not notice anything?

What was he wearing according to the esteemed writer?😆

Kuch acche se jawab dena so that I don't get banned for spamming😃

Hope you know what this message is about😃

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punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

GEET HURT MAAN IN THE PAST

THIS TIME HE WILL NOT LET HER COME CLOSE

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Susegad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: dqno1
Since we are no longer allowed to spam or post waiting messages let me ask you a question about the previous update..😃

Noticed no description about Maan there.

Was that deliberate?

I mean when he is in front of her, she did not notice anything?

What was he wearing according to the esteemed writer?😆

Kuch acche se jawab dena so that I don't get banned for spamming😃

Hope you know what this message is about😃

What do you mean Avi?😕

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dqno1

@dqno1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Susegad

What do you mean Avi?😕

It makes me wonder about Geet.

Was she only looking to him to see how he would react to her?

Did she not notice him for him? I am curious why the writer did not give any description of him through her eyes?

Is this going to continue in her self thoughts when she is alone by herself?

If Geet does not think further about him, it makes me wonder if she feels anything anymore for him at all.

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shiela

@dreams-reality

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Lovely update

Hope geet and maan meet again soon

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

geet decided not to think maan as he was seven years ago...

after all her denial had changed him a lot(for which i hate geet.😡 how i wish she had that courage like raya to give a chance to the proposal of maan at that time rather than scaring about her parents decision.)

& ya congo for new thread

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farzu3008

@farzu3008

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

very interesting update. geet cannot believe that maan has changed so much. geet has decided to turn the page n b like a stranger with him. so lets see who will succeed maan playing the ignorant one or geet playing the stranger one. waiting eagerly for their second meeting. continue soon with looonnng update yaar

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: dqno1
Since we are no longer allowed to spam or post waiting messages let me ask you a question about the previous update..😃

Noticed no description about Maan there.

Was that deliberate?

I mean when he is in front of her, she did not notice anything?

What was he wearing according to the esteemed writer?😆

Kuch acche se jawab dena so that I don't get banned for spamming😃

Hope you know what this message is about😃

Hmm... Now that you have asked the question, I might as well admit that it was not deliberate. I put myself in Geet's place for that scene and wrote what she would have noticed. The description of his attire was not what came to me, especially since she was riveted by the new him when she saw him after so long, just like you have mentioned, when he was in front of him, she would not notice anything else.

And since you are asking the writer about what he would be wearing then, you can pretty much guess what I would have pictured him in. 😳

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

To overcome his pain, he is putting up and showing this flirting image.

He is trying to run away from the pain, so I'm not at all surprised, as I expcected it.

Nice part

Ps : Wonder how yo will be able to show Maans' POV through Geets' eye.

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dqno1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: mayyo

Hmm... Now that you have asked the question, I might as well admit that it was not deliberate. I put myself in Geet's place for that scene and wrote what she would have noticed. The description of his attire was not what came to me, especially since she was riveted by the new him when she saw him after so long, just like you have mentioned, when he was in front of him, she would not notice anything else.

And since you are asking the writer about what he would be wearing then, you can pretty much guess what I would have pictured him in. 😳

Putting yourself in Geet's position😲

Oh no! Can I suggest the writer would not have responded like this at all😆 GM BTW

I figured that she would have been too shocked to notice apparel but face ka description shayad banta tha..

For such a detail oriented writer that was expected😳

Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago