THE LOCKET (15) - MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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gill123

@gill123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

First of all congrats 4 new thread lovely update specially teji character maan feel jelouse from teji waiting 4 next jaldhi se next update dedo

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: muskanp
So next part is that anger filled & then emotional bit
Suri & raj wala precap

Wow can't wait
I loved how u maintained geet simple with her thoughts & expectation through out
She not once questioned his love until
But again that confidence is because she read his diary
Had he had anything like that he also would not have doubted her feelings

I am not blaming him
Completely here

If he has assumed then she also has not read t letter
But again she never knew anything abt t letter at t first place

Thol mol ke dehko tho we do feel both t at equal loss & pain

But again maan has hurt her by his actions
Until now she hasn't done anything like that

So here we r with t milk man
Wonder if t perfume worked
😉
My guess it did 😆

Thanks for updating sweet heart

Yes the perfume worked..😆 Glad you are liking it so much.

I did not want to create a hero being wrong completely or a heroine like that either.

Reality is such that we end up taking turns being wrong😆 so same here.

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Aww..Dulari is pregnant maan samaz gaya but geet nahi...😆 Bada pyari ko lekar geet ki jealousy ka mazak uda raha tha.. now teji has came.. N I m sure Teji will make him J.. somewhere maan has trust on his Geet but still teji's care for Geet is making him insecure..😉 Waiting for next part..Avi.. I m loving chotu chotu but daily updates..😃

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saba

@luv_DD

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Lovely update. Love teji such a nice guy

Maan n geet kya hoga dono ka

Bechara maan but he deserves this

Darji n teji playinh cupid

Awesome update

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Ann

@annbell

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

geet is soo lucky to have a best friend like teji who supports her n understands her ..

daarji also .. he is trying to make her happy .. to bring back her smile ..

i'm happy dat maan is confident about her love ..

i liked both maan n geet's situation wen teji remarked about da girl in da foto ..

very nice update .. 😃

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

I liked nahi
I love it

Yah becharon ka timing khatarnak hain 😲

Hain emotional confrontation

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Lovely part...loved the toofan, the Teji...first maan was jealous of teji but now he is not...he knows what relation they share...

Teji was worried when he saw geet's face and that hit maan that he never cared for such things, how much he has hurt her

Geet kuch bambi nahi hai...she realised that dadi & maan did not talk about his marriage as he was in HP on the marriage date

Loved how teji tried to boost her mood with his pakoras

So darji plan worked and geet smiled seeing maan there, eating pakoras

Cont soon

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Anisha

@anisha_maaneet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

wow lovely part😉

pyari and dulari lol😆

loved teji entry and character.lovely friendship between geet & teji.hmm so geet is waiting for maan and darji ne maan ko bula hi liya.darji ho tho aise 😃.chalo geet ne realize tho kiya ki maan ki shadi nai ho rahi hai.😛.waiting for next one.

thanks for update.😊

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

omg lvd it lvd it lvd it spcly last scene...teji is too gd.
.lv him also...u made all ur characters so lovable wht i can say..darji knew abt geets lv at th frst tm...maan is nw under remorse...bt what he is doing to make her happy..oh th pic...nw wht teji will say n do abt pic...

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shruti

@gshruti

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Awesome update
chalo teji ki entry se in dono ki gadi
thodi aage bhagegi
waiting fr maans response for tejis ques.
N also waiting fr maneets romance
sorry fr late comments but m reading from
mob so not able to comment.
I'll comment proprly after my net connection is ok
plz pm me.