New MG FF -Howzzattt...last Part on pg 56 apr 26..... - Page 27

nice update...
geet ki imagination nahi maan sach me hi tha usske sath...
geet to bechari sapno ki duniya me kho gayi thi

Originally posted by: kabslocks

nice update. why have you posted your new ss on fan fiction section. i dont think many geet forum readers visit fan fiction section nowadays.

oops...I didn't notice...

Part - 51

Dadi then tells them that Maan is taking Geet to Hosiarpur...

Last time Geet missed her chance know, this time Maan is not gioing to miss the chance...

Maan keeps drivng...

Geet wonders where he is taking her...

She keeps asking him but Maan tells her that she will know it in a few hours...

Geet too wanted just this...a long drive with Maan all alone...

Only Maan and Geet...away from everyone...

And in the middle Maan stops the car...

Geet looks out...

It' s some remote area...

Seems like some reserved forest area...

Geet: Maan, aap yahan kyun rukh gaye

Maan: tum bhi aao Geet

Maan opens her door...

It's very cold out there...

Geet steps out and she is shivering...

Maan embraces her and pulls her inside his coat...

Geet feels comfortable and warm...

Maan holds her in his arms and takes her towards his tent...

There is only the Moonlight and it's still dark...

They get near the tent and Geet finds a snall wooden table and chairs made out of logs...

Geet sits there and keeps watching Maan...

Maan gets a few candles and lights them...

Geet loves that atmosphere...

Though it's a little scary she is not bothered as Maan is with her...

Geet takes the match box form Maan and lights the rest if the candles...

Maan goes and gets a cake...

A heart shaped cake...

Geet's favourite chocolate cake decorated with strawberries...

Geet is very happy...

Geet: Maan, what's this?

Maan: Geet, I want to celebrate our reunion

Geet: me too

Maan: come on Geet, cut the cake...

Geet cuts the cake...

She takes a piece and gives it to Maan...

Maan holds her hand and feeds her...

Maan: pehle tum

Then Maan takes a bite...

Maan: now it's very sweet, just like my Mishti

Now Maan takes a piece and feeds Geet...

Geet comes near it to have a bite and Maan holds it back...

Geet tries to reach it...

Maan takes it back towards his lips...

They both have it together...

After that Maan tastes her lips...

Geet enjoys it as if she had expecting only this...

They get lost in one another...

Maan collects some logs and lights a fire to keep them warm...

Geet: Maaan

Maan turns and looks at Geet...

She is standing there shivering...

Maan signals her to come and sit near the fire...

Geet comes and sits there...

Maan too comes and sits near her...

She rests her head on his shoulder...

They look at the stars together...

It'a a beautiful night...

Maan embraces Geet...

Maan: haan Geet

Geet: mujhe bhook lagi hai

Maan: kya?

Geet: haan

Maan: tumne toh abhi abhi cake khaya haina?

Geet: par meinne subhe se kuch nahi khaya hai, mujhe bahut bhook lagthi hai

Maan: Geet, ek minute

They go and check the tent...

Geet finds some beer bottles ...

She gets angry...

Geet: Maan, ye kya hai?

Maan: hare, mujhe do

Geet: nahi

Maan: Geet, ye toh sirf beer hai

Geet: Maaan

Maan snatches it from her ...

Geet paresheen ho jaathi...

She tires to get them back...

But Maan throws them out...

Geet is surprised...

Maan: ye Adi bi na, usse toh aadat ho gayi hai ye sab tayaar karne ki, jab bhi mein yahan aatha Adi ye sab tayaar rakhtha, toh iss bar bhi usse laga ki mein akhele aaraha hoon

Geet: akhele aathe toh ye sab peethe?

Maan: Geet, bechare Adi ko kaise patha hoga ki ab mere zindag mein sirf aur sirf meri Geet ke liye jagah hai aur ye sab toh ab mujhe zaroorat nahi hai

Maan clears all the bottles...

Geet is happy now...Maan has totally changed...

Why not? He is not going to lose his Geet for that useless thing, haina?

They come out and sit near the fire again...

Maan gets her some snickers...

Maan: ye lo

Geet grabs them...

She finishes it within a minute...

Maan: aur kuch?

Geet: nahi

Maan: par Geet, mujhe toh ab bahut pyaaz lagthi hai

Geet gives him the water bottle...

Maan nods his head...

Maan: ye pyaaz nahi hai Geet...

Maan looks at her lips...fully loaded with honey...

"Peelon...tere neele neele aankhon ka sabnam...

Hai peene ka mosam..."

Isse toh Geet ko koi aaitraaz nahi hai...

They keep staring each other till the fire worns out...

As the fire resides they start feeling the cold wind...

Geet shivers and Maan lifts and takes her inside the tent...

Maan makes the bed for her...

Geet slips under her quilt and keeps talking with Maan...

She tells him about her UK days...

She had been waiting to share her stories with Maan...

Maan gladly listens to her bak bak...

He also was missing her bak bak...

Maan tells her how he struggled to quit drinking...

How he would listen to her recorded conversations with Sam...

How he felt bad whenever Geet broke down hearing about Maan's condition...

How he was determined to meet her only when he gave up drinking and became the Maan that Geet loved...that Maan who forgot his world when she was around...

Geet too told him how she spent sleeples nights thinking about Maan and that she made up her mind not to see Maan till she got back her Maan...that Maan whom she was madly in love with...that Maan whom she lost b'coz of her mistrust...that Maan whom she lost b'coz of her suspicions...she promised Maan that she will never ever repeat that mistake and Maan promises her that he will never think about anything else as long as Geet is with him...

They don't feel like they had been away from each other all these days even for a minute...

They have been together in their heart and soul thought they have been staying apart...

They have been living with each other in their mind and also knew what the other was doing and how they missed each other...

They keep chatting the whole night and fall asleep only at dawn...

That night Maneet make up for their long separation with their meaningless sweet conversations...

part 50
awesome dear...
lovely...
Maan is too much...
lovely romance...
naughty Maan...

part 51
awesome dear...
lovely...
cute moments...
they are spending lovely moments together...
cont soon dear...

chalo ab yeh dono kuch time spend karke apna itne dino ka ghum poora bhoolgaye ab indono ke beech sab teek hi hoga because they have learnt their mistakes

Part - 52

Next day...

Maan is still sleeping but Geet wakes up early as she is not used to this tarzan life...

She wanted to take a walk around but is scared...

She wakes up Maan...

Geet: Maan...Maan

Maan is still sleepy...

They are sleeping in separate bed on either side of the tent...

Geet calls Maan from her place...

Maan pretends not to have heard her...

Let her come to him ...

Geet turns around and gets closer...

Geet: Maaan

Maan: Maan turns towards her and smiles...

Geet: gud morning

Maan: gud night Geet

Maan covers himself up and continues his sleep...

It's still very cold...

Geet pats his back...

Geet: Maan, utjao na

Maan: Geet, yahan itne jaldhi utkke kya karogi? Sojao

Geet: mujhe neendh nahi aathi

Maan: neendh nahi aathi

Maan looks at her with lust...

Maan catches hold of her hand and pulls her closer...

Geet gets a little scared...

Maan holds her waist and gets even closer to her...

Geet could feel the warmth of his body...

Maan covers her with his quilt...

He signals her to lie on his shoulder...

Geet cuddles like a child and puts her arm around him...

Maan: ab apne aakhen band karo, aur neendh aayegi

Geet sleeps comfortably now...

Maan realizes what he had missed all these days...

He is not ready to part with her now...

Ab toh har subha Geet ke saath shuru hogi aur ha raat Geet ke bahon mein katam hogi, haina?

Ab aaise hi har raat Maan Geet ka bacha banke Geet ke godh mein aaram karega aur har subha Geet Maan ki bachi banke Maan ke godh mein aaram se soyegi...

After a couple of hours both of them wake up but keep pretending to be asleep as they don't want to let go of the other...they just want to stay like that for ever...

Maan's mobile rings...

It's dadi...

Maan: gud morning Dadi

Dadi: gud afternoon Maan bte

Maan: Dadi?

Dadi: Maan bte, it's almost lunch time, aap Geet ko kab ghar lekhe aayenge?

Maan: hum thode dher mein aathe hai Dadi

Dadi: jaldhi kijiye bte, aap logon ne lunch kiya hai ya nahi? hum aapka hi intrezaar kar rahe hai bete

Maan: nahi DAdi, humme bhook nahi hai

Dadi: Geet toh saath haina? Ab aapko kaise bhook lagegi?

Maan: Dadi, sare tayaariyan ho gaye haina?

Dadi: haan bte, Geet ke mapaap , Vicky, Armaan, Sid , Pari aur Ridhima bhi aagaye hai, sab apka hi intrezaar kar rahe hai

Maan: Dadi, kya ye hummare bina ho nahi saktha?

Dadi laughs...

Dadi: Maan bte, ye aapke engagement hai, aapke bina kaise hoga?

Maan: par dadi, humme abhi nahi aana

Dadi: toh teek hai bte, hum wahan aathe hai

Geet: dadi kya kehthe hai?

Maan: woh, sab yahan aana chahathe hai

Geet: kaun?

Maan: lo tum hi Dadi se pooch

Dadi gives the phone to Ridhi...

Ridhi: Geet, tum abhi tak sorahi ho? kal raat Maan ne tumme sone nahi diya hai kya?

Geet: Rdihi, tum kahan ho?

Ridhi: hum sab tere sasuraal mein hai

Geet: kya?

Ridhi: hum bhi yahi hai, Chandigarh mein, Maan ke ghar pe

Geet: mere sasuraal mein tum log kya kar rahe ho?

Ridhi: tera sasuraal?

Geet: haan

Ridhi: hum toh Dulhan ko dhoondhne aaye hai, woh Dulhe raja ke saath kahin gayab ho gayi hai, ab shamko sagaya kaise hogi?

Geet: sagayi? Kisski sagayi?

Ridhi: Geet, Maan ne tumme bathaya nahi, Maan ki sagayi hai, aaj

Geet: tum kya keh rahi ho?

Ridhi: tum Maan se hi poochlo

Ridhi cuts the call...

Maan is staring Geet and admiring her...

Geet hits Maan on his back...

Geet: Maan, aap ne mujhe bathaya kyun nahi?

Maan: kya?

Geet: aaj hummari sagayi hai?

Maan: haan, meinne Dadi se kehdiya hai ki aaj sagayi aur issi mahene mein shadhi hona chahiye

Geet: par itne jaldhi kyun?

Maan: mere paas aao, mein bathatha hoon

Maan pulls her hard...

Geet falls over him...

Maan hugs her tight and rolls over...

Geet tries to move away but Maan thrusts his body over her and locks her within his arms...

Geet looks into his eyes...

Maan keeps staring her lips...

Maan takes her lips into his and shows her that he is a tough competitor for Emraan...

Maan: ab mein kaise intrezar kartha?

Geet blushes...her cheeks turn red and so does her lips compelling Maan to repeat his act...

Maan couldn't control himself anymore...

Geet pushes him off and gets up...

Geet: Maan, jaldhi karo, humme jaana haina?

Maan: Geet, mere paas ek idea hai

Geet: kya?

Maan: hum apne sagayi ko postpone karthe hai aur ab hummare rishtey ko pehle shuru karthe hai

Geet: kaise?

Maan: Geet, kyun na hum apne rishtey ko SR se shuru karke phir shadhi aur sagayi se end karein?

Geet: wah...kya baat hai?

Maan: Geet, hum toh kitne alag hai, issiliye hummara rishtha bhi alag hona chahiye, haina

Maan tries to hug her...

Geet gets out of his hold...

Geet: aap hamesha teda hii sochthe ho, mujhe laga ki ye daru ka asar hoga, par babaji, ye toh sach mein aaise hai kya?

Maan: Geeet

Maan pretends to get angry...

Geet: babaji, ab mein insse nahi darthi

Maan: babaji, ye kaise duniya hai, jab mein nashe mein tha toh sab mujhse darthe the, ab mein jab achcha bacha bangaya toh sab mere mazak udathe hai

Geet: Maan, ab aapki nautangi band karo aur jaldhi tayaar hojao

Maan gets ready...

They drive home...on the way...

Geet keeps thinking...

Maan: Geet, kya sochthi ho?

Geet: Maan, mujhe patha hotha ki aaj hummari sagayi hai toh mein sare tayaari karke aathi

Maan: tumme fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi Geet, sare tayaariyan ho chuke hai

Geet: meinne Chief ko invite nahi kiya

Maan: meinne invite kardiya hai

Geet: aur Sam ko bhi

Maan: meinne sabko invite karliya hai Geet

Geet keeps quiet for sometime...

But she is still thinking about what she had missed...

Geet: Maaan

Geet shouts suddenly...

Maan applies the break...

Maan: kya hua Geet?

Geet: Maan, mein shamko kya pehnoongi? Mere paas koi achcha suit bhi nahi hai

Maan: Geet, tum toh har suit mein ahcchi lagthi ho

Geet: par ye meri sagayi hai

Maan: Geet, ye toh meri bhi sagayi hai

Geet: aap toh team uniform mein bhi aathe honge

Maan: tum bhi ek lelo, aaise chance har kissiko nahi milega

Geet: Maaan

Maan: teek hai, hum pehle tummare liye suit kareedhthe hai

Maan takes her to a boutique and gets her a beautiful lehenga...

Geet goes to try it in the trial room...

Maan follows her...

Geet stops him and she locks the room...

Maan waits for her till she changes and opens ...

Geet Maan ko pehenke dikhathi...

Maan suddenly enters and closes the door...

She looks very pretty in that...

Geet asks him how she looks...

Maan just keeps staring her...

Geet: Maan, kaise lagthi hoon?

Maan still looks at her and doesn't say anything...

Geet becomes restless...

Geet: Maan, kuch toh bolo

Maan just comes closer...

Geet eagerly waits for his comments...

Maan just nods his head to and fro...

Geet: what? achchi nahi lagthi?

Geet gets upset and turns to look into the mirror...

She finds nothing wrong in that dress...

Maan comes and stands behind her...

As she keeps looking into the mirror Maan looks at her thru it...

Geet: Maan, mein thoda moti lag rahi hoon, haina?

Maan: achcha?

Geet: haan, dekho toh sahi

Maan: mujhe kaise patha tum kaise lagthi ho?

Geet gets angry...

Geet: aap dekh nahi sakthe?

Maan: kaise dekh saktha?

Geet: Maan, mazak mat karo, teek se dekhke bathao

Maan: teek hai Geet

Maan gets closer and stares her back...

Then he slowly places his long fingers on her bare back and starts moving them around...

Geet melts in his touch...

Maan suddenly starts untieing her choli's knot...

Geet moves sensing something fishy...

Geet: Maan, ye kya kar rahe ho?

Maan: Geet, ab tum aaise kadhi hothi toh mein tumme teek se kaise dekh saktha?

Geet: kyun? Aap andhe ho agye ho kya? Mein toh dkeh sakthi hoon

Maan: tum toh roz dekhthi hogi, par mujhe koi mokha hi nahi mila, toh aaj tum itne pyaar se jaana chahathi toh meinne socha mein bhi dkehke bathatha hoon ki tum actually kaise lagthi, par tumne toh mujhe andar aane hi nahi dhiya, ab chalo, let me see

Maan winks...he then tires to remove her pallu and peek in...

Geet pushes him away...

Geet: aap na, din bar din shararthi hothe jaathe ho, meinne pocha ki ye lehenga kaisa hai?

Maan: hare buddu, ye toh meinne hi select kiya haina? Obviously ye bahut achcha hi hoga na

Geet: par mujhe kaise lagtha?

Maan: it's just made for you, but I don't like it

Geet: kyun? Abhi abhi toh aapko pasand thi

Maan: it's not letting me to admire my Mishti na, it's too bad, ab sagayi bhi honewali hai aur meinne tumme teek se dekha bhi nahi

Geet: ab aap apne natak band karthe ho ya nahi?

Maan gets a call...

Dadi calls and tells them that guests have started arriving and they should hurry...

Maan asks Geet to come in that lehenga itself as they are already late...

Maan: jaldhi karo Geet, aur kitne dher lagaoge? Tummare wajhe se hum already late ho chuke hai

Geet: kya? Mere wajhe se

Maan: haan, tum mujhe aaise hi distract karthe rehthi toh hum aaj raat ko bhi ghar nahi pohunch sakthe

Geet: mein bhi dekhthi hoon ki hum ghar kaise nahi pohunchthe

Geet drags him inside the shop...

Maan: toh Geet, tum bhi ghar jaane ki mood mein nahi ho

Geet: what?

Maan: tum mujhe kahan lekhe jaa rahi ho? I don't think this is the right place, come let's get back to our camp

Geet: Maan, aap ke liye bhi kuch lena haina?

Maan: mujhe kya chahiye? I'm always ready

Maan whispers in her ears...

Maan: mere paas protection bhi hai

Geet: Maaan, ab bahut ho gaya, aap jo chahhe karo, mein toh jaathi hoon, dadi mere intrezaar kar rahein honge

Geet starts going ...

Maan stops her...

Maan: Geet, rukh jao, I'm sorry

Maan apne kaan pakadke maafi mangtha...

Geet selects a kurtha for Maan...

Maan changes his dress too...

They are now ready to rock...

As the guests wait eagerly Maneet arrive in style...

Dadi introduces her bahu to everyone...

Sab kehthe hai ki Jodi ho toh aaise...

Then the music starts...

Maneet dance ...

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakthe...

Tere bina kya wajood mera...

Ab tum hi ho...meri zindagi ab tum hi ho...

Chain bhi...mera dard bhi...

Mere ashiqui ab tum hi ho...

love the update. Woow now they are engaged.

part 51 n52
lovely update...
naughty maan
finally maaneet r engaged ...