THE LOCKET (15) - MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 6

Originally posted by: dumas

loved the update maan is so possessive glad he is giving her space and understanding that he was wrong in his thing loved the song thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

this is for bringing such a wonderful update ... today itself and for surprising me... i love such surprises... do this often😉
Achanak se half day off mila.. have been typing all day😃
tables turned😆... with the intro of pyaari... meine kya kya socha tha... mere soch se mujhe hi sad feeling ho rahi thi ki maan is always enjoying... but u turned the tables avi... and i love it... pyaari ko dekha tak nahi koi who was standing on the doorstep!!😆
I think it was time to show Mr. Maan the mirror. What has he been doing, what he should have been doing. Emotional CONFESSION update coming up next.😃
but the most lovely thing was maan was not jealous ... he is now so super confident of bambis love... but the realisations which teji brought up in maan was so good!

loving geet teji bond!!! aur teji ne tho bomb hi phod diya!!! which gal😆 ek taraf ghayal sherni aur doosri taraf ladki ka daarji ... maan what will u do...
It is the pic of Geet that he took when they went on the college trip. She was there with him alone that day so she knows it is her.
thanks again for updating today avi... for the past 2 days i was in so bad mood... but ur updates just make me grin😃So does your enthusiasm and excitement. It is no fun writing when no one is waiting.😃

Originally posted by: honeygrape

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nice one Avi...

lovvvdd geet - teji frandship...loved his efforts n his care for her...glad that he made maan think about his own approach towards geet...let somthing go into his akal now😳

waise teji noticed maans jealousy n stay away from her waala attitude😃😃 now he is also gonna help😃 already in lov with this guy😃

wonder, now whom are you getting for teji...😃 no one is left...inkeliye bhi ek ho jaaye to acha hoga😉😃

the laptop pic waala scene , 😃😃 exciiited to read the upcomin parts...

thanku for the quick update...😊

Originally posted by: micky11

Hi, I have started reading your ff ,

this is so interesting

The ff is full of purity of Geet and Maans love

dont know how I missed it

will appreciate if you send me your blog address

Originally posted by: dhanyabinu

what you updated again,thank you ,thank you . you made my day. yaar nuce update. i loved teji. cute but sad for his love story. yaar some more maneet moment.

Originally posted by: punam2712

CONGRATS FOR THE NEW THREAD AVI

KYA UPDATE THA

MAAN WAS NOT JEALOUS OF GEET AND TEEJI - HE KNOWS THAT GEET IS IN LOVE WITH HIM

BUT HE HAS REALIZED THAT HIS LOVE WAS SELFISH - HE ONLY THOUGHT ABOUT HIMSELF

TEJI KNOWS WHO MAAN IS AND NOW WANTS GEET TO GET HER HEARTS DESIRE

DAARJI COULD NOT SEE HIS PUTTAR SO LOST AND UNHAPPY AND SO CALLED MAAN

TEJI NE KYA BOMB PHODA - AB MAAN KYA KAREGA

Originally posted by: chavvi16

congrats on another thread
may there be plenty more to go
oh my this entry sure is helping
ahh this shall be worth it
hmmm what teji saw how come maan didnt
and he says he loves her
kya tere pyaar mein aapne apni mishty ka kya haal bana diya
aisa koi karta hai kya
come on now and buck up there mate
and you geet make him confess naa
wait that he has done but she didnt really register it i see
hmmm this is getting so much fun
all thanx to teji being there
so anyone for teji i wonder

Originally posted by: CrabbyEntity

ufff our bambi geet can she get any more adorable😳..."kuch khanay main aa gya hoga"

This is why I like the Pooh and her comments... she notices all my attempts👏

poor maan...evn tara's lecture couldn't do much 😆teji z a sweetheart his bonding wd geet was so sweet and liked him more the way he made maan realize all abt geet and also how geet confides all her confusions wd him

I think she needed to open up to someone her own age.

Darji really z sumthng he has everythng under his sharp scrutiny 👍🏼

so wallpaper z still there but wondering if teji's pointing abt tht girl in the pic will help maan but that will make him maan ki side pe na...will see geet k Bf ka kamaal & i hope geet and darji get successful in finding teji a sweet girl 😉

Done deal hai... found someone already😃

Thank u for updating & for the Pm!!!😊

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat

So many things happening all at once Ji and yet they are flowing together like a stream of river... From the double long update to the smaller updates, they all have so many beautiful moments... Loving the flow of the work Ji despite u being so busy!

Gud se meethi comments... I love it when you comment😃 I think I am living these days with the galat fehmi that I can write..😆 Aisse comments de kar you are allowing me such hallucinations...😆

Thank you for the frequent chapters ... For me they taste of my favourite chocolates every time I read anything from you .. 😳 😆
It was like a whirlwind of emotions that took place in the previous chapters .. a night of revelations for the Thakurs and the Khuraanas .
the meaty third person narration was a job well done ...

The flash of passion on the terrace was no less than a dream ..ufff what a moment u created!!... When she was only wishing for the clouds of rain to let her feel the scent of his kisses ..she got a thunderbolt dose of lightning from the Ma(a)n who brought on this beautiful and painful storm... Aahh the bitterness of her pain washed away from a kiss in the rain ...and yet the sweet kisses are not enough for the parched and deserted pieces of her trust ...and of course im happy that Geet needs more of such passionate doses for her to make herself believe that her Maan is back ...just hers ... I think next to Darji I love Geet the most. There is such an inherent innocence in her character that you want things to be right for her. Perhaps a dream from all our childhoods that some prince will come on a white horse and sweep us away from all our problems and worries. I had this scene visualized for months and I was dying to write it.
Dilwale Dulhaniya le jayenge jiii haaayeee ... was just the line that came in my mind when he claimed his Mishti dose at breakfast in the kitchen with a perfect touche of passion and possession! ... Ufff Geet this is not just Imran Hashmi but thud thud Maan Singh Khuraana in Hashmi mode... Dhak-Dhak mode personified..BIG time !!

Finding love is also the most freeing thing in life, isn't it. He now has so much confidence from just her acceptance.

The realisation that lil turns of care makes this journey of Love more beautiful is such a thoughtful acceptance of his mistakes and it would be a treat to see how Maan will rectify his mishap ...

As always I have just given an overview of only a few things I could mention out of my long lists of things I loved from the chapters ...
Every character is so wholesome that irrelevant of how small a space they get in the story they become an integral part of it ... Teji is one such recent example !
It's so satisfying to read about characters ...who show so many dimensions of their feelings actions and reactions...a sign of what a great writer you are to have nurtured your small seed of a story into a blooming and mature Love Tale...
As always this Mishti is waiting for your next dose of words ...

😳

Originally posted by: muskanp

I loved how u showed maan not J but hurt with realization

Yes he was supposed to do all that & much more
Run & come looking for her
Get gifts for her
Do small small things to make her happy
He has done nothing but hurting her


Above all he is been blaming her & getting mad at her for everything
Geet is hurt & he is still in his la la land
Even with pyaari he was planning to fool around

But tejis entry made it all different
Still wonder if he understood how deeply hurt she is