THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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kkmouli

@kkmouli

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#1191

Chapter 71

Finally geet expressed her love in maan's way..

Maan completely shocked by our sherni..

Loved the way u portrayed geet's emotions her dilemma and the maan made her understand that she is the best with the way she is..

Finally separation has come n I hope I doesn't lasts for long..

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kkmouli

@kkmouli

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#1192

Chapter 72

Nice emotional update..

Separation really hurts and u have beautifully written it..

What dadi said about a girl's life is absolutely true..

If one doesn't get a partner who understands her life before mrrg and ppl related to her in that phase be it her parents her siblings her cousins her friends whoever it can be , then the girl can never be happy and contended her life..

I hope every girl gets a partner who just not understands and accepts her but also ppl who r related to her..

Our maan himself is a ideal husband so no doubt about him..

Then the best part is he understood pinky and ordered more ladoos for her..😆

Now this b****** Brij knows. About Megha too😡

And he is going to HP😲

I hope our geet is safe.. Even maan is not there with her this time..

I hope he comes back soon and take his jhalli with him..

Newaz I guess Brij ka the end honewala hai..

Eager to see him suffer more than what he had given to others..

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kkmouli

@kkmouli

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#1193

Chapter 73

Dear u have created passion without any physical contact..

Brilliant job..👏

I can't explain much for ur work in this chapter..

It just made me speechless..

Wish to see u writing more of such scenes not just passion but such speechless and brilliant work..

U always express feelings of all your characters be it emotional passionate or just their love in a beautiful way..

Thank you for giving us such a lovely story and a passionate Maneet.. 🤗

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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#1194

Hey can I nw have part 71 plz, Ive updated my comments on page 169

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1195

Speechless updates
Kya kahu
Geet agar isi tarah maan ko seduce karegi to apna maan kya karega vo to apna cantrol khoyga hi na is par bhi geet maan ko hi blame karegi na geet ye baat apki acchi nahi
Brij chandan ka apna bhai nahi hai isliye to usme itni crualty hai ki usne maid ko bhi maar dala
I love the way jis tarah aapne maneet ke dur hote hue bhi dono ke passion aur desire ko discribe kiya hai
Hats of to you 😉

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aachal20

@aachal20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1196

I love yor ff have commenting all your thread .love all characters in your story only positive.hate suraj and bridge .you are very good writerand I understand why you protected your story .and that's why I'm commenting even though I'm newbie and can't comment more than 10 comment a day still I have commented atleast one in each your thread yaar.plz plz plz send link.