THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 47

Uff...such a toe curling update...so beautifully written..One of the most romantic update I have read...The flow of emotions...Giit dilemma...Wanting to shed her inhibitions...So well written...Very well written... 👏 👏 [=D>t
The whole update just had few kisses but had a whole sensual feeling without even an ounce to crudeness...
Awesome work...
Thanks for filling us will regular doses of Maneet...
Happy to note to u have only planned a small seperation...After this update will not be to read a seperated Maneet
Kudos to ur writing skills again... 🤗

Originally posted by: micky11

wonderful

This update was so serene

Geet bonded by her society rules inhibits her to move forward

still the heart wants to love and love

how calm and beautiful she wants to be in love and best part Maan supporting her even when he cant feel composed with her

I loved this lot and am waiting for their lovely moments all

wonder how you get these thoughts

bless you

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

geet is trying to show her love to maan the way others show but she is in big delima bcs of darji upbringing..poor girls.maan is soo cute and he understand his sweetheart well..i dnt know how geet going to reveal her depart. to HP..maan will be very sad yaar..wonderful maaneet moments...pls cont soon..

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Amazing Maneet moments ..They love each other so much.. understand each other so much.. Loved their moments.. Geet is going back to HP.. she did want to tell him.. but he stopped her.. Want their nice moments.. like Maan's cribbing becoz she is going away from him for some time.. Waiting for next part..

Originally posted by: cristallus

Awesome part...loved to see the way Geet had shed her inhibitions just because she couldnt stay away from Maan anymore.
their togetherness echoed love and it was beautifully expressed by your writing

Read Chptr 71

CAME ON UP TO PART 20

kya romantic update thi..☺️Thanks for update..😊

really a lovely and romantic update
waiting for more somehow the like button is not appearing on my screen
dont think you are not appreciated