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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Geet(a) hahaha
One chapri girl ...lol

Ooh Prince Maan

Waiting for more

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COLOGY

@COLOGY

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

The chal language was a bit diff to read at first but it sounds so funny.

So Maan has got to do with Geeta's misfortune, as in her dad's accident...

Plz update the next part soon :)

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kainturakiran

@kainturakiran

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

lovely...

geeta speaking in tapori language i love it

dialouge- chal batisi dikha...😆

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maaniqra

@maaniqra

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

awsm start...looking 4ward 4 updt

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

gutter princess 🤣🤣
oh geet's typical tapori style n her sweet sweet ssugar coated words wahhh🤣🤣
she punched balbeer coz he proposed her, well it was in mandi haina
Tia wondering she she would have done if he had proposed her alone uff babaji has saved that munda🤣🤣
she is really gr8
oh im in love with her fiesty character
n maanu my maanu is a prince
bt y maanu so sad type here
n wt decision he made
uff first part n Tia has so many ques😆😆😆
cholo i know i will get the ans as the story proceed😉😉😉
the prologue n this first part totally diff
really eager to read moreee
loved it

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

lol u mean storm geet.. awesome yaar... ur an awesome writer.. cont soon.. now how do they meet

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

awesome update

geeta's language😆

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

he he
Aanya I never expected this from you😆😆

any way this was hilarious

I can's give a detailed comment like you give on my updates

sorry baby

😕

so as I can see this is a story of a king and a slum girl

OMG

ye Geeta bhi na

kya cheese banaayi hain uparwale ne

us pig ko beech sadak par hi ek power packed punch de diya

good

Geet ke father hain ab ya nahin

aur ye kya wo ye kyun kah rahi thi ki uske liye kala akshar bhaons baraabar

that means she never went to school

Now I m eager to see how the prince of the palace meets the princess of slums

mujhe udaayijahaaz word bahut achchha laga

pahle to laga ki tumne galat type kiya

phie dkha ki geeta madam hawaaijahaaz ko udaayijahaaz kahti hain

loved it

aur haan 12th shuru hone se pahle isko khatam kar dena

waiting for the next

update soon Aanya😆😆

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: -calculus-

Not fair Aanya

main aisi language kabhi nahin bolti hoon😆

chalo tumhaari mom ko nahin kahungi

warna mujhse baaten bhi to nahin kar paaogi na

jaldi jaldi updates dena

I will wait

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Geet is full too Tapori.. but her Amma is so sweet... Gosh pata nahi kaisee sambhalati hogi aisee disaster ko..😆Maan n Yash's convo.. humm. Waiting for next part..