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shruti

@gshruti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#471

sorry for late comment

but i m out of town for few days n thr is no net connection

i read last 3 parts in one go

all parts are awesome loved maans praposal

dev-maans bargaining n ofcource naughty daadi..🤣

i wish ye ff abhi khatam na ho😃

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shruti

@gshruti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#472

hey u hav't pm me part 71 link

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kamna

@kamnagupta7

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#473

lovely update

maan is going to angry on geet for not telling him dat she is going.

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Zeal-DD

@Zeal-DD

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#474

Mindblowing... Loved it

Full of maaneet ❤️ maaneet's bike ride *Haye* and maan sitting behind Geet *Dreamy* the way you write was awesome as always... The nightout at beach ❤️ loved it...

Geet is going away from her *THUD* Maan 😔 sad abhi abhi tu their romance started and she is going... What will be Maan's reaction

Amazing part... Just a request keep the JUDAI short 😃 love you

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#475

Very beautiufl part...& beautiuflly written.

Perfect Password for this part.

Geet trying his patience with her 'statue'...how much she made him crave to touch her with her innocent acts.

I want maan to do this to her, at least once so that she could realise what he went thro'

Beautiful, romantic, seren night at yamuna.

Maan understood her hesitation and what is stopping her to go ahead.

Loved the bold tigress geet, taking initiative and surprising maan at the same time.

So their separation is ahead...glad that geet kept mum for the time being so that both can be happy with each other.

Loved maan's reasoning to stay at beach so that he can not break the promise given to dadima.

Cont soon

One small request...can you give dev-tara's part also, small one will do.

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ishika18

@ishika18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#476

beautiful part.well written nd superb.geet is trying to be bold.md now their separatio.nd thanx for pm

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maansi25

@maansi25

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#477

hey my like button not working

geet in turmoil maan waiting

the bestest part ever,the bestest time spent by maaneet together

honourable maan respecting his promise to daadimaa

lovely

don't want their romance to end😳

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krati

@krati5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#478

it would have been tough to write an update where u have described almost every second of their night & that too wd both of their emotions... i never thought geet would be in turmoil... they did kiss each other... but now when u put it like that i can very well understand love is not all what we think, it has so many layers.. if every step has to take wd so much thoughts... god it an actual tough job...

but their stolen moments were marvellous, if i can just put out their expression in a picture you have shown... geet's taking initiative & maan complying in a nanosecond... when maan was in a statuesque form... first thing which strike me was trust & not playfulness in that moment...

it was a deep update avi... i loved it... serene for me

on yeah. how could i forgot about khurana's game of always be a step ahead of another one... maan's honouring & not honouring dadi's oder at the same time😆... always a step ahead. aadat se majbur

Edited by krati5 - 11 years ago