New MG FF -Howzzattt...last Part on pg 56 apr 26..... - Page 26

nice update. So glad everything worked out between Maaneet. The next step marriage for both of them.

part 8-48
awesome updates
sorry for late reply...

awesome update

part 48
awesome dear...
excellent...
lovely...
so the others didnt know about this...
they thought its Sam all the while...
but its actually sweet Geet...
Maan is so naughty...
now they all have to convince Rano...
Vicky will be very happy...
cont soon dear...

Part - 49

Everyone cheer them as they come down the stairs...

They are surprised to see everyone...

Ridhi: Geet, tumne toh mujhe bhi nahi bathaya tha?

Geet: hare, Ridhi, ye toh tum sab ke liye ek surprise tha, par tum yahan kaise?

Ridhi: ye tera surprise hai geet

Geet: kya?

Ridhi: mein apne devar ki shadhi tey karne aayi hoon devraniji

Geet sharmathi...

Armaan: so Maan, are you ready?

Maan: I'm always ready

Armaan: let's go

Geet is puzzled...

Geet: but, Maan, you can't leave me like this

Ridhi: hare, tumme chodke wahan kya kaam ho saktha?

Dadi: haan haan, aap ke bina ye function ho hi nahi saktha

Geet: aap kya kehthe ho?

Dadi: Geet bte, hum aapke ghar jaarahe hai, aapke mabaap se aap ke haath mangne, aur shadhi ke tareek tey karne

Geet: kya? Papaji ko toh patha bhi nahi

Dadi: humne sabko kabar kardhi, woh hummare intrezaar kar rahe honge, jaldhi chalo

Maan takes his baggage too...

He is leaving tonight...

Geet is happy that her marriage is fixed but she is unhappy that Maan is leaving...

At Handa house...

Ranno is restless...ye achanak Dadi ne kehdiya ki hum aarahe hai apne bahu ko dekhne, aur aap Handaji aur Vicky ko bhi kabar kar dhijiye, aur haan aapke panditji ko bhi bhulalijiya humme jaldhi hi Geet aur Maan ko shadhi ki tareek tey karni hai...jitna jaldhi ho jaye utna achcha hoga, haina?

Ranno: ji dadiji, mein Handaji ko abhi bathathi hoon, aap log kab aarahe hai?

Dadi: hum shamko 4 bhaje aarahe hai

Ranno: ji dadiji

Ranno is worried, now where is her stupid beti?

Ranno always had this hunch that Geet loves Maan and Maan only...maa haina? Apni beti ko maa se achcha kaun samaj saktha?

Par Ranno also knows about Geet's huge ego and her zidd, bachpan se hi Geet aaise hi hai, ek bar usne decide karliya toh phir woh kudh apne baat ko bhi nahi manthi, jaisa uska sallu...

Issiliye toh Ranno ko pacca yakheen hai ki Geet Maan ko kabhi nahi chod sakthi, lekhein usski ahankar usko rokhtha hai, ab ye ladhki kya chahathi ye toh bagwan bhi nahi jaa sakthe...

Ranno ne Rahul ko bhi issiliye bhulaya tha takhi Geet ke mann ki baat ka patha chale...

Par Ranno ka woh mission bhi fail ho gaya, ek din Rahul se kushi kush baat karthi aur usske jaane ke badh udaas hokke band kamrein mein ganton rehthi, kissi ko bhi patha nahi ki woh kya kar rahi hai, kyun aaise kar rahi hai? kisse batein karthi hai? apne aapse batein karthi?

Kabhi kabhi raat ko bhi Geet ke room se batein karne ki awaaz aathi, par Geet kissi ko bhi apne kamre ke andar aane hi nahi dethi, Ranno toh gabrathi ki apni kadhki pagal ho gayi hai, uss Maan ke pyaar ne usko na hi kushiyan dhiya hai aur na hi usko apne zindagi mein aage nikaal ne dhiya hai, bechari ko pyaar ki bimari ho gayi hai

Aur Ranno bhi achchi tarah se jaanthi hai ki ek bar ye pyaar ka booth sar pe jad jaatha toh zindagi bar uthartha nahi, kyunki Ranno ne bhi Handaji se pyaar karkke hi shadhi kiya tha, aur aaise ki kahin saal apne pyaar ko apne mann mein hi chupake rakha tha aur sare rishthon ko mana karthe raha tha

Ek din jab unke papaji ne zabardasthi ranno ki shadhi kissi aur ladhke ke saath pakhi karli toh Ranno ghar se bhaag ke Handaji ke ghar aagayi, Handaji ranno ke buaji ka hi bte hai, tabhi sab ko patha chala ki ranno ji ke mann mein kaun hai, even Handaji was surprised...he was after his career and didn't have the time for pyaar vyaar, phir Handaji bhi fida ho gaye the ...woh ek lambhi kahaani hai...

Ab Ranno bhi jaise bhi Geet ko samjaana chahathi thi ki pyaar mein dheri bahut hi fatal ho sakthi hai...

Jab Rahul ke saath Geet ko judhne ke batein karenge toh Geet kudh apne mann ki baat ko sabse share karegi aur phir sab Dadi aur Man se baat karkke koi na koi rastha nikhaal sakteh haina?

Ab Ranno kaise janegi ke Geet ne apna alga hi rastha chuliya pane manzil ko paane ki...aur Geet ab kamiyab bhi ho gayi hai...ye toh Handaji bhi nahi jaathe...

Ab toh Maan bhi bahut sudargaya hai, Ranno too takes note of Maan's news keenly...

He is back in in the team, Vicky bhi bahut kush ho gaya...

Ranno calls Geet's mobile but she had left it at home...she is not in Sanjeevani, then Ranno calls Ridhi and Ridhi says Geet is in KM...

Ranno ko patha tha ki uski pagal ladhki aaise hi kuch karegi, aur toh aur ghar pe sab ko kitna pareshaan kardhiya tha? Ab kam se kam usko samaj mein aaya ki woh kya chahathi hai, babaji ki lakh lakh shuker hai ki ab Geet ne apna zidd chodhdhiya hai...

Ranno asks Handaji to come home at once and bring the Panditji too...

Handaji is confused...ye Ranno ne Rahul ke saath Geet ki shadhi pakhi toh nahi kardhi?

Ranno explains him everything...atlast Handaji is happy that his daughter made the right choice, aakhir beti kisski hai? Rannoji ki haina? Jaise maa waise hi beti...sochthe kuch,bolthe kuch aur, aur karthe kuch alag...inko samajna bahut mushkil hai...ab bechara Maan ka kya haal hoga?

Handaji has gone to cal the panditji...

Ranno is preparing snacks for the guest...

Ranno calls Handaji...

Handaji: halo

Ranno: ji, aapne mittai kareedhliya haina?

Handaji: Rannoji, hum panditji ko lekhe aa rahein hai, aapke nalayak bta kya kar raha hai?

Ranno: Vicky toh bazaar gaya hai, bakhi ka samaan lene

Haandaji: usse hi kahiye mittai bhi lane ki

Ranno: mujhe toh samaj mein nahi aatha ki kya karein? Ye aapki ladhki bhi na? humse itni badi baat ko chupakke rakha tha, kam se kam aaj toh batha dethi ke Dadiji aarahe hai, meinne sare tayaariyan kar liya hoga

Handaji: aap ab Geet ko galiyan dena band kijiye, usski shadhi honewali hai

Ranno: isiliye toh mujhe fikar hothi. Ye ladhki sasuraal jaake kaise sambalegi?

Handaji: Rannoji, aap meri beti ki fikar mat karo, aapne sare tayariyan karliya haina?

Ranno: haanji, aap jaldhi aao

Dadi and party come...

Ranno: aayiye aayiye

Dadi: Handaji nazar nahi aarahe hai?

Ranno: woh aathe hi honge, panditji ko lekhe aayenge

Dadi: bahut achcha

Ranno: aap log beitiye, mein nastha lekhe aathi hoon

Maan comes and sits with Dadi...

Ranno goes in signaling Geet t come...

Geet tires to leave...

Dadi holds her hands...

Dadi: Geet bte, aap bhi beitiye, koi formality nahi hai

Geet sits with Dadi...

Ridhi: aunty, mein aapki madat karthi hoon

Maan keeps staring Geet...

Armaan: Maan, tumne bhi humme ullu banadhiya? Kya yaar?

Maan: mujhe laga aapke friend ne bathaya hoga, kyun Geet? tumne sabko bathaya nahi?

Geet: kya?

Maan: hare, hummare shadhi ke baat?

Geet: shadhi? Toh ye sab aapka idea hai?

Maan: haan, iss bar mein koi risk nahi lene wala hoon, Dadima, pabditji se kahiye ki shadhi issi mahenne mein hona chahiye

Geet stares Maan...

Armaan: Maan ko toh shadhi ki kitni jaldhi hai?

Sid: kyun nahi? Geet ki orders hogi? Haina Geet?

Geet: mujhe koi jaldhi nahi

Geet sharmathi...

Ridhi: ye joot bol rahi hai? Meinne dekha tha, itne din Maan se dhoor rehna tummare liye kitna mushkil tha?

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai

Maan: kya patha? Ye phirse kahin bhaag jaathi toh mein kya karoonga?

Geet: what?

Maan: haan, ab toh tum bach nahi sakthi

Dadi: Maan bte, Geet ko kyun tang kar rahe ho?

Ridhi: ye lo Maan, coffee lelo

Maan: mujhe nahi chahiye

Ridhi: tumme toh black coffee pasand haina?

Maan: lekhin aaj mein Dulhe raja hoon, mujhe Dulhan ke haath ke coffee pina hai

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hoga, aapko coffee chahiye toh lelo, warna nahi milega

Maan: Dadi, aapke bahu shadhi ke pehle hi mere izzat nahi karthi

Ranno: Geet, aao, ye lekhe jao

Geet goes and gets the coffee...

Maan takes it and sips it looking at Geet...

Geet: aapko toh mein badh mein dekthi hoon

Maan: suno

Maan calls Geet...

Geet turns back and stares him...

Geet thinks...babaji, aap kya hai?

Maan: Dulhan ko bhulao

Geet gets angry...

Ridhi: Maan, what's this?

Sid: this is not fair Maan, dulhan toh tere samne hi kadhi hai

Maan: ye? Ye toh kaamwali bhai lagthi hai, haina?

Maan looks at Armaan and winks...

Armaan: haan haan, Ridhi Geet ko andar lekhe jao aur tayaar karkke lekhe aao

Ridhi: Armaaan

Maan: ye kya hai? Hum ladhke walein hai, aur aap log humme thoda izzat dethe toh achcha hoga

Geet: Maaan, ye sab kya hai?

Maan: Dulhan ko koi samjao ki aaj toh hum yahan ladhki dekhne aaye hai, aur humme ladhki pasand nahi aathi toh ye shadhi nahi hogi

Geet: shadhi nahi hogi?

Geet gets angry and rushes towards Maan...

Dadi smiles looking at all this...

Dadi looks at Ranno...

Ranno holds her back...

Ranno: Ridhima, issko lekhe jao

Ridhi forcefully takes Geet in...

Ridhi: Geet, tum jaanthi hona, Maan mazak kar raha hai, aur tumne dekha tum kaise lagthi hai?

Geet looks at herself...

She looks shabby...she is wearing some casual salwar...

Ridhi: Geet, tumme toh kuch achcha pehenna chahiye tha

Geet: par, mujhe toh abhi abhi patha chala

Ridhi: koi baat nahi, ab change karlo

Geet searches her wardrobe and takes a suit...

Ridhima rejects it...

Geet takes another and Ridhi keeps rejecting...

Ridhi: tere paas ek bhi achcha suit nahi hai kya?

Geet thinks... After she left Maan she is not interested in anything and had not bothered about her looks...

Ridhi: tumme ho kya gaya hai?

Geet: woh ...

Sid comes with a bag...

Sid: hai beauty, ye lo

Geet: ye kya hai?

Sid: ye aapke majhnu ne bheja hai, apne Laila ke liye

Ridhi: hai hai, kya baat hai? Maan ko toh tummare barein mein sab kuch patha hai

Geet sharmathi...

Geet wears that beautiful suit and comes...

Geet looks like a typical Indian girl ready for marriage...

It's time for the wedding bells...

Geet comes and gets Dadi's blessings...

Dadi Geet ko ashirvaad karthe hai...

She is disappointed...

Maan kahan gayab ho gaya?

Geet keeps looking for Maan...

The boys tease her...

Sid: Geet, tum kissko doondhthe ho? hum sab toh yahi hai

Armaan: hare, Geet ab kissko doondegi? Apne Maan ko, hum sab toh ab paraye ho gaye haina?

Geet: guys, stop it

Ridhi: Armaan, mazak chodo, where is Maan? Geet is realy worried

Armaan: how would I know?

Sid: hum bhi toh yahi the, maybe he has left

Geet: what? Maan chale gaye?

Babaji, ye mujhse bina bathaye chale gaye?

Geet thinks that Maan has eft...he was sying that he had to go to the camp...

Maybe he left as it's getting late...

But Geet knows that Maan won't leave without telling her...

He must be here only...looking for Geet...

Geet runs inside to find Maan...

Geet: Maaan, aap kahan ho?

Sab Geet ko hi dkehthe rehthe...

Ye donno ab shurur ho gaye hai...

nice updates ab rano bhi maan gayi hai shadi kelilye aur tayyariya bhi shuru kardi chalo atleast usko samjh tho aagayi hai ki geet maan ke siwa kisi aur se pyaara nahi karegi.

part 49
awesome dear...
excellent...
lovely...
so Geet's parents too know this...
hahaha her mom's story also was funny...
too good...
yeh dono phir shuru hogaye...
but this is what keep their love going...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

nice update..

welcome back dona...

Part - 50

Suddenly Maan shouts...

Maan: Geeet, jaldhi aao

Maan is in her room...

Geet runs to her room...

Maan gets hold of her and pulls her in...

He locks the door immediately...

Geet looks at him and Maan keeps staring her...

She looks like an angel...

Maan couldn't take his eyes off her...

Maan pins her against the wall...

He looks into her eyes...

She had missed him so much all these days...

Her room is full of Maan's posters...

Now she doesn't need the posters...

The poster boy is her, right next to her...

Geet still couldn't believe that Maan is back...

It all seems like a dream to her...

Maan is puzzled by her doubtful looks...

Maan: Geeet, Geeet

Maan shakes her...

Geet realizes that it's not her dream and it's real...

Geet: Maaan

Geet hugs him tight...

Maan too hugs her...

Maan: Geet, mujhe maaf kardho, ab mein tumme kabhi bhi aaise pareshaan nahi karoonga

Geet: ab toh mein aapko ek pal ke liye bhi akhele nahi chodoongi

Maneet eyelock...mahi...

Geet then looks at her dress scattered on the bed and all her things packed...

Geet: Maaan, mera dress

Geet tries to arrange them back...

Maan sops her...

Maan: Geet, jaldhi karo, humme dher ho rahi hai

Maan is packing her things ...

Geet is confused...

Suddeny Geet thinks how did he get here?

She was here only and when did he enter her room?

Geet: ye aap yahan kaise?

Maan: mein toh yahi tha

Geet: what?

Geet: aap kab aaye yahan?

Maan: jab tum change kar rahi thi , ussi waqt mein aagaya tha

Geet blushes...she pretends to be angry...

She knows that Maan is lying...

Maan: sach Geet, mein toh tumme iss saree men dkehkhe apna hosh hi ko gaya tha

Geet: joot mat boloi

Maan: nahi Geet, tumme yaad nahi, jab tum aaine mein apne aapko dekh rahi thi, tab toh meinne hi tummare choli teek kiya tha

But that was realy Maaan...

Geet: aap yahan kya kar rahe the?

Maan: mein apne Dulhan ki madat karne aaya tha

Geet: mujhe aapki koi madat nahi chahiye

Maan: nahi chahiye

Maan tires to be serious...

Geet: nahi

Maan: Geet, ab toh tumme aksar meri madat ki zaroorat hogi

Maan pulls her and hugs her...

Geet tries to push him...

Maan stares her wet lips...

Geet knows his intensions...

Geet: aap ko andar nahi aana chahiye

Maan: kyun?

Geet: kyunki ye mera kamra hai

Maan: Geet, tum kuch bhool rahi ho

Geet: kya?

Maan: ab toh tum hi meri ho agyi ho toh ye kamra bhi mera hua haina?

Geet: ha ha ha ha, Mr.Khurana abhi hummari shadhi nahi hui hai

Maan: mein kuch nahi jaantha, Geet ab meri ho gayi hai, Maan ki Geet

Maan pulls her even closer...

Geet: achcha?

Maan: haan

Maan hugs her and kisses her forehead...

Geet pushes him...

Geet: Maan, ye sab kya hai?

Maan: hare, hummara rishtha pacca ho gaya hai Geet

Geet: toh?

Maan: toh hum HM manane jarahe hai

Geet: kya? Aap pagal ho gaye ho

Maan: tum kuch bhi kaho, mein toh apne mishti ko iss bar akhele chodke nahi jaa saktha

Geet: kyun? Aap ko mujhpe barosa nahi hai kya?

Maan: nahi Geet, mujhe toh ab apne aap pe hi barosa nahi hai, wahan koi aur achchi ladhki miljaathi toh, tera kya hoga?

Geet takes the pillow and hits him...

Geet: koi aur ladhki milegi aapko? Mein nahi hothi toh aap aaj aaise batein nahi kar rahe honge

Maan: haan Geet, ab batein se kya hoga?

Maan stops her and holds her hand...

Geet freezes...

Maneet eyelock...Mahiii...

Someone knocks...

Geet tries to get out of his hold...

Maan won't leave her...

Geet: Maan, chodo mujhe, koi aaya hai

Maan: shhh chup bilkul chup

Maan closes her mouth...

Ridh: Geeet

Geet tries to reply...

Ridhi: Geeet, aunty tumme bhula rahe hai

Maan: unse kaho Geet thodi busy hai, usse disturb nahi karein

Ridhi: toh aap log busy ho?

Maan: haan , tum bhi disturb mat karo

Ridhi laughs...

Ridhi: teek hai, enjoy...

Geet : Maaan

Maan: Geet, woh chali gayi

Geet: maa kya sochegi?

Maan: Geet, ab toh tumme sirf yahi sochna hai ki Maan kya soch raha hai

Geet: achcha ji, ab aapke dimag mein kaunsa naya shararat soojhtha hai?

Maan: ye toh mein tumme on the way bathatha hoon, ab toh jaldhi chalo, humme jaana hai

Maan takes her bag...

Geet: Maan, hum kahan jaa rahe hai?

Maan: tum pehle aao mere saath

Geet: mujhe toh chief ko inform karni hai

Maan: meinne Armaan ko bathadhiya hai

Geet: kya? Toh apne mujhe kyun nahi bathaya?

Maan: Geet, meinne socha ki mein tumme surprise karoon

Geet: par hum kahan jaa rahe hai?

Maan: itna sawaal kyun karthi ho? mein kya tumme kidnap karke jaa raha hoon?

Geet: mere garwale toh aaisa hi sochenge

Maan: sochne do

Geet: Maan, kam se kam papaji se toh bathake aati hoon

Maan: Dadi haina? Woh sabko sambalenge

Maan just catches her hand and takes her to the car infront of her famiy...

They watch them with their mouths wide open...

started New SS ...Ek nokhi Grahapravesh...on this new year...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/104635001

nice update. why have you posted your new ss on fan fiction section. i dont think many geet forum readers visit fan fiction section nowadays.