NOT-SO- ORDINARY (ss) updated pg-9 - Page 6

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

OH god anya ... aanya hiding

what was that? story di 😉

kahaan se itni achchhi language seekhi ... aapse 😆aur kissse learn karungi

tumhaari mom ko batana padega😆😆 .....nahi she will take off my net connection only and i will be grounded

BTW

tumhaare pahle wale FF ka kya hua? pata nahi i m not in mood to write mystery stories

*writers block*😆

but sachhi me I liked it thank u di

agli update final exams ke baad milegi ya jaldi mil jaayegi😆😆 nahi i will try to finish off at least 4 -5 chap till exams

Originally posted by: mayapari

Awesome start...

Waiting fo new updates

Originally posted by: preetidhawan

Itna spicy prologue 😉

Loved it 😊

Update soon

Originally posted by: envi

nice prologue

Howdy people ,first of all I m soo grateful to you guys for accepting my new venture and encouraging me with all your comments and likes .i have replied to ur comments and honestly i enjoyed reading them ,so here is the next part with lots of masti and spices ,hope u enjoy

Chapter 1

"Meet the gutter princess"

Geeta , Geeta where are you beta come here ...

Amma I m coming ,have some patience mere paas koi uddaijahaz nahi hai jo main rajkumari ki jaise tere pass aa jayoon .

Arre beta look who has come to meet you Chutki aur Mona aur waise uddaijahaz nahi hawaijahaz geeta .

"Aayi Amma"-geeta strolled out of the room with a humph sound and walked towards the root cause of the disturbance ,it had took her years to write crooked G on the paper which she recently learned from a kid of the chawl that too in return of her special ladoos but hell no people like Chutki and Mona were hell bent to ruin her precious moment with the pen and notebook .

Life had been very harsh on this soul, Circumstances kept things like books out of her reach ,every day for her was nothing but a battlefield ,where she and people like her had to fight to survive ,someone has rightly said that there is no fight like the fight for survival. Charles Darwin's theory which states "survival of the fittest "was the bitter truth of geeta's life .

Being the only daughter of her parents ,she was gifted with immense love and yes with this four letter word a huge bundle of responsibilities ,her baba had lost his shanks in an accident ,though she didn't have a slightest of clue of how the accident actually happened , whenever she tried to dig out the truth from her gullible Amma the only answer which she got in return was THE ROYALS ,yes according to the scary story or the ugly truth which geeta believe to be ,her baba lost his legs because some so called jungle kutta had been careless enough to crush her babas legs ruthlessly ..THE MORAL OF THE STORY FOR GEETA WAS THAT ROYALS WERE NOTHING BUT A PAIN IN HER A**.

THE ROYALS had forced her to give upon her studies and work in factory as a tailor .Her work consist of sitting and standing in dense lines for up to 12 hours a day (sometimes more), cutting fabric, sewing garment pieces together, placing buttons and collars, printing T-shirt designs, and cleaning stray threads. And she often found herself vulnerable during their commutes, experiencing verbal abuses from men ,but this vulnerability didn't make geeta weak rather it made her"jhaansi ki rani" which her Amma rightfully said.

"Arghh ye mona aur wo chutki ki bachi do min thand nahi rakh sakti thi kya ,waise bhi mere liye kala akshar bhais barabar hai ,kaminee kahi ke aaj agar maine inka mundan nahi karwaya na to mera naam geeta nahi "-while muttering all these curses to herself she failed to notice that one more living creature was listening to her "sweet bhajan".

"Urmm geeta" -the boy called her meekly

"Majnu ,Saale WHAT are you doing here ,bhool gaya kya wo naksha jo maine tere munde pe banaya tha ,dont tell me you liked it soo much that you willingly came in my den "-rattled down angry geeta first her philosophy with books had literally gone into a drain and then this spineless ugly creature was sticking to her like a magnet .

The GREAT story of MAJNU AKA Balbeer rewinds like this , Balbeer was supposedly in love with geeta and last evening when geeta was bargaining with the vegetable vendor ,the guy proposed her in the middle of the mandi and thanks to his stars that geeta just simply gave a 250 g power packed punch on his nose which was enough to knock the daylights out of poor Balbeer ,now he looked like a miniature Mickey mouse . (expect the fact that Mickey's are cute but Balbeers are pigs )

"Abbe tu apna rasta nap warna" - geeta threatened poor balbeer which was enough for him to reel out the eventful moments of last evening and run like an athlete participating in the Terrapin event .

"Arre geeta tu aayi nahi "-called amma for the umpteenth time .

"Kya hai amma tera record to band hi nahi hota i was coming here only but wo saala chipku mil gaya".

Chipku!! - asked amma twitching her eyebrow in confusion .

"Oh teri !!syaapa" hissed geeta -and then turned her attention to deal with her overly sensitive amma whose tension alarm was always on snooze -"arre umma chipku nahi chamku wo keedarnath ji ka launda."

"Ohh chamku , leave it .You better hurry ,chutki and mona are waiting for you ,hurry geeta "- replied amma though somewhere she wasn't satisfied with her daughters reply she could instantly smell something in her story and wished that this time her daughter had not ran into some trouble intentionally or unintentionally .

"Ok amma ,you take your medicines on time, Bye .Chal jaldi se apni batisi dikha " -geeta kissed her amma hurriedly and rushed towards her new bakras .

Geeta so gayi thi kya ,how much time do u take to come from first floor to ground ?- jeered an angry mona

"Oye mona mere spheed sheed pe tu tok na ,raaste me mujhe wo chitta tel mil gaya tha ,babaji ki kasam ajj to main uska korma hi banadungi ,suyar ka baccha he sticks to me like lies in head arghhh I hate him soo much" - geeta poured out her sad story infront of her friends which made her friends laugh away their problems. Geeta's lively and tapori nature worked like a medicine on the wounds of people who had infinite problems .though the girls had to face hardships of life but the dark side of life couldn't take her innocence and feisty persona .

"Really!! geeta wasn't that punch enough for him to run for his life ,anyways leave all this don't you want to see BUMBAI in Bumbaidarshan ".-reminded chutki

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"Maan ,where are you son ?"

"Dad is that you", maan closed the projector instantly and turned to walk out of the room .

"Yes ,what the hell are you doing here ?god don't tell me you doubt your decision ,I hope you are not doing something stupid because your baseless assumptions can cost fortune to your people ,I hope you will do justice to your people and the throne" -Maharaj Yash saw his son standing admist of the room ,the very room where 15 years ago everything changed, the room had been a witness to happiness ,distress ,anguish and prolong loneliness.

"Ohh come on dad ,i was just passing through this room and found it open so thought to the shut the door and some memories" - maan replied with a sigh ,barely uttering the last part of the sentence .

"lets go, out of here dad ,Dadibha must be waiting for us in her study ,Mahasabha people will arrive any moment "- Maan said to his dad and rushed from there ,taking long steps to escape the scrutinising gaze of his father ,which was enough to burn him down any moment .

After a long pause YASH said -"Ok lets go !!"

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A/N-THUD Aanya is officially dead🤢. never in my life typed OUT this much god knows how people give 2000 word update may be they posses some ninja skills .WHICH I DEFINATELY DONT !!😆

,Here i have taken some writers liberty

Like calling Mumbai ,Bumbai. The tapori geeta is in form here so if you are having any problem in understanding some slang plzz tell me i would be happy to help u guys .geeta doesn't know English here so imagine that all those dialogues in English are actually in hindi .

Signing off over to u readers ,😃

Waiting for you likes and comments .

Have a great day

love ya

aanya 😃.

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