THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 45

wonderful

Oops...geet going...maan nt knowing..ab kya hoing???,
Beautiful update
geet riding the bike was awesome
maan doesn't want to go home...he wants to stay with geet yet not break the promise to dadi. Kya idea hai sirjee
geet gulped her soft as well as hard drink back to back.lage raho
geet has nt told him she is to leave for hp next day. Maan is going to go crazy when he comes to know
geet wanted to show him her insight and express her feelings like he does
Maan understood she was feeling all sort of feelings aftr seeing touchy feely couples in the pub
update soon

Originally posted by: custodian75

Thanks for the pm. Lovely update. Full of Maneet. Just did not want it to end. Whenever you write about Maneet romance, there is a very subtle quality about it. Like you are slowly drowning in it. Just like their characters in this ff.

I can understand Geet's holding back. Cause it is not so easy to just let go years of restrictions. Hope the judai will not be long and Maan will not react in anger when she tells him tomorrow.

Originally posted by: honeygrape

you have left me speechless with that update of yours Aviii...omg...it was not just a romantic maaneet part...you have portrayed each n everything sooo sooos ooo beautifully...really , i need some time to put my mind in order...phew...one of the bestest parts and my personal fav part tooo...lovvv you for writing this story...this story and the writer will always remain in my mind...🤗 will read it again

Originally posted by: LM1991

Avi,

Lovely update! You expressed Geet's passion, love & longing for Maan so beautifully, loved It!!! 👏How true just because of Geet's traditional & conservative upbringing she is not very open about her love & passion, doesn't mean she doesn't have those feeling? I feel there should always be some mystery in love, so passion is more!😉

Waiting for Maan's reaction to Geet's separation. Can't wait for next update!

LM

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

after watching bold and outspoken girls in club Geet is regretting because of her naivity that she can't express her love and feelings to Maan as other girls can do but this is the beauty of their relation...

Maan has become so naughty that he is fulfilling both places...😳

Geet is drunk and riding bike...OMG...and Maan badmaash touching her...😳

then Geet played with him...she is trying to break her guards...Maan is surprised to see bold Geet...aww she touched his lips with her lips...and that made Maan break his game...I loved how Geet shred her feelings and lack of expressing her feelings to him...

their moments were so beautiful...Maan ne tou Honeymoon ka plan bhi bana liya Switzerland mein where it is so cold that she will not want to leave him...

so separation is coming but I am not worried as u have promised to end it in same update...

wonderful update...

thanx for pm...