NOT-SO- ORDINARY (ss) updated pg-9 - Page 4

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

okkk

so its a royal story bang on

with hindi masaala film touch yes there will be

with lots twist and turns hmm lets see

and dhaasu dialogue lol i will try 😆

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count me in counted 😉

Originally posted by: aparna3011

wow

what a start

continue soon

Originally posted by: COLOGY

Interesting start yup with all baddie😉

Geet is Royal? hmm u guess 😆

Lol she seems damn hilarious with her gussa :p hahah yes she is

waiting for the actual start :) trying hard to give by today 😛

Originally posted by: preeti.1

amazing start waiting

Originally posted by: mishtypiya

great... plz continue soon n pm me also...

Originally posted by: .Tulip.

haha dat ws zara hatke start of d story ... glad u liked the zatka start 😆

lykd it... wud luv to read more thank u sure will update soon

Originally posted by: kainturakiran

nice start...

continue soon

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

feisty gal and the cool dude... lovin' it!

PM please :)

Originally posted by: _CookieMonster_

Nice

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

congrats.. thank u di
colorful names yes indeed
moron satan kumar 🤣 😆
so both r yuvraj n yuvrani... guess guess
will wait for more 😆 sure will update soon