New MG SS - Ek Anokhi Grahapravesh.updated pt 2 link &note on pg1

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Posted: 11 years ago
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NOTE...posted this on GEET FORUM...will continue there...here's the link...

pt 2 link...
follow this SS on this new link guys...😉
sorry for the confusion...😕
Ek Anokhi Grahapravesh...

This is a SS and there is no prologue for this...

So let's start straight away...

Geet Handa happens to be a student in Delhi...

And she is exploring the metro city with her friend...

And let's join her journey which is quite unique...

She is in pursuit of something and let's find out what's in store for her...

Part - 1

Geet and her friend Pinky are out in the posh area of Delhi...

Pinky: Geet, tum pagal ho gayi ho kya?

Geet: tum itna kyun darthi ho?

Pinky: hum aaise kaise kissi ke ghar mein gussakthe?

Geet: pinky, hum chori toh nahi karne jaarahe hai

Pinky: par ye hummare area nahi hai, yahan har ghar mein security hotha hai, woh har kissi ko andar jaane nahi dega

Geet: hum college student hai humme koi shak kaise kar saktha?

Pinky: humme koi aur jagah doondhna chahiye

Geet: tum thode dher chup kar, mein sab sambaloongi

Geet stops in front bungalow...

She looks at it fondly...

Geet: tumne aaise ghar ko pehle kabhi dekha hai kya?

Pinky: par Geet, mujhe nahi lagtha humme yahan koi aarthi utharkke swagat karega

Geet looks at the name board...

"KHURANA MANSION"

It looks very new...

Koi naya naya aaya hai yahan...

Par ye ghar toh bahut purana lagtha hai...

Isililiye Geet ko ye bahut pasand hai...

She likes the coloniel architecture and buildings built in that period or built in that style...jaise ki ye ghar...

She loves their elegance and their unique grandeur...

She goes and introduces herself to the security...

But he is not ready to allow her in...

Maan Singh Khurana ke ghar pe koi ladhki kaise jaasakthi?

He just refuses...Maan ko patha chalega toh usska naukri chale jayega...

Naukri toh ek aur miljayega, par MSK ke gusse ko kaun samna kar saktha?

Pinky: meinne pehle hi kaha tha? Ab chalo, chaltein hai

Geet is not ready to leave...

She keeps waiting still fondly staring the house...

Just then Nakul comes out of KM...

He is off to the market...

Geet follows him and starts a conversation...

She bribes him and he accepts her deal...

He asks her to come on Sunday...

Maan is going on a business trip this weekend...

Geet gladly agrees and leaves...

She eagerly waits for Sunday...

She is ready waiting for Pinky...

Geet: Pinky, itne dher kyun lagayi?

Pinky: mein babaji se dua karkke aathi hoon ki aaj hummare special rakhsha karien

Geet: kya?

Pinky: Geet, tumme zaroor wahan jaana hai kya? tumne dekha nahi woh security kaise apne malik se dar raha tttha?

Geet: hare Pinky, woh aaj ghar pe nahi hoga

Pinky: Geet, mujhe kuch teek nahi lagtha

Geet: mein hoon na?

They go to KM...

Naakul bahar hi wait kar raha tha...

Geet: dekha, kaise humme swagat karne bahar hi aagaya? 5000 rupiyon ka kamaal dekho?

Pinky: tumne issko 5000 dhiya hai? mujhe dethi toh ek hafte grand traet dethi, hummare happy singh ki dabhe mein

Geet: Pinky, ye lo tera chips, ab toh chup kar apne faltu batein

Nakul: madam, aap abhji andar nahi jaasakthe

Geet: kyun?

Nakul: Maan sir wapas aarahe hai

Geet: kab?

Nakul: abhi do gante mein

Geet: do gante haina? Mein toh aadhe gante bhi nahi loongi

Nakul: sorry madam, mein kuch nahi kar saktha

Geet: kya? tumne 5000 liya tha na?

Nakul: woh mein aapko wapas kar dhoonga

Geet: chalo dedo

Nakul hesitates...

Geet ko patha hai ki woh karj kar chukka hoga...

Geet: lao mere paise

Nakukl: madam, woh mein aapko agle hafte wapas kardhoonga

Geet: mujhe abhi chahiye, warna mein tummare Maan sir se paise lekhe jaathi hoon

Geet frightens him...

Nakul: madam, aap aasie nahi kar sakthe

Geet: toh tum mujhe andar jaane do, mein zyada waqt nahi loongi

Pinky: Geet, aaise jaana zaroori hai kya?

Geet: tummara chips katam ho gaya hai kya?

Nakul: teek hai madam, par sirf 15 minute

Geet: teek hai teek hai

Nakul: aap jayiye

Pinky: tum jao, mein yahi intrezaar karthi hoon

Geet: teek hai

Geet enters KM...

She is so excited...

She runs in and stops in the hall...

She looks at the chandiliar...

Its so beautiful...

She looks at the furniture...

They are all very old master pieces with intrigue designs...

Geet sits on the armchair and starts to rake...

She feels like a kid in the cradle...

Its so comforting...she doesn't want to leave...

But she has got to see the whole place...

She runs up the stairs...

She finds a room at one corner...

She stops looking at it...

She si very curious to find what's behind those doors...

She steps forward...

Just then Pinky calls...

Geet: Pinky, mujhe kyun disturb karthe ho?

Pinky: Geet, jaldhi aao, woh aagaye

Geet: kaun?

Pinky: hare, woh ghar ka malik

Geet: kya? itne jaldhi?

Pinky: Geet, ye sawaal karne ka waqt nahi hai, jaldhi karo, humme nikhakna hai yahan se

Geet is very disappointed...

She just wants to peep in that room...

Something pulls her towards it...

But she is helpless...

She turns back and starts walking...

She hears foot steps...

She hides behind the screens...

Someone passes by...

It's Maan singh khurana...

Geet can't take his eyes off him...

He is a well built young man...

Walking swiftly...with a lot of attitude...

Geet expected some grand old man...strict and scary...

When she heard that someone lives here all alone, she thought that it would be a grandpa who had lost his wife and is abandoned by his children...

But this man is very young, then where is his wife? Where are the children?...

Why is he alone? Maybe his wife left him?

As he heads to his room, Geet keeps looking at him...

She then gets out and runs down...

Maan hears her footsteps and comes out to see who it is...

He finds a girl running out of his house...

Maan is shocked...He catches her and tries to stop her...

Maan is awe struck by her beuty...
he looks into her eyes for he is not sure if she is real...
but she is scared and tries to shout for help...'
Maan closes her mouth and stares her..."chup...bilkul chup...
she pushes him hard and escapes...she never turns back and disappears.
He chases her but Geet had already left...

He asks his security but he says that there was no one and he didn't see anyone...

Maan is puzzled...maybe it was his imagination...

Maybe it is the effect of living alone in such a big house...

Maan has just moved in...

Maybe he is not acquainted with this place...

Or is this place haunted?

No no, he doesn't belive in such stories...

Moreover that girl looked divine and not otherwise...

Maan wonders what's wrong with him, his mind has gone crazy...

Maybe Dadi was right...it's not fun living alone in this vast world...

Maybe a jungle campimg would help...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats on the new story!!!!!!
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WOW!! its interesting...😃
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congrats for the new story dear

interesting start maan geet ko dekh liya
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very interesting story continue soon
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part 1
awesome...
interesting...
why is she visiting such houses?
whoa Maan saw her and is smitten...
lovely...
cont soon dear...

PS - which link u gonna follow dear? the one in FF forum or GF?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

part 1
awesome...
interesting...
why is she visiting such houses?
whoa Maan saw her and is smitten...
lovely...
cont soon dear...

PS - which link u gonna follow dear? the one in FF forum or GF?

will continue on GF thread...

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