THE LOCKET (15) - MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 4

Originally posted by: mayyo

Officially tagged as the late comer! I think I've even stopped dreaming of being on the first page of a new thread!

Congratulations, though! 🤗

Aww such a cute update. Mr teji/mr Cupid is here to join two love birds

Teji ne to Maan se ikraar karvane ka bola he. Jealously kya?

I just discovered your ff and it is really awesome. I am generally a silent reader but I always press the like button. Can you please give me your password since I would like to read chapter 53 also.

Originally posted by: rost

I just discovered your ff and it is really awesome. I am generally a silent reader but I always press the like button. Can you please give me your password since I would like to read chapter 53 also.

congrats on another thread
may there be plmety more to go
oh my this entry sure is helping
ahh this shall be worth it
hmmm what teji saw how come maan didnt
and he says he loves her
kya tere pyaar mein aapne apni mishty ka kya haal bana diya
aisa koi karta hai kya
come on now and buck up there mate
and you geet make him confess naa
wait that he has done but she didnt really register it i see
hmmm this is getting so much fun
all thanx to teji being there
so anyone for teji i wonder

lovely update.i am loving this teji.

ufff our bambi geet can she get any more adorable😳..."kuch khanay main aa gya hoga" poor maan...evn tara's lecture couldn't do much 😆teji z a sweetheart his bonding wd geet was so sweet and liked him more the way he made maan realize all abt geet and also how geet confides all her confusions wd him

So many things happening all at once Ji and yet they are flowing together like a stream of river... From the double long update to the smaller updates, they all have so many beautiful moments... Loving the flow of the work Ji despite u being so busy!
Thank you for the frequent chapters ... For me they taste of my favourite chocolates every time I read anything from you .. 😳 😆
It was like a whirlwind of emotions that took place in the previous chapters .. a night of revelations for the Thakurs and the Khuraanas .
the meaty third person narration was a job well done ...

The flash of passion on the terrace was no less than a dream ..ufff what a moment u created!!... When she was only wishing for the clouds of rain to let her feel the scent of his kisses ..she got a thunderbolt dose of lightning from the Ma(a)n who brought on this beautoful and painful storm... Aahh the bitterness of her pain washed away from a kiss in the rain ...and yet the sweet kisses are not enough for the parched and deserted pieces of her trust ...and ofcourse im happy that Geet needs more of such passionate doses for her to make herself believe that her Maan is back ...just hers ...
Dilwale Dulhaniya le jayenge jiii haaayeee ... was just the line that came in my mind when he claimed his Mishti dose at breakfast in the kitchen with a perfect touche of passion and possession! ... Ufff Geet this is not just Imran Hashmi but thud thud Maan Singh Khuraana in Hashmi mode... Dhak-Dhak mode personified..BIG time !!

The realisation that lil turns of care makes this journey of Love more beautiful is such a thoughtful acceptance of his mishtakes and it would be a treat to see how Maan will rectify his mishap ...

As always I have just given an overview of only a few things I could mention out of my long lists of things I loved from the chapters ...
Every character is so wholesome that irrelevant of how small a space they get in the story they become an integral part of it ... Teji is one such recent example !
It's so satisfying to read about characters ...who show so many dimensions of their feelings actions and reactions...a sign of what a great writer you are to have nurtured your small seed of a story into a blooming and mature Love Tale...
As always this Mishti is waiting for your next dose of words ...

😳