THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 46

Originally posted by: divya22

Yaar koi in dono ki jaldi se shaddi kara do...

Both r in so much kashmashkas...

Na pass aa sakte hai aur na he dur reh sakte hai...

Daarji came bk so geet has to leave...

Well ek taraf se dekhe toh accha hai ki he returned... ab shaddi ki baat aage badh sakti hai...

Finally pinky wants to go bk to her dad...dats good...

Loved whole maaneet moments...

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Just read the update titled "saiyaara". Geet indeed has become a tigress in her own way. Loved her way of opening up to maan and her feelings expressing them so beautifully ..statue...hmmm...That is so sweet of maan to almost always go with the way geet would want things and follow her and to obey dadi's advice of not going to her room tonite and thus keeping her with him at the beach. what a serene sight that would be to see...maaneet together cocooned in each other's embrace under the starlit sky...

maan is definitley to going to freakout when geet mentions to him about her going to HP...wonder how they both will live without each other ...

absolutely loved the maaneet scenes you have thank you

Awesome part...loved to see the way Geet had shed her inhibitions just because she couldnt stay away from Maan anymore.
their togetherness echoed love and it was beautifully expressed by your writing

Originally posted by: annbell

sorry .. i forgot to press like button for last update...

n today's update ... " beautiful " ..

i never thought in my dreams dat geet would drive da bike ..

its soo surprising ..

n he took full advantage of it ..

her love for him was clearly shown in dis update ..

da confusion dat y she is not able to express herself just for him ..

but after "statue" thing wat happened b/w dem especially geet .. she took a bold step towards him .. da emotions flowing over through deir eyes were fabulous..

deir unconditional love for each other can see through dis update ..

with her maan is always carefree n naughty ..

loved it ... 😃

Originally posted by: Alpha01

Once again a lovely well written part that had me drawn into the story sighing at all the emotions flowing between the two.😊 Geets love for Maan is growing stronger and stronger as time passes and she is stuck between her upbringing and society and her shyness not realising that these very traits are what Maan finds attractive in her.😳

Loved the beach scene where Geet lets go and explores her love for Maan and they end the day talking and binding their love, thus making their bond stronger.😃

Maan I'm sure will be upset when he finds out that she is leaving but I'm also sure that he will be supportive when he knows the reasons why.

Waiting for the next part.

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

though i love all ur updates... but when u give that maaneet thud waale parts... am just gone😳...

Gone? Mat jao 😆

may be u write what i want to read... hayeee avi pls dont stop this silsila... mera thud waale wishing updates tho aur bhi kaiii hain 😳

Bhelwali 😃 Kitna add karu? Abhi bhi dil nhi bhara?

being a gal... we can really understand geets state... how much this world goes for equality between men and women... there r some aspects especially for us indians... where gals are bound by some rules and traditions...from the time we r born we are hearing, seeing and are told about all these ... and we tend to follow them... i love how u portrayed all this through geet...' It is easier to focus on him because I know everyone will love it. This Geet though very subtle and not her loud avatar is so much loved by me for the simple reason that it is the story of every girl; our loyalty, our caring, our whole hearted approach to the person we love and all the little doubts we have about ourself.

the bike ride..😳 what more to ask... am still in dream mode It is on my list.. 😳

each gesture of geet and her effect on maan was so dreamy... ki words nahi hain to describe ...

i just loved this uopdate so much..thnka u avi😳

Originally posted by: chavvi16

awww dear that was so cute
poor maneet though
well she wants him just as much as he does
but her morals and her upbringing wont let her disclose those desires for him
and she hates that
she can see how much he is suffering due to this
but of course for maan her happiness and comfort comes before anything even his desires for her
hmmm well that was pretty interesting
the bike rise with geet driving back
more like riding the wind
but more than that what she could feel from him sitting behind her
bless overwhelmed her didnt it
not that i blame her
and then her making him a statue and well then him trying to control hismelf as she touched him like never before
waise by the time you guys get to Switzerland am sure she wont want to stop you either
ahhh she is going back is she
and he dont know yet
but she didnt wanna tell him either and ruin his night
am glad this geet came out too the one who loves maan without any inhibitions
cheers for pm

Originally posted by: fatema_007

So the sher has atlast trapped the doe but surprise surprise...the sweet innocent doe had changed into a tigress 😆
loved Maan's plans nd attempts to seduce Geet nd then Dev nd dadima teasing both of them leaving behind an irritated Maan nd blushing Geet 😆 I had really good time imagining the whole scenerio 😃
loved seeing Maan controlling himself even though Geet had atlast even ithough if not fully but had got over her inhibitions. .but his respect for her nd her values had increased my respect for him 😊
now waiting to see how they'de manage staying away from each other 😔
thanx for the pm nd sorry again .. 😊

Originally posted by: muskanp

Wow wow wow
That was a tigresses their
Loved it so much
She just broke all her barriers
I loved how u beautifully portrayed her sides
Just like all of us
One bound by our values & upbringing
& t one who wants to just flow crazily in love 👏