MG(SS)~Bezuba~NEXT THREAD ADDED

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~BEZUBA~









Yeh dard, yeh aansu,
Dil ki chubhan
Sab reh gai ansuni
Mai roi toot ke, tu sun na saka
Tere dil me tha kya wo keh bhi na saka
Chaha nai maine kuch, par dard-e-jigar mila mujhe
Teri bhi kya khata thi jo tujhse bhi juda na raha yeh
Na kaha maine kuch ke lafzo ka aasra na tha
Aur tu apne hi gam me bolke bhi bezuba reh gaya




"She didn't speak because she couldn't,
He could have but he didn't."







~GEET~





She is lovely. She is sweet. By the sheer innocence on her face nobody could judge the strength of her heart. An orphan by fate's brutal play, she holds the lights close to her for the world could go wrong but she would never be lost.





~MAAN~




A self made man. Loves his family. Everything could have been perfect. Could have, but wasn't, because he had seen it all; cruelty of life, helplessness of fate, numbness of his own sins. And, he carries the weight on his shoulders which are broad but not large enough.







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Here with another SS. Need all your support n motivation cause m really nervous like always. This one is fast paced, intense n hoping u wud hav a fun time reading.



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~INDEX~


PROLOGUE- Scroll down

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9









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~PROLOGUE~





Raji- Geet umm... tum ab yahan se akele jao

Geet- par di mujhe raasta nai pata... she said worriedly.

Raji- yahan se sidha raasta hai

Sandeep (Raji's BF)- Tumhari behan kitni darpok hai...

Geet looked down shyly while Raji was ashamed, she looked at Geet sternly.

Raji- Mai thodi der me ghar aa jaogi. Ab tum jao. Agar maa kuch puche toh koi bahana bana dena..

Geet saw Raji walking away with Sandeep n appreciated her guts for having a boy friend n meeting him even after being born in a family as strict as theirs.

She looked around scared. Evening sun was almost down n the farm from where they were walking home had some not-so-pleasant stories associated to it. Geet baki bacche tujhe pagal bana rahe honge. She told herself, after all she was new to the place n possibly others were making a fool of her. Bhoot-woot jaisi koi chez nai hoti, haina babaji?

When Raji told her that she would show her around the pond, Geet had been ecstatic but now she was doubtful that Raji's reason for bringing her along wasn't for Geet's benefit. They were not on very good terms. While she loved everyone with her whole heart other girls rarely did friendship with her in this place. They always looked down on her n treated her badly because she was extraordinarily beautiful n Raji always stopped them from being her friend even if someone wanted. With her long, glossy dark hairs n milky-white skin she was breathtaking. Her almond-shape, hazel eyes were big n expressive, uske dil ka aaina. Her curves were still forming but were ample n so looked older then her age with her well-rounded assets which could spark lust inside a saint. Also Geet's father n Raji's were brothers for name sake only. They didn't actually like each other.

It was getting darker n she started to walk faster. She felt as if something-someone-was following her. Tera wahem hai Geet. She didn't dare look back n started chanting babaji's name, her heart almost in her mouth. When she felt the thing too close she called all her courage n started to turn around but before that a hand closed over her mouth and then waist. The grip was too tight and she was dragged into the woods. The man snatched her dubatta n threw it away. All the while her mouth was closed. She dug her nails into his hands as he nearly picked her up n took her into the barn behind.

He threw her like a rag doll onto the ground n she winched, tears stinging her eyes. Kaun ho...tum? She was completely shaken n her voice was shrilly. It was dark there n she didn't see his face. He came on top of her, his big, heavy body covering her tiny one. Bachao.. Her scream was muffled as he angrily slapped his hand over her mouth. Koi nai aayega. She bit into it n he pressed even harder cutting her oxygen supply to minimum. With her hands she attempted to push him off of her but he pinned them above her head. He held the collar of her kurti but she twisted in defiance resulting in the tearing of the cloth.

Furiously the man pressed his hand over her tummy n pushed her top up. He cupped her ripening mounds n lowered his face over hers to growl. He reeked of alcohol n yet seemed perfectly sober. Tears spilled out of her eyes n she could only try to struggle, scream n get free. The member between his legs probed her n she would have cried in agony if she could. He raised his pelvis n unbuttoned his pants, opening the zipper. She bit into his hand again with all her might n he shifted his hand to ruthlessly press almost through her skin on her face.

A tone penetrated the stinging dead of lone barn n the man took out his cell phone from pocket throwing it aside. Tell your brother that's what happens for ruining a girl's life. You get it back. Now he would know how it feels. Parting her legs n pulling the salwer down, he lowered himself on her. She tried to scream out her helplessness but the hand on her mouth was big n mighty n there was no air in her lungs.

Geet could hear her heart beating soundly in her ears. The phone must have gone off when he tossed it out of the way. Last thing she heard before losing her mind n floating into that thin space between consciousness n oblivion was the voice of some stranger in the phone calling a name again n again. Maan.

Next second her eyes closed completely n the muffled screams seized. He removed his hands from over her mouth. She was better like this, he thought, bezuba...

Her eyes opened at the break of dawn, she was lying discarded. Standing up on trembling legs Geet walked out of the barn. Her clothes were torn n she didn't even take her dubatta from outside. Her mind was numb. Moreover, did she have anything to hide anymore? Before reaching the main road she lost consciousness again. Next she woke up to angry shouts n crying. As she sat up a violent slap met her cheek. Pure khandaan ka naam mitti me mila dia. She looked all around at everyone cursing her with their harsh gazes. Raji was there too, no sympathy in her eyes just scorn. Her dried eyes were unable to tear up n throat didn't had another scream to spare. She was tainted for life.









Just a like n comment to make me happy😳
Waiting eagerly





Edited by OsheenDGr8 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats on the new story...
and am so moved by the prologue... bahut intense and heart wrenching it was...
she is nowhere at fault.. and yet she is being seen as a filth...
and the guy... he did it to prove some vengeance... and name Maan... 😲 😭

abhi iska updates mujhe jaldi chahiye...
Edited by Shruthe - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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please start would love to read it 😊
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M speechless and afraid to read this..

I dont know but my heart stopped for few second while reading the last part..

How cruel can someone be and was it Maan who did it as the other person said. And how cruel can her family be tat they are behaving like this.. Rajji i would prefer not to have a sister like her ever in any of my births..

And did Geet loose her voice..

M seriously blown out with the prologue and dont know would i be able to read it but still i cant miss your work Osheen...
Edited by sdlife19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Intrsting intrsting strt sooon Shree :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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me waitngg 😃
awee geet so sweet but maan ne kya kardiya iske sath
what will happen now 😕😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was so painful and horrific😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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poor geet maan revenge of geet brother

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