Wired Hearts (3) Ch:28, Thread: 4 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Oye teri yeh kya!!
Mere chute hi issey toh phir se bukhar chadne lag gaya.😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Susegad

Oye teri yeh kya!!

Mere chute hi issey toh phir se bukhar chadne lag gaya.😆

Yeh haath lagayege toh Mari toh uthne ka naam hi nahi legi...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: dqno1


Yeh haath lagayege toh Mari toh uthne ka naam hi nahi legi...😆


Nahi
I thought it would have a reverse effect
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Susegad

Oye teri yeh kya!!

Mere chute hi issey toh phir se bukhar chadne lag gaya.😆


Ab bukhaar chadha rahey ho toh khidmat bhi karo. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: dqno1


Yeh haath lagayege toh Mari toh uthne ka naam hi nahi legi...😆


Shh! Mera secret out nahin karna! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: muskanp

Hope u feeling better


Much better, thank you. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: muskanp


Nahi
I thought it would have a reverse effect


Haan lekin wo reverse effect show kiya toh haath chala jaayega na! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: dqno1

The story is from Geet's POV

Mujhe uska POV nahi sun na...

Kitna sata rahi ho tum Mari😭
There's a reason for it. IOYSM was mainly Maan's story. I always found Geet's POV in it a challenge to write. In the same way, I won't be able to write Maan's POV in this one. I see it only from Geet's eyes because that is how the mysteriousness of Maan's personality is unfolding for me as much as for you...
Getting back to the update..

I think she is right. She has been an evader for so long.. ab aur evade karo... khasiyat hai uski..

Hide and pretend nothing happened
Alright, I have to admit here. I felt there was a hint of some ire over here. Not that I would oppose to your opinion. 😆
Though the point is there that he is not going to allow her in his life again easily.

Whatever the flicker is, he is going to fight it.

Self preservation at its best.
Definitely. That is it. Like Apa mentioned in a previous comment, he is not going to let himself be anyone's doormat to walk on whenever they want.
Makes for awesome story telling
I hope.
Waiting for more soon.

Thanks for updating.



meri baat maan le


write a novel so that I can read uninterrupted😲

itna nahi kar sakti kya mere liye... making puppy eyes.😃
Toh intezaar karne ke liye tayyar ho? If I am going to write this into a novel, I will have to take the chapters off and finish it first before letting anyone read it. Manzoor hai? 😆


Thanks Avi! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: priya111111

congrats for the new thread👏


so geet thinking about maan's behaviour but still she sees some glimpse of old maan may be that must be because of seeing geet with vyan.yeh kya raya very much impressed with vyan😡

nahiiinnn😆

geet ke liye sirf maan😳


Thanks!

Don't worry. Geet sirf Maan ke liye hi hai, chaahe koi kuch bhi kar le. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: dreamy4ever

😆 Even geet is surprised like us to see maan changed to this extend. Lovely update 😃


She had to be. 😆

Thanks!

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