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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey people ,how are you ?just got over with my exams(apparently ) and thought to write something ,this idea just struck my mind and thought how about me writing on maaneet (though I m not sure whether someone has already written something like this )so here is the prologue .I will try to finish this off as soon as possible only if you guys help me to sail through this story . so enjoy !

Prologue

B**tard

A**hole !!


arghh ! I soo hate him!!


Why god why , why u wrote that bas***d's name in my fairy tale ,couldn't you find some other guy, out of 1 billion umm no actually trillion you found that elf for me ! lord I wish I just wish to die !


What a colorful vocabulary darling .


Wow just what I needed ,Don't darling me Mr - I -m -so- arrogant .


Thishh did you hear that ,Ahh u broke my heart !!


Ohh did I but last time when I checked my facts I remember reading monsters like you don't have a thing called heart.


Pray tell me, his highness what on earth brings you here.


Your creepy smile ,yellow teeth ,broom like hair umm I missed something ya , last but not the least your sugary voice .


Thank you for the "sweet compliments"I m floored ,Tell me something new Maan I think your sarcastic comebacks have gone for a wild ride .


tsk tsk poor little deer caught in headlights ,aww your face was worth watching when that girl unintentionally pushed you ,may be she was too busy checking me out


purposely pushed me . Mr -I m - so right, you need to go back to school to get your vocabulary right.


Sure I will but will you just enlighten me by giving me the name of the infamous vocabulary school you are going to ,maybe my handsome face will brighten your life and add spice in your boring classes.


Soo full of yourself aren't you ?I m allergic to your face ,you effing ba**ard!! Leave my room ,why can't you just let me live in peace ,have you just taken some Hippocratic oath "that I Mr - M for moron swear by mischief to make ,Geeta mishra's life nothing but a trouble paradise"


Correction sweetheart the name is MSK .


HUH?? Msk as in Moron Satan kumar , I m glad that you admitted at last !


Tch tch your hinglish suck like your good for nothing Tv heros.


OYE don't go on my heros , they are way better than you actually it will be an insult to them if I compare them to you .


Sure sure ,talks who Geet who a while ago was calling upon heaven to see my face.


Yuck!! Hat mere raaste se kutte kamine . .


Hmm at last geet is back with her razor sharp tongue ,I missed this teekhi geet pretty much, though I would love to hear your colorful comebacks but I m afraid to tell that I have to burst this balloon wish of mine as everyone is desperately waiting for us ,now be a good girl and follow me like a well behaved princess.


Dream on yuvraj , I will never step out of this room , jaayegi par meri jhooti wo bhi tere is sar par !


Maan looked at Geet with a scowl , and without warning swept her off her feet .


Get this straight in your thick head Yuvaraani Geetanjali Handa for once and all ,that you are mine .




Here is the prologue , just add -calculus- in ur buddy list for pms

Love ya ,have a great day

Aanya

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsm start...looking 4ward 4 updt...yuvrani geet...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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will come back later ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ye kya tha???!!😲
I'll give a proper comment after I understand something. .
Waiting for the next !

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Posted: 11 years ago
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fab pro hun.. lol soo maan is in love with geet! but what about geet? ofcourse this is not ur normal fairytale love story im assuming.. cont soon hun, post the 1st part soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats on the new story
loved the prologue😆
MSK- moron satan kumar🤣
will love to read it...
continue soon!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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okkk
so its a royal story

with hindi masaala film touch

with lots twist and turns
and dhaasu dialogue

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count me in
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting start
Geet is Royal?

Lol she seems damn hilarious with her gussa :p

waiting for the actual start :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great... plz continue soon n pm me also...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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haha dat ws zara hatke start of d story
lykd it... wud luv to read more

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