Wired Hearts (3) Ch:28, Thread: 4

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RainAndRainbow

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

maan wont let geet into his life this time easily...

he has changed... n to a great extend!!

but thats makes the FF even more interesting😆

if it was the same maan.. we could have guessed his reaction... now he is diffrent.. hmmm.. loving the FF...

awesome update

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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: dqno1

😡sudhar jao..

Jo possible hi nahin hai wo kyun expect karna? 😆

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Papon Tabassum

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

human mind is so strange...someone may b move on in her life...really happy wth new life...lov her present closed one or present life so mch...does nt feeling love actually for her past closed one...but...sometimes expects most weird things...tht her past, may be she rejected him but expects that may b he is nt still moved on although she herself is moved on in her life...she expects may b unintentionally that may b he is still waiting fr her...lovs her...although she shows she does nt actually care for him...isnt it weird n her weird heart...

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Susegad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Congratulations for WH - Thread 3, Mayyo.🤗

Hoping for many, many, many more dil dhadkane wale threads(most important part)😆

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Susegad
Congratulations for WH - Thread 3, Mayyo.🤗

Hoping for many, many, many more dil dhadkane wale threads(most important part)😆

ab tum dono ke match up dekhne ka mazzaa aayega 😆

lets see kaun zyaada dil dhadkata hai😃

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Susegad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: dqno1

ab tum dono ke match up dekhne ka mazzaa aayega 😆

lets see kaun zyaada dil dhadkata hai😃

I am not in denial Avi, I only hope I can write stuff that will make your heart go boom boom😆

As for her, weeell, if we keep hinting and pushing and prodding and cajoling and threatening she may allow us a glimpse of the hidden light under the bushel😆

We absolutely know she has it in her to write heart pounding stuff, now if she'd just let herself go 😔

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saf24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Congrats on the new thread.

Superb update. Geet is at the point where she is confused with Maan's behaviour. On one hand she knows she has hurt him and is expecting some sort of outburst from him but he just acts normal as though nothing ever happened. Geet then realises that she may meet more often and if this is how he is going to behave with her then she too will just follow suit. Fab job and looking forward to what is in store next.

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Susegad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

If he had a flicker in the eye,

All he needs now is a catcher in the rye.

Before he topples over the edge. Or will it be he who catches her.

Who will bring about whose redemption?

Have you ever read or studied,"Catcher in the Rye"

I remember the word 'Bildungsroman' associated with it.(coz I used to crack up every time I said the word, I have never forgotten it😆)

And I think it applies perfectly to WH.

Bildundgsroman is the growth of a character within a story And that is what I have been seeing with Maan and Geet.

They have both grown as characters. We can't really judge as yet if Maan has grown for better or for worse, since all we get to see is only Geet's POV. And her eyes are definitely prejudiced as far as he is concerned. Not that she's seen anything positive so far, except for 'the flicker'

This is an amazing story Mayyo and even as I wish I knew more of Maan's POV, I'm not completely unsatisfied with the way things are moving.

Still waiting for the long lengthy chapters you promised are coming.🤔

Love you for writing such wonderful characters.

🤗

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fantasy..4me

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Nice update.

Geet is shocked to see a complete new MAAN .

But i m sure he isn't change, the fliker...

NOOO i want to know Maan point of view tooo yaar .

waiting for more😃

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custodian75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Many times we don't realize the impact we create through our deeds. And when we see the results we are not ready to believe that we are responsible for that. Geet too feels surprised that Maan has changed to this extent. But one thing is true even if she meets him in the future, she can't judge him based on how he was 7 years ago.

Edited by custodian75 - 11 years ago