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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad



Smexy lips, you need your wiring fixed
Do kadam aagey badhegi aur che kadam piche😔


Well, at least I get somewhere in this khheecha taani. Aagey nahin toh peechhe sahi. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


Is that a dig at my healthfulness..😲





*looks up*

Babaji! Why is explaining something to Avi so difficult?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo





*looks up*

Babaji! Why is explaining something to Avi so difficult?

Kya? 😲
Ab meri comprehension abilities pe bhi shaq kar rahi ho?😲
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Why is there no pulling-the-hair-out emoticon?!

Aisa karo. Prepare the list of things which I am doubting on or aiming at. Wo mujhe bhejna aur main ek ek kar ke shikayaat dur karne ki koshish karungi. :P

Kal baat karte hain.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo

Why is there no pulling-the-hair-out emoticon?!

Aisa karo. Prepare the list of things which I am doubting on or aiming at. Wo mujhe bhejna aur main ek ek kar ke shikayaat dur karne ki koshish karungi. :P

Kal baat karte hain.

Theek hai... GN
Will have an update to read when I wake up 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

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Theek hai... GN
Will have an update to read when I wake up 😃


That's the plan!

Good night.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Behind the curtains... apt title.

Glad you got what it meant.
We get to see glimpses into the heart and mind of Geet.
There is always a story behind actions we take in our life. Culture, upbringing, our own perceptions of reality urge us in the directions our life takes us.
Yes, we lead a life on the basis of a lot of things...
For Geet, she made a decision to play it safe. I have been there as well as I am sure most people in general.
Stepping outside of "normal" is not an easy decision, especially considering she was surprised by her mother's reaction to Raya and Raunaq. She had wrongly assumed that her parents would not understand her. If they had this conversation years before I am sure the result would have been different.
Definitely. It was her assumption and her inability to bring up this topic with her parents that her life is the way it is.
The fly in the ointment so far to me is that she considers what she feels for Maan weak. It did not seem that way to me in IOYSM. Sure it was more of him in love with her then but there were feelings from her too. But as you said, maybe the fear she had that her parents would not accept it made her more reserved.
For her to tag her own feelings as weak was in comparison to how Maan felt. She has accepted that she felt for him but it was always her thought of her parents and their opinion that kept her from letting herself realised the depth of what she felt.
I like her new modified description of him😉 Sounds much more in line😆 He has grown from a college boy to a man and she noticed it. Reminds me of the chapter on Geet in the character sketch of TL. You did not go with a blue shirt?😆 I had to get that out of my system and fast.😆
In my mind, he was wearing black (☺️) when she saw him.
Another thing that struck me was that she did try to reach him three years ago. Why only texts and calls? What happened then? She could have asked Ayush, why didn't she? More of the story will reveal this I am sure.
A point that nobody is connecting here is that she lost contact with Ayush and Anaya around the time of Raya's wedding. The conversation she had with her mother was after that. And Maan had already severed his ties with her when she left, which was three years before Raya's wedding. She had no means of reaching him after that and secondly, she was convinced it was too late. I hope the coming story will clarify things further.
Now I am waiting to see the equation between them. This looks like a 100 part FF at least to me😃
The equation between them is going to be... twisted. That's the word I can think of. And no, not 100 parts but I'm aiming for 60. Already have 40 with me so I am going to begin wrapping up now.
Thanks for updating Mari.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Lovely expression of Geet's feelings from Nisha👏

Yes, indeed!

Thanks, Avi!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Patronus-

awesome update...

so geet do regret the fact that it was wrong saying no to maan...

m loving the flow of the story... not to slow nor fast.. its perfect...

another thing i love about your stories that they are not much dramatic...
waiting for the next...😛


Thank you! I am flattered to know you think so and I hope I live up to your expectations with this story. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

because of her family she rejected maan 's proposal and after hearing her mother's talk about love marriage she felt sad for not accepting maan. feeling bad for geet atleast she should have talked to her parents about this but fate has written different and now she thinks maan has moved on with his life and she is happy with his decision.

hope what geet is thinking about maan moving on should turn out to be wrong and maan must be still waiting for geet's approval


She should have talked, yes. Her assumption about what her parents would think led her to this but as you have pointed out, it was written for them. Fate, destiny, call it what you will.

I cannot say much about Maan moving on or not but I can certainly say he may not necessarily be waiting for her approval because if he did, he would have answered at least one call of message which Geet attempted.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: srikrithi

Geet realized she did wrong by neglecting Maan's plead for a chance.

I think her single status is because she has not found any man even close to Maan's personality.
She is happy that maan moved on.
Waiting for Maan's entry,
Continue soon.


You've put it quite straighforwardly. We can say that yes, perhaps she never found anyone close to Maan's personality.

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