Wired Hearts (3) Ch:28, Thread: 4 - Page 11

Originally posted by: -Patronus-

maan wont let geet into his life this time easily...

he has changed... n to a great extend!!

but thats makes the FF even more interesting😆

if it was the same maan.. we could have guessed his reaction... now he is diffrent.. hmmm.. loving the FF...

awesome update

Originally posted by: paponecon

human mind is so strange...someone may b move on in her life...really happy wth new life...lov her present closed one or present life so mch...does nt feeling love actually for her past closed one...but...sometimes expects most weird things...tht her past, may be she rejected him but expects that may b he is nt still moved on although she herself is moved on in her life...she expects may b unintentionally that may b he is still waiting fr her...lovs her...although she shows she does nt actually care for him...isnt it weird n her weird heart...

Originally posted by: nihatri

Dil tut gaya

Originally posted by: saf24

Congrats on the new thread.

Superb update. Geet is at the point where she is confused with Maan's behaviour. On one hand she knows she has hurt him and is expecting some sort of outburst from him but he just acts normal as though nothing ever happened. Geet then realises that she may meet more often and if this is how he is going to behave with her then she too will just follow suit. Fab job and looking forward to what is in store next.

Originally posted by: Susegad

If he had a flicker in the eye,

All he needs now is a catcher in the rye.

Before he topples over the edge. Or will it be he who catches her.

Who will bring about whose redemption?

Have you ever read or studied,"Catcher in the Rye"

I remember the word 'Bildungsroman' associated with it.(coz I used to crack up every time I said the word, I have never forgotten it😆)

That word is funny. I have never heard of, or read it. 😆

@Bold: They both need redemption, and while they may not attempt to, they will bring about the other's redemption in their own ways.

And I think it applies perfectly to WH.

Bildundgsroman is the growth of a character within a story And that is what I have been seeing with Maan and Geet.

They have both grown as characters. We can't really judge as yet if Maan has grown for better or for worse, since all we get to see is only Geet's POV. And her eyes are definitely prejudiced as far as he is concerned. Not that she's seen anything positive so far, except for 'the flicker'

You had me laughing here. You know, I felt you were sulking here because Geet is prejudiced. 😆

This is an amazing story Mayyo and even as I wish I knew more of Maan's POV, I'm not completely unsatisfied with the way things are moving.

Hmm, I have mentioned in my reply to Avi's comment that IOYSM was mainly Maan's story and it was always difficult to write Geet's POV back then. This story comes to me as Geet's and just like for you all, Maan is opening up to me as the story progresses. Of course, I am far ahead in the story than you guys. 😆

Still waiting for the long lengthy chapters you promised are coming.🤔

There's a vacation coming for all of them. That's when the chapters lengthened far more than I had thought for this story.

Love you for writing such wonderful characters.

🤗

Thanks, Apa! 🤗

Originally posted by: nupurjain1234

Nice update.

Geet is shocked to see a complete new MAAN .

But i m sure he isn't change, the fliker...

NOOO i want to know Maan point of view tooo yaar .

waiting for more😃

Originally posted by: custodian75

Many times we don't realize the impact we create through our deeds. And when we see the results we are not ready to believe that we are responsible for that. Geet too feels surprised that Maan has changed to this extent. But one thing is true even if she meets him in the future, she can't judge him based on how he was 7 years ago.

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

so geet decided to be stranger and not let the past come over the present..

she was disappointed to see such change in him...so casual, altogether diff view seeing some randum girl, which pinched her...

may be he was too hurt with geet's denial that he changed so much...but now it will be more difficult for geet to make some place in his life...it will be difficult for maan, too, to allow her enter again...

cont soon

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

I dont have any problems with only geet's pov...

It is diff and better from earlier...

I am liking the story the way you are writing...